I have never considered myself a Muslim,but reading your assertation saying that anyone who gives his heart to God and submits to the Will of Him is Muslim touches me. I have only been friends with one Muslim and this is his message also. I thank you so much for this enlightening; hope I can portray this meaning of Muslim always.
I am not a true fan of poetry, but I appreciate your verse here. Though I do not like poetry for poetry, I write a lot of songs and this simple, loving thought is what I try to do in my songs. Thanks for an uplifting thought; I lost my grandmother 15 years ago, but hardly a day goes by I don't think of something she advised me.
I loved everything about your story; the realism, conflict, climax,and surprise ending just show how we all react to everyday stress. Thanks so much for reminding me that we all supportive families.
I minister to an addict mission from time to time. I generally write and sing songs--many that the clients have written for me. If you don't mind, I would like to put some music to your poem and present it to them soon. I will keep you up on it and try to put this on You-tube so you can see how it works. Love your words, thoughts, and message. Great Job!
As I would agree, you are really stating the obvious here. Though I am a Christian, I can see where it is difficult for people to accept any message as being of God. My son is a prime example; no matter how much I tell him and tell him, he is very much against trusting this God. I can only hope that what I show him will speak much louder than my words. You have written a truthful definition of the world today. Keep on writing and thinking about what you write and I will add you to my prayer list. Thanks for a reminder of how hard it is to reach young people today.
Excellent piece that speaks to problems that we all see each day. Preparation, planning, and options were never considered here. Randolph tried to explain but did not speak up his reasons. We must all shoulder the blame for what ever is wrong. Thanks,
by the way, don't forget to include your closing quotation mark.
The poetic flow is beautiful; the message is one of concern to all Christians, but your attributing this to the Lord above rather than the Liar below takes all the excitement out for me. Other than that--excellent, timely work.
I thoroughly enjoyed your poem; how many of us could really understand the Word that we love if we would put it in our own words. He came as one, and we could probably understand Him much better is we would put His message in our own words. Thanks for an excellent portrayal. Even with uneven syllables you maintained a rhyme and beautiful prose.
Excellent twist in your story; hard to distinquish who is the real culprit, huh? Great job. Look forward to reading more of your work.Great narration and plot. Suspenceful all through.
You have written an excellent story with a lot of good narration and great plot. The main problem I see is your paragraph structure. Also, once or twice you changed the tense on your verb within a paragraph. A closer attention to the actual grammar is the only thing keeping your story from being excellent. Good job!
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