Beautiful idea, starts out nicely. I don't get all the emotions: disdain, resentment, shutting down.
I like the whole rollling down and gravity idea. If trapped emotions are freed, there must be more goodness released then just those lingering negative emotions. I like to have a couple of drinks and watch a really good movie and have a good cry. Just my personal preference, though, the idea to explore emotional release without complicating emotions, don't mean to impose my meaning on yours.
Well done. I like how it develops from the broad, natural setting down to a teardrop and resolution to the problem of John shutting himself off from the world, against her advice.
I like out of the corner of his eye, for some reason don't like the imaginary hand.
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