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Review of Ode to socks  
Review by Remember Me
Rated: 13+ | N/A (Unratable.)
When I was little, I used to hate socks so much. It was something about the seems right by my toes, I think. I used to run into my house at the end of the school day and pull off my socks as if they were giant insects sucking my blood. I would throw them int he laundry in truimph and remain happily barefooted for the rest of the day.
Now, I love socks. But only fun socks. I like socks with patterns on them, thin socks that keep your feet cooler than the thick ones you wear in the winter. I often fold my socks at the top as if they were bobby socks with ribbons on them, although they are in fact not. I also love slipper socks, particularly of the fuzzy variety.

But enough about socks. About your writing.

Very good - but what is the point? Not to be rude, and don't take it the wrong way, but you want to be considering your audience when you write - who do you want to read this and what reactions do you want to evoke in them? You have to have a reason for writing what you do.
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