NineSpeed's (ninespeed) Reviews

NineSpeed

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30 Public Reviews Given

172 Total Reviews Given

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#2795524

Review of The Shroud of My Existence

Review by NineSpeed

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Excellent word usage, beautiful and heartfelt topic. no spelling errors. My only problem with the peace is that I felt some of the lines ran a little long without a break. A littler closer look at punctuation should fix the problem.
Otherwise, I found this piece to be outstanding. I see excellent writting skill, A beautiful heart and soul, and intelligent thought. Keep up the excellent work, I look forward to reading more.

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#2782659

Review of Memorial Day - Thank You

Review by NineSpeed

Rated: E

| (4.5)

excellently written, A strong heart felt peace. thank you for your words and vision and support of our fallen hero's. I took your advice on the poem I wrote " The Forgotten" and went back and changed that line. it was too harsh, If you would like to ge back and re-read it I would apprieciate your feed back. Thankyou again for your fine work.

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#2291608

Review of Standing

Review by NineSpeed

Rated: ASR

| (4.5)

Excellent poem and message, This a message for mankind as a whole. I only wished more people would get it I only noted one mistake,
line 2 needs the word "the" or some varient
otherwise the poem is perfect

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#2289881

Review of The False Poet

Review by NineSpeed

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Wow! very powerful, No need for anythin keep up the great work

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#2289826

Review of Cloak of my Dreams

Review by NineSpeed

Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

excelent poem I love the message and form keep up the great work.

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#2284594

Review of poem: fluttering dreams

Review by NineSpeed

Rated: E

| (4.0)

I liked your poem very much, anthing sci-fi or magical, mystical, or fantasy peaks my fancy. great work

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#2281196

Review of God Forgive Me

Review by NineSpeed

Rated: 18+

| (5.0)

WOW!!!! very powerful, And very correct, I myself was assulted at a very young age, And to this day I feel that anger and hatred. very well done And may God grant you and your daughter peace.

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#2281126

Review of In The Hour of Still

Review by NineSpeed

Rated: E

| (4.0)

Wow! very powerful, I think you have done very well here even though the subject is a little disturbing, It was well written, good word usage, a little shaky an rythem. but overy all great job

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#2263393

Review of Big Brother

Review by NineSpeed

Rated: 13+

| (3.5)

welcome to the new world order! it is just a matter of time before that becomes a reality. and the sad part is so many people are either to stupid to see it comming or so caught up in their pathetic lives that they don't have the time to see it. I pitty our race