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Review of Purple  
Review by PrincessThai
Rated: E | (3.0)
Cute poem. It makes me think of Alice in Wonderland and Willy Wonka. I get you love purple. Yet you are unable to endure blue. But without it you could not have the beautiful shade purple. lol You have nice flow with rhyming your words.
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Review of Scars  
Review by PrincessThai
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
It's amazing how loyal children are to their parents. It kind of reminds me when a puppy gets beat over and over again. Yet, it still wants its masters love.
Yes, if the children didn't grow up to be like their father, they have a good chance of understanding what forgiveness truly means.
I can say for me. it took me a very long time to forgive my parents for the things that happened in my life. Forgiveness is truly a blessing once you understand what it can do for your scars.
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Review of Kaleidoscope  
Review by PrincessThai
Rated: E | (3.5)
Kaleidoscope is a great title for your poem. It makes me think of the time I'd sit under all those colors nature provides for us.
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Review by PrincessThai
Rated: E | (3.5)
Nicely written. The words and rhymes have a nice flow.
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Review by PrincessThai
Rated: E | (4.0)
I really enjoyed reading this story.
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Review of A Profound Place  
Review by PrincessThai
Rated: E | (4.0)
Interesting read. The details in your story helped me be there for just a little bit.
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Review by PrincessThai
Rated: E | (4.0)
I did listen as I read. You're a very deep thinker. Well written.
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Review of Free  
Review by PrincessThai
Rated: E | (3.5)
Nice flow with your words. Self-reflection in prose.
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Review by PrincessThai
Rated: 18+ | (3.0)
It's like you've heard this story before, but each one is slightly different. I had to keep reading to see what would happen. Thank you for the story.
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Review of Madlibs  
Review by PrincessThai
Rated: E | (4.0)
It's been a while since I enjoyed a good Madlib. Creating them sounds even more fun. This is very helpful for those who want to create their own. Thank you for this.
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Review by PrincessThai
Rated: E | (3.0)
Music can be healing.
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Review of Some days  
Review by PrincessThai
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
This hit home for me, personally. Nicely written.
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Review by PrincessThai
Rated: E | (4.0)
This seems like lots of fun. I'm not sure if I'm doing this right. But... I guess I'll follow suit.
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Review of Katherine  
Review by PrincessThai
Rated: E | (3.5)
Katherine is also lucky it would seem to call you a friend, as well. A very sweet and warm friendship you two have. Nicely written.
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Review of Jeremy's Debut  
Review by PrincessThai
Rated: E | (3.5)
Nicely written. Cute story.
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Review of Trust  
Review by PrincessThai
Rated: E | (2.0)
I'm curious. HECK - acronym for something. Yes?
You mentioned it was bad and kind of weird. I've been there... (not liking my work) the more you write the more you'll start to like your work. I think the most important thing you could do for yourself is to fix what you don't like about it. So, you can prepare yourself for constructive criticism.
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Review of Watch for Morning  
Review by PrincessThai
Rated: E | (3.0)
Very interesting. Of course, it makes me want to read more about what next time will bring.
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Review of The Unsaid  
Review by PrincessThai
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
I've been there. You have written it out perfectly...
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Review by PrincessThai
Rated: E | (3.5)
You captured your feelings in your written words. I can feel the sadness you hold inside.
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