I'm sooooooo glad that I clicked on this one! I'm going to bookmark it, so I can go back over it! This is a very wonderful, useful tool guide for all newbies, such as me! And believe me, I'm greener than a gourd still, around this candy store! I love it, am truly addicted!!!!!!!!! THANX!!!!!!!!!!!!
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That EAN seems to be one peach, now! It's so apperent how ERIN sooooo wants to stay away from his evil clutches, but cannot bring herself to do it. And involving the child, makes things ten million times worse. I have friends just like her, I mean, in her situation. It makes me want to barf! Man, you have hooked me with these stories!
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I'm still floating around, checking out this crazy prince situation. Again, the poem, seems to have been written by an actually intelligent evil one, if I may say it that way. This is one roller coaster story! The more you read, the more you WANT to know!!!!!!!
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Again, I am enthralled with this weird story. It's so cool how the poem is unfolded into different layers. This stuff is sooo deep! I'm trying and trying to wrap my mind around it. It's like reading the Bible, and unlocking all of it's millions of sacred secrets. HMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM
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This sounds like one heck of a cool tale! I shall have to for sure make time to read more of it! Just by this intro alone, a spark of interest has already been ignited. Imagery and the vocabulary in the intro is alone enough to get the imagineical wheels turning in ones head. I LIKE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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This is a great write! Very stimulating read you have penned here! I truly adore the characters. You have great describing and story telling abilities. I think this one is well worth the read. The reader imagines that they are right there in the middle of the story!!!!!!!!! AWESOME!!!!!!!!!
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WOW, What an adventure! I'm soooo glad you are here today to write about it! GOD was sure watching out for you on that day. I love the way you have described every minute detail, from start to finish. And you for sure, hit the prompt smack dead on the head! I think you have inspired myself to pen about being bitten four times by the brown recluse spider. I tend to read more poetry, but after reading this little gem I may start trying to pen some short stories! You did excellent with everything on this magnifecent piece.
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After starting reading this case, I think addiction has overtaken me! These are the type of reads that are right up my alley! I would sooooo love to be a detective. This is another interesting piece of the mysterious puzzle. I again, shall love to read more! CUDOS!!!!!!!!!
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Gives me goosebumps. I cringed as I read over this raw emotioned packed sad poem. I just now am finding out anything about this horrible story. I for some reason, feel that she may have been buried alive maybe? It's truly amazing that she left clues in her poetry, and that she especially had the frame of mind to pen down her thoughts which is exactly what I would have to have done to keep any sanity at all. I can't wait to read more!!!! LOVE IT!!!!
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I absolutely hate it that this happened to you, if this is written about you. Such raw emotion. I cannot say I know how you feel, because I don't know. What I do know, is this is one fantabulous piece of poetic penning. I love the rhyme.
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Awesome concept that developed into one mighty fine write! And such a true one! I love a raw emotioned piece. This one was a delight to read, went through it twice. You have a grand flair for penning!!! I wish you much success in all your endeavors.
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What a grand piece of penning this is! I could have written it myself, such a nice feeling to read something that soooo goes along with your own feelings. I think the write to be just brilliant. I think some on here would have conflict with it being labeled as "poetry", but not me. I love how you presented your feelings! YOU GO!!!!!!!!!!
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One heavenly situation you have penned here! I loved it! You for sure have all the makings of a grand author. This was such a good spiritual scenario,,, the war, Gabriel,,,, the clothing, etc. Love the imagery, and great vocabulary presented in the piece. Again, I LIKE!
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Well, this is certainly an argument that goes on, sadly all over the place. I personally know seceral athiests. I am a born again Christian, so I don't have a clue what they are even thinking!As with nthe nature thing, the flood we are having here, as I type is very scary.
I comend you on penning such a fine piece here. Even though I think a lot of it is pure nonsense, not taking anything away from it's grandness! nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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WOW! WHAT AN AWESOME PENNING YOU HAVE DONE HERE! THE VOCABULARY AND IMAGE ARE JUST MIGHTY FINE! CUDOS TO YOU ON THE GRAND WORK YOU HAVE SO PATIENTLY SCHEMED UP, FOR ALL OF US AT WRITING.COM. I AM A NEWBIE, AND MAYBE YOU COULD DROP BY SOMETIME, IF YOU CAN EVER FIND ANY!LOL LOVELY PIECE!
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HEE HEEE What a fun madlib! I dearly love to do these little gems! I now have my grandaughter, TORI hooked on them! She will be here at my house later on today, so I shall return! lol One heck of a story you have created here for this grand activity!!!!!!!!!! I had such a chuckle reading it after I had inserted the words. I LIKE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Oh yeah!!!!!!!!! You GO! What an eggcelent write you have penned here. Very deep, one must read through it several times to understand. Awesome imagery, and to die for vocabulary. One thing I don't agree with, I think we need to get the hay outta there, we need to take care of our own homelees, can't even purchase their medicine, American's. Not being cruel, I just think this war is insane in the membrane. lol Sorry. You have done one grand job on this piece!
As a newbie, I am thankful to view some of the tricks of the trade. This is really helpful, I just hope I don't go insane in the membrane trying to absorb all of this! THANX!!!!!!!!!!!!
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OH YEAH!!!!! Now, I can see, I think I have found my poetic brain, insereted into yours! This is so much better type of penning that I love better than stories. Even though, it is a story. LOL That sounded stupid. Sorry, it's 8:30 am, and I have my six year old grandaughter, Tori Lynn, yakking in my ear!!
OK, enough of that! This is what I refer as free verse? It's outstanding. I have sat in sooooo many funeral procession's, due to losing so much of my family. And,I have several poems written about that. I can't wait to get some of my over 600 poems on here! I have added you as my very first favorite! I am so trying to get used to all this neat stuff to do on here. I can't get enough!! lol Well, I am off to start getting some of my poetry on here. Your work was a delight to read. I LIKE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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HEEHEEEEHEEE This cracked me up! Me and my six year old grandaughter do these all the time. She is soooo funny at these. I also love Charlie Daniels, have saw him three times in concert, and even got his autograph at a wal mart in Carbondale, Ill. He gets down now!!!!!!!! Fun madlib! I will be back for more!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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NICE!!!!!! I love the cool imagery and grand vocabulary you have used to pen this awesome piece of poetic royalty, for all of us at writing.com to enjoy. I THINK IT IS JUST ADORABLE!!!!!!!!!
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Ooops! So sorry, for I am a newbie, crossword fanatic, and I am so sorry I clicked on your most awesome Harry Potter quiz, and don't know the first word about him, or the book, or the movie. I shall promise to try to read up on the subject, and click back onto the puzzle. Don't hate me, lol
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NICE! I do like the penning, but as an avid rhymer, I do feel some uneven rhyming. This is just my opinion, not suggesting that you change anything at all. The concept of the write is simple, and straight to the point.
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