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Review by prosaic
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Hi Triple Entente,

Enjoyed reading your short story. Contains good prose. You mention a few times that the events happening to the woman doesn't matter. I would want to know why it doesn't matter. Other than that it's good and contains a fair amount of mystery.

Feel free to give a critique on my work Analogy of LIfe.

Regards,

Proseman
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Review by prosaic
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Your writing was descriptive, creating intrigue and tension well.
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