Hello Amjjetton,
I just finished reading your piece of LONGING FOR YOU. It was a good read. There were picures to be seen within this piece. How you wanted to be there for the other person. How much you had changed from what you were. I think it is all good. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Ashley,
Another good promotional piece. I just finished reading your piece of MUSIC PROMO. It was a longer piece but a good one. You must be a radio announcer or something similar to. Yuo have the lingo down pat. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Writer @ Heart,
We meet again. I loved your piece of I PURR. it is a sensual piece that is made for mature individuals to read. There was alot of sex going on at the time. It was a wonderful piece. No wonder you were hot. I could just imagine. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello A.M. Wade,
I just finished reading your piece of LOST. It was a sad but good read. There were pictures to be seen within the piece. You have done an excellent job. i didn't find any mistakes in the whole piece. One of the pictures I saw was the anchor drifting onto the sea floor. to quote you. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Sublime,
I just finished reading your piece of THE OTHER SIDE. It was a beautiful piece. It was a good read. There were pictures to be seen within the piece. You did a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Stifled Dreamer,
I loved your piece of WHAT MAKES A TRUE FRIEND? I couldn't agree more with you. A true friend is one that will stick close by you. There is a difference in the friends a person has to begin. The ex-best friend wasn't really a friend at all. I don't believe. Had she been a true friend she wouldnt' have done what she did. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Writer @ Heart,
I agree with you 100%. It is sad that we people judge others by the skin color and the religion that they choose to follow. It is hard to discern from the good and bad things most of the time. For there isn't any constant . I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Ashley,
What a piece! My first time of reviewing a radio announcement. I kind of like the idea. you did a good job with this piece. It is amazing that you thought this up in your head. Not that that is amazing but it was fun to read. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello highascarlet,
I just finished reading your piece of WHAT AM I. It was a good read and a read that I enjoyed. One could see the person in the river and the other t hings that went on. It was a picture or two in the piece that was beautiful. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello J. R. Dawesse,
I just finished reading your piece of SHE WILL WAIT. It was a good read. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. you have done an excellent job. it was about her waiting and waiting. To do something that she wanted to do and she waited to do that. I got that from the piece and hope that I am right. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello J.E. Randal,
I just finished reading your piece of SARAH. It was a great read. I am inspired to continue my dream of having a book of poetry from the work I have put into it. Sarah was something ellse. No wonder she had the drive to write after reading like she did. I hope this finds youwell. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Writer @ Heart,
I just finished reading your piece of ALONE ...LOST AND CONFUSED. It was a sad but good read. there is so much that happens in a person's life that they are alone some of the time. it is then that the wheels start to turn in one direction while being pulled in another. You did a great job with this piece. It is sad though. I hope that this finds you well,. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello shine,
This is a thought provoking piece. I just finished reading your piece of WITHINTHE MAN. It was a good read. The man is troubled it seems like and there is no one that can descern from the real man inside or the outside. I hope I am right in this assumption. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello E.E.G.,
I just finished reading your piece of ODE TO SATURDAY MORNING. It was beautiful. it was a good read. There are many things a person can do on a Saturday morning or any morning for that matter. It is good to be in bed for a time and relax. You made it so clear within your piece that you like that. One was beggiing you to stay put and the other was driving you outside to face the day. I think it is wonderful that you wrote this piece. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello four seasons,
I just finished reading your piece of SIGNS OF MY SON SLIPPING OUT OF HAPPINESS. It was a good and important read. I am not a parent but know that a parent has to go through some changes with their young. It is so overwhelmng at times for a person with depression to cope. I do wish you all the best and your son. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello leighbee,
i just finished reading your piece of BREATH. It was a good piece. it would have been better received if it were in the form of a poem. But the message was clear enough. That is startling to read that ever birth that there has to be ten thousand deaths. WOW !! That is something else. i hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!{image;1644262}.
Hello Silly Girl,
I just finished reading your poem/song and it was a good read. It read more like a poem instead of a song. There were no chorus and no bridge and the verses were too long. But it works great as a poem. I hope that this will help you in the future to write a song and or another poem. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!!.
Hello Christine Marie,
I just finished reading your piece of SO BAD. It was a good read. For a time there I was thinking that it was two guys talking not a girl and a guy. Anyway, the sentiment was there for them to be lovers and cared for the other. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Emk,
i just finished reading your piece of IF YOU STILL LOVE ME. It was a sad piece but a good read. There was so much turmoil in this piece. The love of two people were shot down and turned into something awful. it is always sad when that happens. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Just Me,
I can't think of anything to say but that this was a good piece. i just finished reading your piece of USED. It was so sad. You were used and abused it seems like to me and that pain is with you now. There was a time when things seemed to be good times and then the bottom fell out. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello LunaliSol,
I just finished reading your piece of ECHOES. You are so right about words. They do hurt and they last a lifetime. it was like yesterday that I heard my first grade teacher telling her brother who lived next door that I needed to be in a mental institution. I wont' ever forget about that,. I hope that the pain goes away from you. I do hope that things are better now for you and all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** ..
Hello Suu,
We meet again and so soon. I just finished reading your piece of GRIEVING THE LOSS OF A LOVED ONE. It was a good read. There were many straight truths in this piece. It was better to grieve for the person but not be in self pity for the person. You have done a good ob with this piece. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Darlin Writer,
This was a good poem. You did well in making this up. It was full of pictures for one to see. The snow and the boy wanting to play in it and the other things that you could see. Then the sad part was when he wanted to go and play in the snow and come find out it was in the middle of May. I know he was out done. I would have been, too. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Emma,
Great story you have here. It was without mistakes in the whole piece. You did an excellent job. Memories are plentiful in an attic. The doll and the beat up teddy bears and the other things there made up a great memory for her. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
Hello darlinwriter,
I just finished reading your piece of TIMOTHY TALLOW HUGH. It was a good read. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. It was an excellent job. All of this in search of a shoe? Well, there are stranger things I guess than this. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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