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Review of Little Girl  
Review by The Light
Rated: E | (2.5)
Wonderful piece well constructed,I must commend your writing style.

Suggestion;
I would prefer line 6 and the last line to go thus;
'You are my world' and 'Yet you are still my girl or You still remain my girl' Write on!

Check my work;
 THE WISHES OF THE DEAD  (E)
The dead wishing to live againg. Must the dead live again?
#1847066 by The Light
"TEMPTATION"  "UNENDING HOPE" 
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Review of Darkness  
Review by The Light
Rated: E | (2.5)
Great job well done,I must commend you for you writing skill.

Suggestion:
The area I would like you to work upon is in the image and length. Otherwise a great job.

Checkout my poems
 THE WISHES OF THE DEAD  (E)
The dead wishing to live againg. Must the dead live again?
#1847066 by The Light

"TEMPTATION" 
"UNENDING HOPE" 
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Review by The Light
Rated: 13+ | (2.0)
Wonderfully,emotionally heart felt poem. It love your contructions.

Suggestion;
The area I would like you to work on is the transition and the way you landed. Otherwise great poem.

Check out my poems;
 THE WISHES OF THE DEAD  (E)
The dead wishing to live againg. Must the dead live again?
#1847066 by The Light
,"TEMPTATION"  and others.
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Review of short story  
Review by The Light
Rated: E | (2.0)
That was a good job. It was concise brief and straight to the point.

Suggestion:
I would like you to try your best possible to work on the length. Other a great piece. Keep it up.
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Review of Dead  
Review by The Light
Rated: E | (2.0)
That was a nice work. I cherish you writing style and transition.

Suggestion:
The area I would like you to make corrections is
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Review of LOVE LINES  
Review by The Light
Rated: E | (3.0)
That was wonderful,I love your writing skill. It was short and the message was passed.

Suggestion:
The area you need to work on is the transitions otherwise great job.
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