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Review of What My Eyes See  
Review by WriterRick
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Rated: E | (5.0)
"What My Eyes See" is a brief yet evocative poem that transports readers into a mysterious forest setting where the speaker encounters a buffalo head perched high in a tree. The simplicity of the language adds to the charm of the poem, making it accessible and engaging for readers of all ages.

The poem's strength lies in its ability to evoke a sense of wonder and curiosity. The speaker's uncertainty about the buffalo head's existence adds an element of intrigue, inviting readers to contemplate the nature of reality and perception. This theme is reinforced by the poem's closing lines, which express a preference for trusting one's own senses over dismissing them as illusions.

Despite its brevity, "What My Eyes See" leaves a lasting impression thanks to its vivid imagery and thought-provoking subject matter. It encourages readers to embrace the magic and mystery of the natural world while also acknowledging the limitations of human perception.

Overall, "What My Eyes See" is a delightful poem that celebrates the beauty of the imagination and the importance of trusting one's instincts. It is sure to resonate with readers who appreciate the simple joys of storytelling and the wonder of the world around them.

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Review of I Want You 2  
Review by WriterRick
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem has a reflective and introspective tone, capturing the essence of a moment in time. The imagery is vivid, painting a picture of nature's beauty with phrases like "yellow trees," "green fawn," and "sunny pond." The mention of the swan and the rippling water adds a sense of tranquility to the scene.

The poem takes a poignant turn with the mention of the speaker's daughter and the longing expressed in the line "I can see no love with my daughter." This evokes a sense of sadness and unresolved emotions within the speaker, which adds depth to the piece.

The theme of longing and reflection continues as the speaker contemplates life's uncertainties and the desire to feel wanted. The imagery of the storm on the other side and the feeling of being in a daze effectively conveys the speaker's internal turmoil and sense of existential questioning.

The poem ends with a contemplation on the nature of life and the passage of time, with the speaker pondering whether it's time to take a last stride or to reach out one last time. This existential reflection is echoed in the imagery of summer's kiss and memories spinning like leaves on trees.

Overall, the poem effectively captures a moment of introspection and contemplation, with vivid imagery and poignant emotions that resonate with the reader. The exploration of themes such as longing, love, and the passage of time adds depth to the piece, making it a compelling and thought-provoking read.

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Review by WriterRick
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Rated: E | (5.0)
"On the Way to Blimpie’s" is a brief but engaging narrative that takes the reader on a lunch break journey with the protagonist, Joan, and her co-worker, Sonia. The story effectively builds tension through dialogue and reveals character traits through actions and conversation.

The setting is vividly described as Joan and Sonia navigate the streets in search of Blimpie’s. The sense of urgency is conveyed through their limited lunch break time, adding a layer of suspense to the narrative.

The dialogue between Joan and Sonia provides insight into their characters. Sonia’s admission about lying on her resume adds depth to her character, portraying her as desperate and willing to take risks to maintain her job. Joan's internal conflict about whether to reveal Sonia's deception demonstrates her moral dilemma and adds complexity to their relationship.

The introduction of Sonia's former neighborhood and her interaction with Billy, a homeless person, adds an unexpected twist to the story. It serves as a commentary on socioeconomic disparity and highlights Sonia's past struggles, further developing her character.

The resolution leaves room for interpretation as Joan and Sonia continue their journey to Blimpie’s, leaving the reader curious about the outcome of Sonia's situation and whether Joan will confront her about her lies.

Overall, "On the Way to Blimpie’s" is a well-crafted narrative that effectively combines elements of suspense, character development, and social commentary to engage the reader from beginning to end.

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Review by WriterRick
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The writing captures the rugged and demanding life of a fisherman at sea, painting a vivid picture of the environment and the challenges faced. The use of descriptive language effectively conveys the harsh conditions, from the misty rain and roaring wind to the overwhelming odor of diesel and the sights and sounds of the harbor.

The writer skillfully intertwines the protagonist's inner thoughts with external actions, providing insight into their longing for home and the comforts awaiting them there. The contrast between the beauty of the sea and beaches and the gritty reality of the fishing industry is palpable, adding depth to the narrative.

The portrayal of the protagonist's anticipation for a home-cooked meal and a cold beer, juxtaposed with the dangers and uncertainties of their profession, creates a compelling tension. The mention of the protagonist's wife waiting anxiously at home adds a personal touch and emphasizes the sacrifices made by both fishermen and their families.

Overall, the writing effectively captures the essence of life at sea, blending sensory details with introspective moments to create a rich and engaging narrative. The pacing keeps the reader invested, and the themes of hard work, perseverance, and the importance of family resonate strongly throughout the piece.

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Review by WriterRick
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Rated: E | (5.0)

"The Churchyard of Destiny" is a captivating tale that blends elements of mystery, romance, and introspection. The story follows Roger, the caretaker of a churchyard, who observes a mysterious visitor, Doctor Ed, paying regular visits to the grave of Melrose Catherine Rose Carter, MD. As Roger's interactions with Doctor Ed unfold, the narrative delves into themes of love, loss, and the passage of time.

One of the strengths of the story lies in its character development. Roger is depicted as a thoughtful and observant individual, whose encounters with Doctor Ed prompt him to reflect on his own life and memories. Doctor Ed, on the other hand, is portrayed as a complex figure, driven by his passion for science and his deep connection to the past. Through their interactions, the reader gains insight into their respective personalities and motivations.

The story also effectively utilizes the setting of the churchyard to create an atmosphere of intrigue and nostalgia. The descriptions of the gravesite, with its weathered headstones and ancient oak tree, evoke a sense of history and mystery. This setting serves as a fitting backdrop for the unfolding events of the narrative, adding depth and texture to the story.

Additionally, the story's exploration of themes such as memory, identity, and the passage of time adds depth and complexity to the narrative. Roger's struggles with conflicting memories and his eventual acceptance of his new reality serve as poignant reminders of the transient nature of life and the power of human connection.

Overall, "The Churchyard of Destiny" is a well-crafted and thought-provoking story that engages the reader with its compelling characters and evocative themes. With its blend of mystery, romance, and introspection, it offers a memorable reading experience that lingers long after the final page.

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Review of No Pity  
Review by WriterRick
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The poem you've shared has a poignant and introspective tone that explores themes of self-awareness, acceptance, and resignation. The use of metaphorical language, particularly the imagery of stench and class, adds depth to the poem's exploration of personal struggle and growth.

The opening line, "Lest I be forgotten in this strong stench," immediately grabs attention with its vivid imagery and sets the tone for the rest of the poem. The speaker's acknowledgment of their own situation and desire to communicate their experience is powerful.

Throughout the poem, there's a sense of disillusionment and weariness conveyed through phrases like "Tired and drained" and "Stinking power has faded." This feeling of fatigue is juxtaposed with moments of introspection and determination, such as when the speaker resolves to "take this into my own hands" and "let go of the hurt."

The imagery of standing on a ledge and letting oneself fall symbolizes a surrender to circumstances and a willingness to move on from past struggles. This moment of release is both cathartic and bittersweet, as the speaker reflects on their inability to succeed in the face of adversity.

The closing couplet, "So long, my fellow stinkers of the day. / I've come to find this isn't the way," encapsulates the poem's central message of acceptance and realization. It's a poignant farewell that speaks to the speaker's journey of self-discovery and acceptance of their limitations.

Overall, your poem effectively captures the complex emotions associated with personal struggle and growth. The use of metaphor and imagery enhances the depth of the themes explored, resulting in a thought-provoking and evocative piece of writing.


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Review by WriterRick
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem beautifully captures the essence of nature and the interconnectedness of all living things within the garden. The repetition of "As the wind blows through my garden" creates a rhythmic flow that draws the reader into the scene. The imagery of the trees waving hello with their green fingers and the flowers bending over to smell the grass evokes a sense of intimacy and animation within the natural world.

The line "I see the soil learn to fly, Little brown specks in the air" is particularly striking, as it personifies the soil and portrays it as actively participating in the dance of the wind. This personification adds depth to the poem, highlighting the vitality and movement present in even the seemingly inert elements of the garden.

The final line, "This garden is alive," serves as a powerful conclusion, tying together the various observations and emphasizing the dynamic and vibrant nature of the garden. Overall, the poem effectively captures the beauty and liveliness of the garden through its vivid imagery and rhythmic structure.

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Review by WriterRick
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The prologue of your story sets a captivating tone, immersing readers into a scene of suspense and mystery. The vivid descriptions of the storm and the unsettling presence outside Articus's window create a strong sense of atmosphere. The dialogue between Articus and the mysterious entity outside adds an intriguing layer to the narrative, leaving readers curious about what Articus will encounter.

In Chapter One, the transition from the prologue is smooth, and the action-packed scenes of battle effectively draw readers into the story. The use of sensory details, such as the sounds of battle and the physical sensations experienced by Articus, helps to create a vivid and immersive reading experience.

The introduction of various characters and their interactions provide depth to the story, particularly in revealing Articus's relationships and the dynamics within the Vanguard. The dialogue feels natural and helps to develop the characters' personalities.

Additionally, the world-building elements, such as descriptions of the Vanguard Grounds and the societal hierarchy within the Guard, add richness to the story's setting. The incorporation of details about the different lands and the Reaper's Guild introduces intriguing elements of fantasy.

Overall, your writing effectively balances action, suspense, and character development, drawing readers into a compelling narrative. The introduction of supernatural elements adds an intriguing layer to the story, and I'm curious to see how Articus's journey unfolds as he navigates this fantastical world. Keep up the great work!

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Review of Translation  
Review by WriterRick
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem is a delightful exploration of words and imagery within the constraints of the Tyburn form. The choice of descriptive words - combine, design, divine, equine - sets a vivid scene for the reader. The poet skillfully uses these words to paint a picture of colorful dreams and creative endeavors.

The structure of the poem is well-crafted, adhering to the Tyburn form with its specific syllable count and rhyming scheme. Despite the strict structure, the poem flows smoothly and effortlessly, showcasing the poet's mastery of form and language.

The final two lines cleverly incorporate the first four lines, creating a sense of cohesion and completion. This technique adds depth to the poem and reinforces the central theme of creativity and imagination.

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Overall, "Combine, Design, Divine, Equine" is a charming piece that captures the essence of poetic exploration. The poet's playful use of language and keen attention to form make this poem a joy to read.


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Review of A STORMY NIGHT  
Review by WriterRick
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The poem "A Stormy Night" vividly captures the atmosphere and emotions surrounding a family's experience during a stormy night at sea. The imagery of flames, heat, and warmth juxtaposed with the harsh elements of the storm creates a powerful contrast, symbolizing the comfort of family against the backdrop of nature's fury.

The repetition of phrases such as "Lives have been lost and homes destroyed" and "Never turn your back on a storm" emphasizes the resilience and determination of the community in the face of adversity. This repetition also serves to reinforce the central theme of strength and solidarity in overcoming challenges.

The use of short, fragmented sentences adds to the urgency and intensity of the narrative, reflecting the tumultuous nature of the storm and the emotions it evokes. Additionally, the imagery of the storm as a metaphor for life's struggles resonates deeply, conveying a universal message of perseverance and hope in the face of adversity.

Overall, "A Stormy Night" is a poignant and evocative poem that skillfully captures the essence of resilience and unity in the face of adversity. The vivid imagery, emotive language, and recurring motifs combine to create a compelling narrative that leaves a lasting impression on the reader.

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Review of Community Service  
Review by WriterRick
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This story revolves around Joey's journey from reluctance to embrace his volunteer duties at a nursing home to uncover a disturbing truth about a fellow volunteer, Anthony, stealing medication from the residents. The narrative is engaging and filled with tension, making it a compelling read.

The character development is well-done, particularly Joey's transformation from initially resenting his volunteer role to genuinely caring for the residents. His internal struggle and eventual courage in confronting Anthony add depth to his character. On the other hand, Anthony serves as a convincing antagonist, with his manipulation and deceit driving much of the conflict.

The portrayal of the elderly residents is heartfelt, showcasing their diverse personalities and experiences. Through Joey's interactions with them, the story highlights the importance of empathy and compassion toward the elderly.

The pacing of the story is well-maintained, keeping the reader engaged from start to finish. Each scene contributes to the overall plot development and character arcs, leading to a satisfying resolution.

Including themes such as bullying, redemption, and the vulnerability of the elderly adds layers to the narrative, making it more than just a simple coming-of-age tale. It prompts reflection on societal issues and the importance of standing up for what is right.

Overall, the story effectively blends elements of drama, suspense, and moral introspection, resulting in a poignant and thought-provoking narrative. The resolution ties up loose ends satisfactorily while leaving room for the characters to continue their personal growth beyond the story's conclusion.

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Review by WriterRick
Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem beautifully captures the essence of human resilience and determination in the face of nature's elements. The imagery of towering roads, airplanes soaring through the cloudy sky, and sailing vessels cutting through ocean storms evokes a sense of awe and admiration for human ingenuity and perseverance.

The repetition of "Thunderstorms be damned" emphasizes the defiance against adversities and showcases the unwavering spirit of exploration and adventure. The poem conveys a message of courage and determination, urging readers to push past obstacles and embrace the thrill of discovery and interconnectedness in our world.

Overall, the poem effectively communicates its theme through vivid imagery and powerful language, leaving a lasting impression on the reader about the indomitable spirit of humanity.

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Review of My WdC Story  
Review by WriterRick
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Rated: E | (5.0)

It's evident from your story that Writing.com has had a profound impact on your life and creative journey. You've shared your experiences in a detailed and heartfelt manner, highlighting the transformation you've undergone since joining the community.

One aspect that stands out is how Writing.com provided you with a supportive environment to explore and develop your writing skills. From sharing your initial story to receiving feedback and support from fellow members, you've embraced the opportunities for growth and learning. The encouragement you received, especially from individuals like Jody, Joey, and others, played a significant role in boosting your confidence and motivation.

Additionally, Writing.com became a refuge from the tumultuous events in your personal life, offering you a distraction and a sense of belonging. It's remarkable how the community helped you navigate through challenging times and channel your energy into creative pursuits.

Furthermore, your involvement in contests and interactions with a diverse range of individuals have expanded your horizons and enriched your writing experience. You've learned valuable lessons about objectivity in reviewing, setting boundaries, and embracing new storytelling techniques.

Your dedication to becoming a valued member of Writing.com shines through your commitment to long-term engagement and contributing meaningfully to the community. Despite the ups and downs, you remain focused on your goals, including winning an Official WdC Contest, and continue to appreciate the diverse and inclusive nature of the community.

In conclusion, your journey on Writing.com is a testament to the transformative power of creative expression and the importance of finding a supportive community to nurture your passions. Your story is not only a reflection of your personal growth but also a tribute to the connections and experiences that shape our creative endeavors. Keep writing and inspiring others with your journey!

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Review by WriterRick
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Rated: E | (5.0)
"Bless This Firetruck" by Jim Dorrell is a heartfelt and touching poem that offers a prayer for the safety and well-being of firefighters and their families. The poem captures the essence of gratitude and respect for those who put their lives on the line to protect others.

The language used in the poem is simple yet powerful, effectively conveying the emotions of the speaker. The repetition of the phrase "Bless this firetruck" emphasizes the central theme of the poem, which is the invocation of blessings and protection for the firefighters and their equipment.

The poem also acknowledges the sacrifices made by firefighters and their families, expressing a desire for their safety and peace of mind. It highlights the importance of support and comfort during challenging times, acknowledging the stress and pressure that firefighters may face in their line of duty.

Overall, "Bless This Firetruck" is a poignant and thought-provoking poem that serves as a tribute to the bravery and dedication of firefighters. It resonates with readers on an emotional level and leaves them with a sense of gratitude for the selfless service of these individuals.



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Review of Love Lines:5  
Review by WriterRick
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Rated: E | (5.0)

"Lovers" is a poignant piece that captures the essence of broken promises in the aftermath of a relationship. The brevity of the poem adds to its impact, conveying a sense of raw emotion in just a few words. The imagery of promises shattered like delicate glass in the morning light evokes a powerful sense of loss and disillusionment. The use of "morning" as the backdrop for this emotional upheaval is particularly effective, symbolizing the harsh reality that inevitably follows the end of love. Overall, "Lovers" is a beautifully crafted exploration of heartbreak and the fragility of human connections.

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Review by WriterRick
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Rated: E | (5.0)

This poem captures a moment of innocence and helpfulness in a young child's life. The narrator, described as a "helpful lad, bright at four," is eager to assist and listens intently to what others say. The repetition of "I always want to help" emphasizes the narrator's genuine desire to be of assistance.

The cautionary advice, "Be careful what you tell me," suggests that the child takes words to heart and acts upon them earnestly. This innocence is portrayed when the child overhears someone expressing dissatisfaction with the flowers and promptly takes action, presumably removing them.

The abrupt ending, with the word "Gone!" evokes a sense of suddenness, leaving the reader to interpret the consequences of the child's actions. It leaves an open-ended feeling, prompting reflection on the unintended outcomes of good intentions.

Overall, the poem effectively conveys the sincerity and eagerness of the young narrator to be helpful, while also hinting at the potential consequences of their actions, highlighting the complexities of human interactions and the innocence of childhood.

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Review by WriterRick
Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem seems to offer advice on the dynamics of teamwork and communication in the workplace. The rhyming structure and simple language make it accessible and easy to follow. The message emphasizes the importance of balancing enthusiasm and relaxation at work, suggesting that while it's great to be eager and talented, it's also crucial to take breaks and not overextend oneself.

The poem highlights the value of effective communication, praising the ability to express oneself in a colorful and engaging manner. It suggests that this skill can lead to innovative solutions and positive outcomes. However, the poem also cautions against relying solely on individual talents and encourages collaboration and input from others. This is depicted by the line "But know you truly benefit from other people's heads," indicating that teamwork and sharing ideas are essential for success.

Additionally, the poem touches on the significance of mutual respect and support within a team. It suggests that validating each other's contributions and perspectives is important for maintaining a harmonious work environment. The phrase "Simply work to validate each other in your workplace" emphasizes the need for positive reinforcement and encouragement among colleagues.

Overall, the poem delivers a thoughtful message about the importance of balance, communication, collaboration, and mutual respect in the workplace. Its simple language and rhyming structure make it an engaging and memorable piece that effectively conveys its themes.

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Review of Humanity  
Review by WriterRick
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem reflects on the loss of humanity in a world consumed by materialism and self-interest. The imagery of humans being arranged like pearls in a thread emphasizes their interconnectedness, yet the lack of empathy and compassion among them is starkly evident. The poet questions why beings with wisdom and feelings can be so cruel to one another, highlighting the paradox of human behavior.

The phrase "Nobody is feeling pain of other" poignantly captures the disconnect and apathy prevalent in society. The repetition of "ourselves and ourselves only" underscores the selfishness and lack of concern for the well-being of others.

Overall, the poem effectively conveys a sense of despair and disillusionment with the state of humanity, urging readers to reflect on their actions and strive for greater empathy and kindness towards one another. The simplicity of the language enhances the emotional impact, making it accessible and relatable to a wide audience.

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Review of Freezing Weather  
Review by WriterRick
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem captures the feeling of enduring the cold winter months with vivid imagery and a relatable tone. The repetition of phrases like "cold as heck" and "frozen days" emphasizes the speaker's frustration with the relentless chill, making it easy for readers to empathize with their experience.

The use of rhyming couplets adds a sense of rhythm to the poem, enhancing its flow and making it enjoyable to read aloud. The contrast between the harsh winter weather and the anticipation of warmer seasons creates a hopeful undertone, reminding us that the cold will eventually give way to brighter days.

The imagery of "Mornings filled with tons of ice" and "nights that grip us in their vice" effectively conveys the intensity of the cold, while phrases like "freaks and actors" and "bleak and chilly factors" add a touch of playfulness to the poem.

Overall, "The Winter Temps Still Cold as Heck" is a relatable and well-crafted poem that effectively captures the frustration of enduring a long winter while maintaining a hopeful outlook for the warmer seasons ahead.


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Review of Gentle Hands  
Review by WriterRick
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem beautifully captures the journey from heartbreak to healing, all through the power of love and gentle hands. The imagery of crawling into a broken heart and setting a "love alarm" is both poignant and relatable, as many of us have experienced the need to protect ourselves after being hurt. The idea of sitting in darkness, unaware that loneliness could provide a door, is profound and speaks to the unexpected ways healing can come into our lives.

The entrance of the other person, who becomes a beacon of light and love, is depicted with grace. The metaphor of them opening the door wide enough to reveal true beauty is powerful, symbolizing how love can illuminate even the darkest corners of our souls. This person's gentle words and caring nature are portrayed as transformative, painting a picture of a world filled with unspoken dreams and possibilities.

The poem's conclusion, emphasizing the strength of the other person's gentle hands, is touching. It speaks to the idea that love cannot only heal but also to empower us to love again, despite past pain. Overall, "Gentle Hands" is a heartfelt exploration of love's ability to mend the broken pieces of our hearts and lead us toward hope and healing.

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Review by WriterRick
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your review of the morning TV landscape offers a comprehensive overview, highlighting the nuanced differences between various programs and their approach to news and entertainment. Here's a breakdown and some additional thoughts based on your insights:

The Morning TV Wars
GMA and Today: Your comparison underlines the ongoing rivalry between these two giants. The fluctuating ratings and the strategies both employ to capture viewers' attention showcase a dynamic battle for morning dominance.

CBS: Described as the "redheaded stepchild," CBS's approach, focusing more on hard news, sets it apart. Your point about its historical struggle to compete in the ratings war despite offering a more news-oriented format raises interesting questions about viewer preferences.

FOX: The survival of FOX, regardless of challenges, perhaps speaks to a loyal viewer base and a formula that resonates with its audience.

Morning Joe: Highlighting the talk-heavy format and Joe's dominance in conversation provides insight into the show's unique place in the morning lineup, appealing to viewers interested in detailed discussions on politics and current events.

News vs. Hype
Your distinction between news and hype is a critical one, reflecting a broader media literacy issue. The importance of discerning between impactful news and engaging but less relevant hype is a valuable skill in navigating today's media landscape. Your historical context, starting from "Three to Get Ready," illustrates the evolution of morning shows from entertainment to a mix of news and entertainment. This evolution mirrors changes in viewer expectations and the broader shift in media consumption patterns.

The Big Three's Strategies
The details about CBS's evolution and its current positioning with a focus on hard news provide a clear picture of its niche in the morning show ecosystem.

ABC's journey with GMA and its ability to occasionally surpass Today in ratings highlights the competitive nature of morning television and the impact of format innovations.

The drama surrounding personnel changes across these shows, described as "Shooting Bambi," reflects the high stakes in morning television, where changes in hosts can significantly affect viewer loyalty and ratings.

Objectivity in News
Your critique of the lack of objectivity in some programs, particularly Fox & Friends and Morning Joe, underscores the challenge viewers face in seeking unbiased news sources. The blending of opinion with news reporting in these formats complicates the audience's ability to obtain straightforward news.

The Role of Modern Technology
Finally, your observation about the impact of the internet, tablets, and cellphones on news consumption is poignant. The shift towards digital platforms for news before traditional morning TV programs suggests a transformation in how news is consumed and valued. Your closing question about what viewers take with their morning coffee—news or hype, reporting or personality—encapsulates the choices facing today's media consumers.

Overall, your review paints a detailed picture of the current state of morning TV, emphasizing the blend of news, entertainment, and personality that defines these programs. It also prompts readers to reflect on their own preferences and the broader implications of these choices on public discourse and media literacy.

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Review of Tabula Rasa  
Review by WriterRick
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Rated: E | (5.0)
"Tabula Rasa" is a beautiful and evocative piece that captures the quintessential struggle and eventual breakthrough of a writer facing the daunting white screen. This poem eloquently mirrors the internal conflict many writers experience - the tension between the advice often given to "just write" and the inherent human need to think, to rationalize, to make sense of what we are about to put down on paper.

The poem starts with a vivid description of the writer's mind as "blank as the bright white screen," a metaphor that perfectly encapsulates the feeling of starting from nothing, the tabula rasa, which also cleverly serves as the title. The cursor, blinking "in rhythm with my heart," becomes more than just a mark on the screen; it symbolizes the writer's heartbeat, their life force, their anxiety, and anticipation.

The form and structure of the poem, with its shifting indentations, visually represent the ebb and flow of the writer's thoughts and the process of giving in to the writing process itself. This stylistic choice enhances the reader's experience, drawing them deeper into the writer's mind.

The repetition of "Just write" serves as a mantra, echoing the advice given by many to overcome writer's block by letting the words flow freely without overthinking. Yet, the poem delves deeper into the complexity of this advice, questioning how one can write without thinking, highlighting the paradoxical nature of the creative process.

The turning point comes when the writer decides to "give in" and "clear [their] mind," leading to a burst of creativity that is both surprising and liberating. The "clicking sound" of the keys becomes a comforting presence, a tangible reminder of the physical act of writing, grounding the writer as they watch the words "appear in a blur before [their] eyes."

"Tabula Rasa" is not just a poem about writing; it is a reflection on the creative process itself, the struggle between thought and action, and the magical moment when surrendering to the process leads to unexpected results. It's a reminder that sometimes, to truly create, we must let go of the need to control every aspect of the creation.

This poem speaks to anyone who has ever faced a blank page, offering both solace and inspiration. It suggests that within the act of surrender, there is the potential for profound creativity, and that perhaps, the cursor that beats in rhythm with our hearts is not just marking time, but leading us towards discovery

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Review of Family Matters  
Review by WriterRick
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Rated: E | (5.0)
"Family Matters" is a poignant and intricate exploration of familial bonds, generational conflicts, and the complexities of inheritance and legacy. The narrative unfolds with the patriarch of the family, Mr. Gangadhar, falling seriously ill, which acts as a catalyst for revealing the true nature of familial relationships and individual characters.

The story is rich in its portrayal of family dynamics, depicting how the anticipation of inheritance can sometimes overshadow the genuine care and concern for a loved one's well-being. The characters are well-crafted, each representing different facets of human nature—from the compassionate and duty-bound daughters and the caring yet conflicted sons, to the strong-willed matriarch holding the family together in times of crisis.

The setting plays a crucial role, with the transformation of Mr. Gangadhar's home from a modest house to a valuable property mirroring the shifts within the family itself. The narrative skillfully navigates through the themes of greed, loyalty, and the pursuit of fairness, all while questioning societal norms and expectations regarding gender and inheritance.

The dialogue is effective in forwarding the plot and revealing character motivations, particularly in moments of conflict over the will. The internal struggles of the characters, especially the sons' grappling with their entitlement and the daughters' acceptance of their unexpected inheritance, add depth to the narrative.

However, the story occasionally feels weighed down by exposition, particularly in the initial setup and the detailed descriptions of the family's financial situation. Tightening these sections could enhance the pacing and allow the emotional and thematic core of the story to shine more brightly.

The resolution, where the will's contents challenge traditional norms and expectations, is both satisfying and thought-provoking. It not only underscores Mr. Gangadhar's values but also serves as a commentary on the evolving but still present gender biases in society.

Overall, "Family Matters" is a compelling narrative that deftly explores the complexities of family life and the enduring quest for equality and justice within the familial and societal context. With a few adjustments for pacing and emphasis on the emotional stakes, this story could resonate even more powerfully with its readers.



WriterRick (WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group)


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Review of The Guide  
Review by WriterRick
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)

"The Guide" beautifully captures the tranquility and introspection found in the midst of nature. The imagery of gliding across the Upper Togue on a warm, windless day evokes a sense of serenity and connection to the natural world. The repetition of "back... and forth" not only mirrors the rhythmic motion of paddling but also reflects the cyclical nature of life and decision-making.

The contrast between the narrator's upbringing in the urban hustle and bustle and their current peaceful existence on the water is striking. It speaks to the longing many feel for a simpler, less stressful way of life. The decision to embrace a slower pace and prioritize personal contentment over societal expectations is a powerful message woven throughout the narrative.

The metaphor of fishing for "sweet samples of the fish that gave this tract her name" adds depth to the story, symbolizing the pursuit of fulfillment and meaning in life. While others may seek success and validation through external achievements, the narrator finds satisfaction in the simplicity of their own path.

The painting by Winslow Homer, "Two Men in a Canoe," referenced at the end, further enhances the imagery of the narrative and reinforces the theme of companionship and solitude found in nature.

Overall, "The Guide" is a poignant reflection on the importance of embracing one's own journey, finding solace in nature, and living authentically in pursuit of inner peace and fulfillment.


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Review of Remember Best  
Review by WriterRick
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem by Jay O’Toole, crafted with a reflective and solemn tone, delves into the profound respect and remembrance for those who have sacrificed their lives in service. It opens with an acknowledgment of the men and women who have died, emphasizing that honor is duly given to their great and worthy names. This sets a foundation of reverence that permeates the entire piece.

The poem progresses to consider the impact of these losses on families, highlighting the personal voids left by fathers, brothers, and women. This shift from a collective to an individual perspective adds depth, illustrating the widespread and deeply personal nature of loss due to conflict.

O’Toole then transitions into contemplating the ways in which society can express gratitude towards these sacrifices, recognizing the enormity of the debt owed for the cost of freedom. The acknowledgment of this cost as a 'daily borne' responsibility suggests a continuous, living process of remembrance and appreciation.

The poet articulates a common struggle with the fairness of such sacrifices, voicing a sentiment felt by many who have lost loved ones. This is further explored through the idea that the true value of these sacrifices transcends earthly recognition, suggesting a spiritual or cosmic appreciation for the fallen.

Critically, the poem addresses attitudes towards memorialization, contrasting those who deeply value it with those who may not fully grasp its significance. This dichotomy serves to remind the reader of the importance of conscious reflection and the role of individual perspectives in collective memory.

The poem concludes with a call to divine blessing for the deceased and a prayer for wisdom and moral guidance for the living. It appeals for a return to foundational values and truths, urging America to rediscover and live by the principles that those who were lost fought to protect.

O’Toole's work is a poignant reminder of the cost of freedom and the enduring need to honor and remember those who have paid the ultimate price. It combines a deep respect for the fallen with a hopeful vision for the future, grounded in wisdom, morality, and truth. This poem serves not only as a memorial but as a call to reflection, gratitude, and a recommitment to the values for which many have sacrificed.

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