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Review of Don't Blame Me  
Review by Eloquent Storm
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear TocalGirl,

CONGRATS!!!!, on winning my tasty treat in the Rising Star contest. I will review 2 other poems in your port as your prize.

I can see why you won the contest. This one is totally delightful. I enjoyed every line.

Thank you for allowing me to review your work.

Rose
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Review by Eloquent Storm
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear TocalGirl,

CONGRATS!!!!, on winning my tasty treat in the Rising Star contest. I will review 3 other poems in your port as your prize.

This piece was beautiful and very touching. Your gift for painting a visual with each line is wonderful.

Thank you for allowing me to review your work.

Rose
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Review of WHY NOT?!  
Review by Eloquent Storm
Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Chepe,

I enjoyed this piece. It was consistent, rhythmic and your took the reader along with you nicely.

It was well written and your expressed yourself very well. I look forward to seeing more of your work. thank you for sharing your gift. Good Work!

Never allow the ink of your heart to stop flowing!

Sincerely,
Rose


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Review of Fyndorian's Desk  
Review by Eloquent Storm
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Fyn,

I love this piece. It captures the very essence of a writer's soul. Thank you for sharing.



Never allow the ink of your heart to stop flowing!

Sincerely,
Rose


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Review by Eloquent Storm
Rated: E | (3.5)
Dear Stone,


Very interesting and well written piece. I enjoyed your flow and rhythm. thank you for the read. Good Work!


Never allow the ink of your heart to stop flowing!

Sincerely,
Rose


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Review by Eloquent Storm
Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Shrianya,



Your style is unique and you captivate your reader with your depth and expression. Thank you for sharing your gift. Good Work!


Never allow the ink of your heart to stop flowing!

Sincerely,
Rose


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Review of Getting Out  
Review by Eloquent Storm
Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Benjamin,

This is a very powerful emotional pull for the reader. You expressed yourself very well. Thank you for sharing. Good Work!

Never allow the ink of your heart to stop flowing!

Sincerely,
Rose


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Review of confused  
Review by Eloquent Storm
Rated: ASR | (3.5)
Dear jlk,


I enjoyed this piece. You have a very unique style which held my attention throughout.

Thank you for sharing, keep writing!

Never allow the ink of your heart to stop flowing!

Sincerely,
Rose


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Review of A Hymn in Green  
Review by Eloquent Storm
Rated: E | (3.5)
Dear Momomo,

I enjoyed this piece. The way you approached this topic was unique and very creative. Thank you for sharing. Good Work!!

Please, consider correcting the following error, so your writing will be read, as you intended.

Line 11 - "among" not amomg

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Sincerely,
Rose


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Review of A Secret Within  
Review by Eloquent Storm
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Dear Juliet,


This was a well written, cute and entertaining poem.I enjoyed reading the unfolding of this episode of your life. I look forward to reading more in the future. Good work and thank you for sharing.


Never allow the ink of your heart to stop flowing!


Sincerely,
Rose


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Review of Too Late  
Review by Eloquent Storm
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Dear Mona,

I enjoyed your flow, expression and style. You held me throughout and took me along your journey. Thank you for sharing, good work!

Please consider correcting the following errors, so the reader isn't distracted from what you intended.

Line 3 - "Train"
Line 8 - "terrifies"

Never allow the ink of your heart to stop flowing!

Sincerely,
Rose


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Review of Sunset  
Review by Eloquent Storm
Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Duncan,

Your style is unique and your expression and imagery is very good. You had me feeling the sunset and knowing the renewal. Thank you for sharing and keep up the good work.

Never allow the ink of your heart to stop flowing!

Sincerely,
Rose


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Review of Ecstatic Cruelty  
Review by Eloquent Storm
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Dear wld,

I enjoyed this piece. It was the first time I had experienced this style. Thank you for sharing and broadening my horizon. WELL DONE!

Never allow the ink of your heart to stop flowing!

Sincerely,
Rose


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Review of The Other Woman  
Review by Eloquent Storm
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Dear Corey,

I liked the way you struggle between right and wrong. How you take her feelings into consideration and show your integrity throughout. You expressed yourself well and your flow was smooth and held my attention. Thank you for sharing and keep writing.


Never allow the ink of your heart to stop flowing!

Sincerely,
Rose


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Review of Walk With Me  
Review by Eloquent Storm
Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear StarDust,

This piece has beautiful imagery and flow. I enjoyed your unique style and the way you held my attention throughout. Thank you for the read and keep writing.

Never allow the ink of your heart to stop flowing!

Sincerely,
Rose


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Review of Tango  
Review by Eloquent Storm
Rated: E | (3.5)
Dear Jackque,

I enjoyed your style and flow. You have a rhythm that opens the mind and slowly pulls us along. Thank you for sharing and keep writing.


Never allow the ink of your heart to stop flowing!

Sincerely,
Rose


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Review of Here I Go Again  
Review by Eloquent Storm
Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Jooker,

This was a wonderful read! I enjoyed your flow and rhythm, it led me right along. You kept my heart wanting you to find everything you need.Good work. You have a gift. thank you for sharing.

Never allow the ink of your heart to stop flowing!

Sincerely,
Rose


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Review of Weep  
Review by Eloquent Storm
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Dear Jade,

Again, another wonderful and haunting piece. You have a gift for expression, I wish it weren't filled with so much personal pain. I wish you the best, keep writing.


Never allow the ink of your heart to stop flowing!

Sincerely,
Rose


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Review of No One  
Review by Eloquent Storm
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Dear Jade,


This piece is wonderful! Your style was smooth and direct. The imagery was vivid. You held my heart and mind throughout!

Thank you for sharing! Good work!

Never allow the ink of your heart to stop flowing!

Sincerely,
Rose


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Review of Judgment Day  
Review by Eloquent Storm
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Dear Versha,


I can't even find the words for this piece. It's so well done. Thank you for sharing. Good Work!!


Never allow the ink of your heart to stop flowing!

Sincerely,
Rose


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Review of Red Roses  
Review by Eloquent Storm
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Dear Carl,

Your heartache is felt in ever verse, you took mine softly, slowly and sadly with yours.I have no words!


Never allow the ink of your heart to stop flowing!

Sincerely,
Rose


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Review of Hear Me  
Review by Eloquent Storm
Rated: E | (3.5)
Dear Melkai,


I found your poem very interesting and heartfelt. You question and answer yourself, the true balancing act of one's mind and heart. You held my attention throughout. I don't understand the parentheses. Were you "thinking", whispering.....? Good work!

Never allow the ink of your heart to stop flowing!

Sincerely,
Rose


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Review of The Miracle  
Review by Eloquent Storm
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Lucy,



All I can say is.... AMAZING WORK!

I look forward to returning and reading more.

Never allow the ink of your heart to stop flowing!

Sincerely,
Rose


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Review by Eloquent Storm
Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Witty,

I enjoyed your style very much. The imagery was great and the flow smooth. thank you for the read. Good work!


Never allow the ink of your heart to stop flowing!

Sincerely,
Rose


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Review of Queen of Swords  
Review by Eloquent Storm
Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Abvyette,

You have a very interesting style and I enjoyed it very much. I look forward to reading more of your works.

Good Read!!

Never allow the ink of your heart to stop flowing!

Rose

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