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Review of Cashiered!  
Review by Jacqueline
Rated: E | (5.0)
loved it. it made me smile
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Review by Jacqueline
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
could you please explain number one more. How do I know what my number is? Thank you Jacqueline
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Review by Jacqueline
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I enjoyed your story. your use of langue, you know the two would end up into trouble. a junkyard is full of mystery and danger.
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Review by Jacqueline
Rated: E | (5.0)
your poem have touch my heart today,as my father is in hospital. Each day is has been hard not knowing if he has improved or he has slipped back to been unresponsive. i am picking up the pieces, but other times dropping them again, like the way you've written in your poem. Turning to God's word and praying helps me get through each day.
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Review by Jacqueline
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love reading Hobbes in our Sunday paper. Your poem sums up his friendship with his tiger beautifully.
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Review of Writing Prompt 5  
Review by Jacqueline
Rated: E | (5.0)
I loved your story and looking forward to reading the next installment. I love writing.com writing prompts and written three stories, but as yet put them up here. i am not good at reviewing I have bad grammar and spelling. But your story is light and have great charters. Like Kate I don't like getting out of bed. I am interested in reading your other pieces.
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Review of Jesus Saves  
Review by Jacqueline
Rated: E | (5.0)
Amen. I loved all rewrite and you have capture God's love for us
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Review of Family Gathering  
Review by Jacqueline
Rated: E | (4.5)
What a sweet poem, I wish my poetry could rhyme like your's does
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Review of "Feathers"  
Review by Jacqueline
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
i will be waiting to read more of your story. i loved the way you describe the feathers falling like snow.
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Review by Jacqueline
Rated: E | (4.0)
Your poem reminds me of my childhood. I loved splashing in the puddles and dancing in the rain.
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Review by Jacqueline
Rated: E | (4.0)
your poem is simple but beautiful and it tough my heart, we all of mankind should take a leaf out of your poem and tell some how beautiful they are and for them to be happy.
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Review of Writer's Block  
Review by Jacqueline
Rated: E | (3.0)
I have suffer Writer's block many times and just like you I look up on the internet and found prompts and how to over come it. I printed out the prompts and made a folder for them. I have enough prompts to last me for the rest of my life. I read them every so often, but always but them back in the filing cabinet. Yes writer's block is horrible, but it will pass and your characters will come back. Best of luck.
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Review by Jacqueline
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Thank you for your help in how to write our stories. I found it very helpful. I have a habit off to must information, but our writing is a learning curve.
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Review by Jacqueline
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
thank you for the history lesson. I love history when I was at school, but my mother did not want me to study it, so I did geography. I have found your history trivia
from Jacqueline Tasik
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Review of Where to Next?  
Review by Jacqueline
Rated: E | (5.0)
I am in treed to know what the adventure has in store for the twins
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Review by Jacqueline
Rated: E | (5.0)
thank you, your letter has inspire me to leave what I can't change to God and trust him instead of trusting myself
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Review by Jacqueline
Rated: E | (4.0)
what a cute story, hoe you got good marks for it. Welcome to writing.com, hope you like it as much as me.
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Review of Cornered  
Review by Jacqueline
Rated: E | (4.0)
It would be scary to married some one you don't know. I think I like to fall in love first. Can't wait to read the next installment
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Review of In Her Memory  
Review by Jacqueline
Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)
I still miss my mum she been gone for 16 years.
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Review of Dandelion Clocks  
Review by Jacqueline
Rated: E | (5.0)
I loved blown on Dandelions when i was a girl, so long ago. I loved the way you wrote your poem, in a semi like circle.
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Review of How To Meditate  
Review by Jacqueline
Rated: E | (4.0)
I loved your poem, it is nice to meditate each day.
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Review by Jacqueline
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Thank you for sharing your story with us. Your Grandmother sounded wonderful, I would have like to me her.
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Review of Writing.Com 101  
for entry "Contact Writing.Com
Review by Jacqueline
Rated: E | (2.5)
Dear StoryMistress
I have a new email address, I have had a few major problems with my email and FB so I had to change it.
This is my new one. Jacqueline.maher2014@hotmail.com.

I have been studying full time Diploma in Community Services Monday To Friday. I have done some writing and will up load them on Saturday.


From Jacqueline Tasik
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Review of White Lace  
Review by Jacqueline
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
this is a beautiful story, it is fill with love and romance. The sadness of buying her wedding dress without her mum bought tears to me remembering my mum was there for me when i went dress shopping. I love the way you describe Trina dress. I could picture it so clearly.
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Review of Pink  
Review by Jacqueline
Rated: E | (4.0)
love your story, very sweet.
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