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I read the piece through first. I then look to see if there are spelling, grammatical, or punctuation errors. Then I tell the author how the piece affected me and what I liked /disliked about it.
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Finding spelling errors
Favorite Genres
biographical, family, personal, drama
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Sci-Fi, Horror, Erotica, Fantasy
Favorite Item Types
guestbooks, memoirs, true life stories
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Sci-fi, Erotica, Fantasy
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GC, XGC, Erotica, Sci-Fi, or Fantasy
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Review of Me and My Shadow  
Rated: E | (4.5)
I know exactly how you feel. I have a little girl named Shadow, but she's a black/white Cocker Spaniel. This is very cute and a great tribute to a loyal friend. Write On!
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is not the ending that I expected. Did he move to be with her? This is an excellent story, and I hope that you DO publish it. Anything else that you have for me to critique, let me know.
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Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Are you sure Ollie's real name isn't Ben Matlock? I hate to say this but if Sara and Ollie see each other again, I hope she slaps him. Then, maybe they can reach an understanding.
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Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
At least he's trying to make amends. I hope she reads this and they try to reconcile. Next chapter.
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Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Hopefully, between Ben and Cindy, these two will find their way back to each other. Although, Cindy is pretty upset with Ollie at the moment. Time will tell.
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Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
I know she's closing the door and burning any and all bridges. She has no other choice. A broken heart feels horrible. This is starting to reflect my life. Ouch! This may be why I'm giving personal commentary.
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Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
hell hath no fury than a woman's scorned. I know if that was me, I'd be VERY ANGRY! I don't want to be Ollie now.
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Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Distance can be a Godsend, but it can also be a hinderance. I hope they'll connect.
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Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
John Miller needs to have his backside kicked. I hope he gets his due soon. I know how Sara feels, really down in the dumps. Hopefully, she can talk to Ollie soon.
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Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Bosses are a pain in the backside. She's going to really hate him now. Talk about intrigue. I hope she's not too angry, like I am with my husband. We'll see. I almost forgot. If you are planning to publish this, there is a typo in the beginning of the chapter. The word is "apartment." You have the first "t" missing.
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Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
It looks like they're getting more comfortable with each other. It sounds like what happened with my husband and I. Unfortunately, he showed his true colors soon afterward.
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Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Her best bet would be to wait till marriage. I'll read more later. Have to go because I can't see anymore.
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Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
I read one more chapter, since my computer was scanning for viruses. I'm glad she took the news well. I hope that the rest falls into place. More later!
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Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
I feel a big slap in the face coming. This is really great! Unfortunately, It's dark, and I'll have to read on at a later date. This is the time I wish there was daylight for 24 hours.
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Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
THe suspense is KILLING ME! He'd better tell the truth and soon!
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Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Sounds like a very nice date. I just wonder what will happen when she finds out the truth.
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Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
I really thought he was going to spill the beans. The longer he holds out, the worse it'll be. Lying is never a good idea.
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Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Aren't snowstorms convienant? Sara better watch out though. Men have a tendency to paint a picture to women that they want the women to see. Then, after they reel the women in, they reveal their real self. I know I sound pessimistic about romance, but I've been there twice. Let's see what happens.
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Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
The tension is like pea soup fog at this point. I wonder what she'll do when she finds out the truth? I don't know if I'd be angry, sad, or upset. Being happy would not be on the list. He's lying to her. He'd better confess and soon!
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Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
At least they finally meet. But the tension is so thick, you can cut it with a knife. I'm surprised he didn't offer her a ride home. If it was me, I would find a taxi to get home with. Being with a strange guy wouldn't be my cup of tea.
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Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
The plot thickens. If I was Sara, I don't know if I'd let this guy be that friendly. I guess I'll have to see.
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Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
This is getting more intriguing by the minute. I'm going to take a break, but will return to the task at hand later. This is the novel you can't put down!
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Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Boy is she going to be embarrassed! But at least now he knows how she feels. I hope they can patch things up. Chaptter 9 may answer that.
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Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
I don't think she marked this public by accident. I think she wants ollie to know her better. She may be horrified to learn that others will be able to read her thoughts and feelings. On to Chapter 8.
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Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Ouch! I wouldn't want to be in this situation. I know what it means to get burned. Trying to start over is a prospect that is not appealing. I guess I'll have to read Chapter 7 to see what happens. I'm thoroughly enjoying this book.
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