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900 Public Reviews Given
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I read the piece through first. I then look to see if there are spelling, grammatical, or punctuation errors. Then I tell the author how the piece affected me and what I liked /disliked about it.
I'm good at...
Finding spelling errors
Favorite Genres
biographical, family, personal, drama
Least Favorite Genres
Sci-Fi, Horror, Erotica, Fantasy
Favorite Item Types
guestbooks, memoirs, true life stories
Least Favorite Item Types
Sci-fi, Erotica, Fantasy
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GC, XGC, Erotica, Sci-Fi, or Fantasy
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Review of SMs-The Rider  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Obviously no typos. What I liked about the image was the confidence that Sms showed on the horse. There wasn't anything I disliked. Looking at a picture like that makes me wish I could do something like that. I have a definite fear of horses. I've had this fear since I was a child. My overall impression of the image was one of a rider who knew what she was doing and a horse who did what he was told.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
It's amazing that you were able to get that close to take the poicture. There are no typos that I see. What I liked was the clear imagry of the butterfly. My son, who is 3, has a fascination with butterflies. We can't put a garden like yours at our apartment however. My overall impression of the picture is that it looks like a professional photographer took it. Great Job!


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Rated: E | (4.5)
I think having Daily Reviewing rewards is a great idea. I realize that it comes out of your pocket, but it is for a good cause. It is just too bad that gps have to be offered to get people to review others' work. If some members aren't interested in reviewing, they should not expect a review of their work from others.
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Review of The Review Mixer  
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a good idea! I saw the story on a list of emotional pieces, so I thought I'd read and rate it. Thanks for the points.
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Review of Mommy Come home  
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a wonderful letter. I ended up crying, thinking of my son. He's 3, and I hope that that never happens to him. My heart goes out to this boy.
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Review of Goodbye  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
This is very sad. I'm sure this is how my mother felt when my grandmother died in '87. I'll be giving out points probably on Monday. Keep an eye out to see how you did.
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Review of Crossing The Line  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a wonderful story Jom. So far, there are no ther entries. I hope to receive more. I'm very sorry for your losses.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I think this group is a great idea. Count me in.
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Review of Some Day  
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is so true and very profound. Great job Viv. I voted for this one by the way.
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Review of The Little Things  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
A very nice story with a twist. I loved it. I've heard of things happening that way.
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Review of Tea For One  
Rated: E | (5.0)
the imagary of this piece places the reader right with the author. It is very heart wrenching and terrifying. I've seen homeless and have feared them. This piece makes me want to help like you did.
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
i like this. Nice poem.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Pretty good. My eyes aren't that good though.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This also happens with mothers and daughters. My mother and I do not get along. I HATE HER! My relationship with my father is no better.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
I like this campfire. it makes your creative juices flow. I forgot to put in the next word. I'd like it to be: Seasons
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a beautiful story. It reminded me of when our dog, Sandy, died back in 1982. She was a cockapoo and I loved her dearly. Unfortunately, her burial wasn't as loving. My brother put her in a garbage bag and palced it in back of the garage. My father later took the bag and buried it in back of an Edison transformer. I'll never forgive him for that. I think about her daily, and now pour my heart into my newest love, Shadow. Shadow is now 3 and when she leaves this world, she will receive a proper send off.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This story was recommended to me by 4 Provinces. I like the beginning, but shouldn't the reader know more about Crystal and Erick? Their backgrounds? What made them start conversing with each other? I fully intend on reading the rest of the book.

I'm physically challenged and use a walker to get around. I'm married with a soon to be three year old son. I know what crystal is going through. But I must say thatt my father wouldn't be as accomodating as her father.
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Review of Cry's  
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a thought provoking poem. I have a friend, who passed away six years ago, who would've liked this. When I read it, it reminded me of him.
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Review of Dear mother  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Did your mother see this? I know how you feel. My mother still treats me like a baby, and I'm in my mid 40's. If you want to see my letter to her, it's in my port. Check it out. Hopefully, she'll let up and understand.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is great. I'm from Michigan in the great USA.
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Review of THE SUITORS  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I really like this campfire. Is this an updated version of Cinderella? I like being able to control someone's life, for once.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I never had the pleasure of knowing you, but good luck in life and all you hope for. You're right about family coming first.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I really love this letter. It is one that my mother should read. Unlike you, she wants to still control and dominate my life. This is even though i've been on my own for sixteen years. Your daughter is very lucky. You know what LOVE is and its meaning.
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Review of You Are Not Alone  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Thank you for this letter. I know that writing is therapy and cathartic for me. It has assisted me in getting feelings out that have been bottled up for years. You've said what I've felt. Thank you!
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Review of A letter  
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a very loving tribute to your mother. I'm sorry for your loss. I'll keep you in my prayers.



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