Fine piece of haiku . Your are really good, when it comes to expressing your imagination. You use metaphors very well. The piece of haiku, has a tragic meaning which is very well expressed, and is not overly sentimental. There is a fine balance in your poetry.
Good review...Although I dont agree with everything you have told ,You have a keen sense for analysis... One thing is that happiness can be had even without falling in love with a human being.One can love one's work.And,if one has a hard time with love he can channel it towards a
pursuit(work) which is rewarding and entertaining and makes time fly by.Though i agree that as human beings we should mingle..
Good poem ...Good use of imagination and also you use metaphors quite well. But,the title of the poem appears a bit too clinical.The word cleansing could have been replaced with a more descriptive word like Purging of the soul or something like that...But all in all a very good composition..
Brilliant pice of poetry .You express your emotions with astounding vividity .The pieci of poetry is surely touching and rewarding when the reader is concerned.You are an emotional being and that will reward you richly in your pursuit of poetic excellence. Keep up the good work...
Nice light hearted poem.You are expressive man!
The rhyme and the usage of metaphors is excellent .Although more details about the experience could have been added .You have got a fine talent for
composing poems .Nurture it .You will truly be a fine poet one day.
Your imagination certainly deserves appreciation.But your attitude towards men as ruthless,control freaks is inaccurate and absurd.
Your story does not reflect maturity.You should significantly increase your knowledge and also improve your pattern of thinking.But,this was a good effort towards becoming a fine writer.
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