Sheograth's (sheograth) Reviews

Sheograth

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#4282180

Review of Shrinking at a party

Review by Sheograth

Rated: ASR

| (4.5)

I enjoyed the concept of the story. I'm pretty partial to college-aged scenarios, so one about a party sounded pretty cool to me. And the fact that the person who shrinks is the host of the party makes things even more interesting.

And seeing that this is a fairly new story as well made it even better, because it's always nice to see new stories gain traction here.

Keep up the good work!

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#4280748

Review of Small Bargain

Review by Sheograth

Rated: 18+

| (4.5)

I'm glad that this story was able to be saved, and re-implemented into the site, because it would have been a shame if it was lost forever.

I like the idea of the main shrunken character being more durable than normal, because it allows for more fun and creativity in writing chapters.

I also like the current farther leaning towards the magic side of things, with K.Bonez adding his own set of characters. I personally liked the character Vixen with the old version of Small Bargain, where I added a few chapters with her, but now I have a better idea of her personality and character. So now I can make the chapters more faithful to the original idea of the characters.

The magic stuff makes the story more unique as well.

Keep up the great work!

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#4270771

Review of Shrunk By Your Nerdy Friend

Review by Sheograth

Rated: 18+

| (5.0)

I've always enjoyed this story.

One of the things I liked the most about this story was the variety of characters. Even though they are all 'nerdy', they were all into different kinds of things which helped differentiate them.

And I'm always appreciative of stories with characters who are out of high school, and into the college range.

And the way you set up the shrinking process allows for more possibilities and choices on where the story goes.

So keep up the great work!

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#4225832

Review of Shrunken at College

Review by Sheograth

Rated: 18+

| (4.5)

I really like the concept for this story. There can never be too many college based (or anything that's post high school) interactive.

I also liked how there was some diversity in the your cast of characters. Although I wish there were more opportunities for unaware interactions with the characters that you started with. All of their intro chapters have the character shrink the protagonist. Although people can still write in unaware scenarios as the story progresses, so it's a very minor gripe.

And it's always heartening to see the original author work so hard on adding chapters, far after their originally started the story. Too many authors just make stories and hope that the population adds to them. So good on you!