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Review of Remember When  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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*Exclaim* Thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item"  . *Bigsmile* Please remember that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize.

*Pencil* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: Some punctual errors were noticed. Examples are that the question mark following "Brothers flew" should be deleted because stanza one is based on a combination of inquiries, and commas come after "churned", "burned", and "spoke", and the question mark follow "a joke". I hope these examples have helped. *Pencil*

*Coffeer* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Coffeer*

*Butterflyr* WHAT I THOUGHT: The rhyming pattern after the first two stanzas is not the same, which threw me off. After the second stanza, only part of the others rhyme. The poem is nostalgic. sweeping readers into the past. *Butterflyr*

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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello Elizabeth . Thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item"  . *Smile* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are intended to be helpful, not critical.

*Idea* ERRORS: The rhyming pattern is off in a couple of the stanzas in comparison to all of the words rhyming in the others. *Idea*

*Exclaim* SUGGESTIONS: Other than the one mentioned above, there are none. *Exclaim*

*Note1* MY THOUGHTS: The rhythm is good overall, and the poem well written and a super read. The imagery is outstanding. I was drawn into the entry from beginning to end. My personal favorite is the stanza where sleep eludes you, yet gazing at the stars warms you. Not only is this a perfect example of fantastic imagery, but left me with a feeling of serenity. *Note1*

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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Idea* ERRORS: No grammar, spelling, or other errors spotted.

*Idea* SUGGESTIONS: Just an opinion, but being as it is used in some of the lines, I would use punctuation in them all.

*Note5* PERSONAL FAVORITES: The way you are obviously disillusioned in the beginning, but change being pessimistic in the end. It is not easy overlooking certain things in life and in people, however, trying to refrain from being bitter or holding grudges makes for unhappiness. My favorites lines are the ones about your spirit being renewed to change your outlook on things. Great poem!

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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Idea* Please remember that suggestions made are meant to help, not to be critical by any means.

*Flower1* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS:No mistakes were noticed, although having had the pleasure of reading your work before, this came as no surprise to me. *Flower1*

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*Exclaim* WHAT I THOUGHT: I don't think there's a parent here who will be unable to relate to this poem. You did a superb job of relaying how difficult it is letting go of the things our children once treasured. However, the memories never fade. You express that clearly. The poem is written from the heart, and certainly tugged at my heartstrings. *Exclaim*

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Review of Wishes  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*CakeB* HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews" *CakeP*

*Smile* Keep in mind that suggestions made are meant to help, not to criticize your work by any means.

*Questionb* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: A comma should follow "mother" and "Colleen" in paragraph one. No comma is needed after "that closet" in paragraph twelve. *Questionb*

*Writing* CHARACTERS, SETTING, AND PLOT: Patricia, Colleen, and the other characters are defined well, as are the settings. The story-line is fast paced. It does not move slowly as some do. I liked that. *Writing*

*Star* OVERALL THOUGHTS: You did a superb job of relaying how war affects families whose loved ones are serving their country. My heart went out to Colleen and the others, yet I wanted to shout HOORAY at the end of the story. *Star*

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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Rainbowl**Heart**Rainbowr* Please remember that suggestions made are intended to be helpful, not criticize your work by any means. *Smile*

*Clock* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: A space between and indentation of the paragraphs would make for a much better presentation, and an easier read. Some punctual errors were noticed. For example, a comma should follow "one more time" and there will be one less...". Another example is that a comma should follow so after perfect in the sentence "textbook perfect so...". *Clock*

*Hourglass* CHARACTERS AND STORYLINE: The characters, plot, and settings are all described well, however, naming the characters sooner would make them easier to relate to in my opinion. This I consider essential when writing a story. From the first paragraph, the imagery used in presenting settings and so forth is terrific. I think the title suits the story appropriately also. *Hourglass*

*Peace* OVERALL OPINION: I was pulled into the story from paragraph one to the final one. It was much easier relating to the characters once Paul, Florence, and the others were given names as mentioned above. I liked the introduction of the Braille teacher, Taylor. and Paul detecting the ring, skin, and so on right away despite blindness. I also liked the bond formed between Taylor and Paul. It was almost as if they had known one another long before they had actually met. Mary was an additional plus. I liked the relationship between her and Paul, and how Paul is determined to learn English again so they could become closer. *Peace*

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Review of Dream Traveling  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
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*Butterflyo* Hello turtlemoon-dohi *Smile* Keep in mind that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize in any way.

*Questionb* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No grammatical or other errors were noticed, however, the rhyming pattern is off in some of the lines. Other than that, there are no suggestions for improvement. *Questionb*

*Rainbowl**Heart**Rainbowr* OVERALL THOUGHTS: As mentioned above, the rhyming pattern is off in some of the lines of the entry. For example, only the last two sentences in the first and second stanzas rhyme, and three through eight are the only rhyming lines in the third. Still, I enjoyed reading the item. The imagery is superb, and drew me into the entry from beginning to end. *Rainbowl**Heart**Rainbowr*

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Review of e-Motion  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Vine1**Flower2**Vine2* Hello 🌕 HuntersMoon ! Thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item"  . Please keep in mind that the suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize in any way. *Smile*

*Questionb* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: Having had the pleasure of reading your work before, I was not surprised that the were no errors or suggestions for improvement. *Thumbsup*

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*Gold* WHAT I THOUGHT: Let me begin by saying the sonnet is well written. The form is used perfectly, the rhythm outstanding, and the imagery just as good. I could almost see the images on the screen commanding you to write. I liked how you followed the command and referred to the words as a graceful ballet. LOVED THE POEM! *Gold*

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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Exclaim* Thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item"  . *Bigsmile* Please remember that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize.

*Pencil* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: Having read your work before, I was not surprised that no mistakes were found and no offers could be made for improving the entry. *Pencil*

*Coffeer* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Coffeer*

*Butterflyr* WHAT I THOUGHT: The rhythm and imagery are superb. From the first stanza, her features are defined perfectly and in a way that made her easily envisioned. You were definitely bitten by a love bug. It is easy to see why you were attracted to this lovely woman. GREAT POEM! *Butterflyr*

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Review of The Collapse (1)  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Note1* ERRORS: No spelling or other mistakes were noticed, only a couple of suggestions I feel would improve the story. *Note1*

*Note3* SUGGESTIONS: "those" could be deleted from "those were" in paragraph five and still have the same effect. I think it would make for a better read. Just an opinion though. "each" could also be cut from "gasping for each breath" without taking away from the story. *Note3*

*Note2* OVERALL OPINION: The emotions of the woman are relayed well, and the settings just as well. You did a super job of leaving the end a bit mysterious as to whether she and Grief would become a couple despite her feelings at the time. I liked that. *Note2*

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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Smile* Keep in mind that suggestions made are meant to help, not to criticize your work by any means.

*Questionb* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No grammatical or other errors were noticed, and I cannot think of anything I feel would improve the poem. *Questionb*

*Writing* CHARACTERS, SETTING, AND PLOT: N/A *Writing*

*Star* OVERALL THOUGHTS: The rhythm is perfect, and so is the imagery. What I liked most is the way the feelings of the worker are expressed, fictitious or not, for I think much of it is heads on to reality. Many workers take pride in their jobs, with little or no breaks for his.her efforts. The poem is written well. *Star*

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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
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Hello turtlemoon-dohi . *Smile* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are intended to be helpful, not critical.

*Idea* ERRORS: No mistakes were noticed. *Idea*

*Exclaim* SUGGESTIONS: None I felt would improve the entry. *Exclaim*

*Note1* MY THOUGHTS: The rhythm, emotions, and imagery are great, but this did not surprise me being as I have had the pleasure of reading your work before. *Thumbsup* I could almost see the beautiful moon and beams when reading the entry. Fantastic poem! *Note1*

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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Vine1**Flower2**Vine2* Thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item"  . *Bigsmile* Please keep in mind that the suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize in any way. *Smile*

*Questionb* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: The rhyming pattern does not follow one of tradition in some stanzas/lines. For example, "driven" and "giving" do not rhyme. No spelling or other mistakes were noticed. *Questionb*

*Flower1* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Flower1*

*Gold* WHAT I THOUGHT: Other than the error/suggestion above, the poem is written well. You did a superb job of relaying how the weaknesses once felt led you to become stronger when all was said and done. I liked that, for you prove that it takes a fighting spirit to overcome defeat and depression. *Gold*

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Review of Hiding Place  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Vine1**Heart**Vine2* Thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item"  . Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize your work in any way. *Smile*

*Butterflyr* ERRORS: No spelling, grammar, or other mistakes were noticed. *Butterflyr*

*Mushroomb* SUGGESTIONS: Nothing I can think of for improvement. *Mushroomb*

*Butterflyv* MY THOUGHTS: The rhythm is good, and the imagery good also. The poem is terribly sad, yet well written. I could feel the suffering you and your mother feel, and it broke my heart. No one should be made to feel such misery. I sympathize with you. Wondering why your father instilled the suffering and why your mother stays with him despite how he makes you and her feel is relayed in a way that made my heart bleed for the both of you. I hope things change, and wish you happiness. *Butterflyv*

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Review of My Everything  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Exclaim* Thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item"  . *Bigsmile* Please remember that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize.

*Pencil* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No grammatical or other mistakes were noticed, and I cannot think of anything that would improve the entry. *Pencil*

*Coffeer* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Coffeer*

*Butterflyr* WHAT I THOUGHT: The rhyming pattern is good, and the emotions romantic and beautiful. Every sentence relays love for the woman so well that I could not help thinking how fortunate she is to be blessed with someone who cares so deeply for her. The imagery used in describing your feelings is superb. LOVELY, LOVELY, LOVELY!!!! *Butterflyr*

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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Dave . Thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item"  . *Smile* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are intended to be helpful, not critical.

*Idea* ERRORS: No mistakes were noticed, although having had the pleasure of reading your work before, I was not surprised. *Idea*

*Exclaim* SUGGESTIONS: Nothing I can think of that would improve the entry. *Exclaim*

*Note1* MY THOUGHTS: The rhythm is perfect, and so is the imagery. The combination of rhyme and repetition is superb. I could almost hear the song the crickets were singing as you made the request from your love. Every stanza expresses romance, and the last sums the poem up heads on. I think all readers share your4 sentiments about love outweighing monetary things and fame. I know I do. I enjoyed reading the entry. Keep writing these lovely poems. *Note1*

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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Don Two . Thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item"  . *Smile* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are intended to be helpful, not critical.

*Idea* ERRORS: I did not notice any errors in spelling, etc. *Idea*

*Exclaim* SUGGESTIONS: None I feel would improve the entry. *Exclaim*

*Note1* MY THOUGHTS: The imagery used in describing the settings on the stroll is magnificent. The poem is well written, and the rhythm outstanding. You made the exercise seem like a piece of Heaven. The small things noticed on the walk prove that some of the things many take for granted should be treasured instead. You painted a poetic masterpiece. *Note1*

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Review of Invasion  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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*Bird* Thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item"  .

Hello R. Walter Smith *Smile* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are meant to be helpful, not to criticize.

*Idea* ERRORS: Only one error was noticed. "concern" and "discerned" do not rhyme. *Idea*

*Reading* SUGGESTIONS: None I can think of that would improve the entry other than the one mentioned above.*Reading*

*Note3* OVERALL OPINION: The rhyming pattern is excellent, and the imagery superb from the first to the last stanza. It is easy picturing the slithering beasts who leave the slimy, gross trail behind them on artificial feet. The poem is eerie, yet well written. This would make a good story if lengthened. *Note3*

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Review of Something  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Vine1**Flower2**Vine2* Thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item"  . Please keep in mind that the suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize in any way. *Smile*

*Questionb* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No spelling, grammatical, or other errors were spotted, and there are no suggestions to offer for improvement. The poem is fabulous! *Questionb*

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*Gold* WHAT I THOUGHT: The rhythm and imagery are dynamite, and the emotions relayed in a way that touched my heart. Written from the heart, all stanzas speak of real and undying love. The entire entry is excellent, but stanzas three and four are my personal favorites, for both are perfect examples of imagery and emotion. *Gold*

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Review of The mirror image.  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Butterflyo* Hello inkwell . Thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item"  . *Smile* Keep in mind that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize in any way.

*Questionb* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No errors were noticed. The only suggestion I offer that I feel would improve the entry is more depth about what caused the reflection. For example, the causes of the brassy gaze and pretense. *Questionb*

*Rainbowl**Heart**Rainbowr* OVERALL THOUGHTS: The entry is short, yet well written, and the rhythm good. However, as mentioned above, I think the poem would be better if more depth as to the reasons causing the look and pretense were added. Just an opinion though. The poem is still good, and a super read. *Rainbowl**Heart**Rainbowr*

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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
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*Vine1**Flower2**Vine2* Thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item"  . Please keep in mind that the suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize in any way. *Smile*

*Questionb* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No spelling, grammatical, or other mistakes were spotted, and I cannot think of anything to improve the item. *Questionb*

*Flower1* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Flower1*

*Gold* WHAT I THOUGHT: The rhythm and rhyme are sensational, and the imagery just as good. It was easy picturing the elderly couple strolling hand in hand and exchanging kisses and hugs. What I liked most is that the poem is a reminder that real loves grows like you and your loved one. The entry is beautiful. *Gold*

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Review of Pillars Of Stone  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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*Pencil* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: The rhythm is off in lines three and four in the second stanza. "blurry" and "fury" do not rhyme, however, I could not offer any suggestions in replacing the words without taking away from the entry. *Pencil*

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*Butterflyr* WHAT I THOUGHT: Except for the lines mentioned above, the rhythm is right on. The imagery used to describe the darkness of sinners and cold emotions are dark, yet well written. The last two stanzas sent chills up my spine. The second stanza is heads on when relaying how much of what we hold falls away with circumstances like the ones written about, and the third so terribly sad. The thought of the individuals suffering so tore at my heartstrings. *Butterflyr*

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Review of Rainy Night  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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*Idea* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: Not an error was spotted, although this did not surprise me being as I have read your work before. *Idea*

*Thumbsup* MY LIKES: The imagery is outstanding! You painted a poetic masterpiece in relaying your work, the music, and all you did before picking up the children. I had no personal favorites. I liked the entire poem. *Thumbsup*

*Thumbsdown* MY DISLIKES: There are none. *Thumbsdown*

*Pencil* OVERALL THOUGHTS: Keep writing these wonderful poems. It was easy to see this was written from experience. I wish you the best. *Pencil*

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Review of Hourglass  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Exclaim* Thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item"  . *Bigsmile* Please remember that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize.

*Pencil* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: The rhythm is off in a couple of the lines. For example, "hourglass" and "fast" do not follow the same rhyming pattern as found in the rest of the entry. However, this did not take away from the poem, for I thought altering the item would lessen the meaning. *Pencil*

*Coffeer* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Coffeer*

*Butterflyr* WHAT I THOUGHT: Other than the suggestion made above, the rhythm is outstanding, and the emotions relayed superbly. You are right about time passing swiftly and enjoying the good times and enduring the bad. It is definitely part of experience, and part of life that implants learning and meaningful memories. I loved the shape used in writing the entry... An hourglass that says it all. *Butterflyr*

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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Vine1**Flower2**Vine2* Thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item"  . Please keep in mind that the suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize in any way. *Smile*

*Questionb* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No mistakes were noticed, and there are no suggestions for improvement. The poem is great! *Questionb*

*Flower1* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Flower1*

*Gold* WHAT I THOUGHT: The form is right on, and the imagery dynamite. You painted a masterpiece of Spring's jubilee. Every line is perfectly written. I have no personal favorites. I enjoyed the entire poem. Like you, Spring washes away the blahs of Winter for me. Keep writing these sensational poems! *Gold*

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