The imagery is splendid. The diction you chose was appropriate and fitting. The rhyme scheme was great. I particularly liked the simile you used about "lover's kisses". You created a romantic and passionate depiction of our connections to our hopes and dreams, which helped establish the tone. Brilliantly written. =)
Your rhyme scheme in this poem is great. Your word choice was fantastic (especially the "plastered smile") part. Sometimes short poems are the most effective. This poem proves that. =)
The word "rocks" adds a witty, modern spin to the poem. The analogy between writer's block and an addiction was brilliant. I interpreted the page staying "white" as the page representing cocaine. (I don't know if that was intentional or not.) You did an excellent job with this poem. =)
You used some awesome imagery in this poem. The word "Eternally" adds a nice touch to the severity of being put under the siren's spell. Overall, I liked your rhyme scheme and your diction. This is a nice poem.
This poem is so excellent. It focuses on such a basic subject, and yet, depicts a very elaborate and decorated description. You have a talent for writing in such a way that even the most simple subjects become amazingly powerful and entertaining. Excellent job.
Simply cogent. This poem proves that writers don't need to use a plethora of big words to make the poem effective and penetrating. You have a very incisive mind and thats very important for any type of writing, especially poetry. I like your writing. Keep it up. =)
Short and sweet. I like that this poem can be interpreted in many different ways. The "truths" mentioned in this poem can be anything from the truths of mankind to the truths of our limitations. (at least, thats how I interpret this.) .This is a very effective poem for one that only has 6 lines. You did a good job with this poem. =)
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