Shannon McGee's (smmcgee) Reviews

Whoaa...it took me a minute or to realize what happened at the end but I don't mean that as in a bad why. Very interesting take. I am not an editor so I did not see any errors or flaws but I liked it. Good Luck!

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#3512921

Review of Tribute to Brian Jacques

Review by Shannon McGee

Rated: ASR

| (4.5)

I have not read the series but I know that author and I am sure he would be honored by this.. Well Done! Sadly I didn't even know he passed...

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#3512913

Review of Karley's Disastrous Day

Review by Shannon McGee

Rated: E

| (3.0)

I thought it was interesting and creative in the beginning. In the middle I started to get a little lost. You could use to have some (I am not a editor) but spacing of paragraphs when something new happens. I thank you for sharing!

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#3512906

Review of Drip Drop

Review by Shannon McGee

Rated: E

| (4.5)

You had smiling as I read this Good Job! Good Luck in the contest!

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#3512700

Review of Honest to Goodness

Review by Shannon McGee

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Interesting story! It kept me reading...and wondering if it is about you or not.. I know every writer puts some truth in their tales ...but you don't have to tell you can leave it a "perfect " secret

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#3512695

Review of Mommy's Big Mirror

Review by Shannon McGee

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Awww... that is kinda sweet. I am not an expert at poetry so I don't know about editing and such but it was very sweet in a melancholy way. Thank you for sharing!

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#3512684

Review of Never Far Away

Review by Shannon McGee

Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

Your story shines through although sad but this flows very nicely and I enjoyed reading it! Thank you for sharing!

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#3512678

Review of ... tom-tom-tom ...

Review by Shannon McGee

Rated: E

| (4.5)

I am not a expert at how poetry should be written or edited but I liked this. You told a story and I think I would have understood it even with out the description. Thank you for sharing!

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#3512673

Review of Summertime

Review by Shannon McGee

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Very sweet homage to summer and the little girl. I the end doesn't flow quite right. I know the story you trying to tell but something didn't click there. Thank you for sharing...

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#3511449

Review of EARTH VOYAGE

Review by Shannon McGee

Rated: ASR

| (2.5)

I think what you have is creative but yet does not flow when I read it. It is very stiff as though a robot is the character. ..I don't know if that is what you were going for . I think I would like to see more emotion shown...but maybe that's just me.