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Review of Transformation  
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is a nice story. The author checks his looks in the mirror and finds it swollen in places. He thinks of going to the med but changes his mind. He takes off his shirt to find loose skin and rubbish coming off. His skin was turning into scales. He had turned into a gigantic deformed creature. He is shocked and has disbelief in his eyes. His head had transformed into a fish's head and he had developed gills. His breathing stops and he feels his body squeeze. His body jerks for the last time. He is perhaps dead for good. The story is exciting as it shows the wild and fantastical side to us.

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Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is nice poetry. The poet searches for a quilted vest to discover deep burrowing pockets. There is red warmth from the fire. We explore journeys by jeep and the journeys are ecstatic. Flames of scarlet with char black trees and ash white snow. The junkyard parking lots with coat racks lined up and discarded dreams with dungaree jackets. The gloves and glories are mismatched. The poet curls up in his chair with a cup of fresh coffee. The Siamese cat in him/her wants to go climb tress in the forest. The poetry has a lot of irregular elements but the idea is to show a mind and its macabre thinking.

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Review of Grave Thoughts  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)

This is good poetry. The two lovers walk through the cemeteries. They move through monuments and tombs. Tour buses move with 50 dollar tours. Lunch is at chef Paul's on Bourbon street. Bill and Mary wanted to see a piece of New Orleans. It is a floating hotel for relief workers on the Mississippi. Stops were planned in Jackson Square at the start of the carnival season. Devastated parts of cities stood in front of them. The two are visiting the cemeteries again. The poet and Monica walked hand in hand in the cemeteries. The poetry is very much descriptive of the rebuilding efforts in New Orleans after the hurricane.

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Review of Erosion  
Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is nice poetry. With every shift of the tide the shoreline changes and the rocks wears. Boulders are made into sands. A seagull soars high in the sky. The tidal pools were explored once. The sands of time sift through time. The shifting of the tide steals pieces of one's brilliant mind. The minds are left scattered behind you as you walk. The mind is left behind like scattered seashells. The tides will one day wash the beach with the other person beyond the poet's reach. The poet would walk the beach alone wishing the waves would wash his/her other person home. The poetry has rhyme and rhythm to it. It combines a lot of things that come to our mind.

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Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is nice poetry. Robins return for spring on the soft ground. The snow is receding and worms crawl on the ground. The winter moves on and spring takes its place. The bitter cold disappears and there is a new life to the air. The joys of spring makes the Robin wake up for his breakfast. The robins keep coming back. The poetry makes us aware of how winter is too frigid and cold. Spring gives hope and warmth. It brings cheer to the trees and blossoms. There is a new hope and it shows in the nature around you.

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Review of The Storms  
Review by Soulraider
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)

The poetry is impressive. Storms and lightening from the storm can be intimidating. A lightening strike can leave one dead or maimed for life. It is one of the most powerful forces of nature. The clouds hit against each other sending forth lightening bolts to the ground below. A lightning striking a tree can make it burn with vigor. A lightening has to be scared about. Storms can be ferocious as it can blow gusts of wind at very high speeds bringing about destruction. A storm can bring down homes and trees.

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Review by Soulraider
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)

This is a nice poem. A poetry about money and how it is used to gauge the worth of people. Notes don't sing. They don't have a name. You can't eat them. You can't plant it. You can't burn it. The poetry is very much about how money is so useless when we need actions to happen. The note is gone from the wallet and its purpose is to spend it. Too much of it or too little can be a spoiler. It can spoil a friendship. The cold notes don't sing either. It is left on the table as an insult. You can also use it to build houses.

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Review of Three Wishes  
Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is a nice story. A magical bass can make anyone turn up and look for good. Bob had a lure that would make any bass get caught up on the line. He casts his lure into the waters and finds a talking magical bass caught in it. The bass asks to be left alone or to be cast back into the water. He goes back home and finds the tackle boc, which assures him he has two more wishes to go. A bead of sweat enters his eye and he wishes it to go away. A cool breeze blows and he feels better again. He loses his last wish as he wishes to make up his mind. The story is quite nice making us think how we gain and lose from our decisions and our thinking.

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Review of " Morning"  
Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is nice poetry. A lot of skill and imagination comes through. A morning that invigorates us also makes us think about how special the day is. A quiet meditation makes us think how we like to take time off and have a pleasant thought of things. The father rests above us and he gives us his warmth and assurance that we can keep living on. A cup of coffee gives gentle relief and makes us feeling high in the morning. A sigh of relief ensues from the cup of coffee. The poetry is very much about how our days pass by and how we take things as they come by.

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Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is a nice entry for the Daily Flash Fiction challenge. The author taps his foot anxiously with his eyes shut tightly. The rhythms and notes are passing through his head as he tries to grasp them. He needs to hold them for 20 minutes and his palms grow with sweat and a chill runs down his spine. Sheet music drifts before him. It races in a crescendo of nervousness and anxiety. The hands rest on the keys. The curtain falls and the crowd applauds. The story makes us think it is someone's reflections of being on stage and receiving applause for the same.

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Review of Here to stay  
Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is good poetry. The poet assures her he will always be there, through thick and thin. He assures her he is not going anywhere and he is around whether she is angry, sad or just want to cry. He says she can always count on him. His love will be with her all the time. He reassures her he will not let her fall. He will be beside her through thick and thin and from beginning to end. The poetry shows how we are so close to people we like and adore them. They are the apple of our eyes and we want them to not suffer.

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Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is nice poetry. The person in the poetry is battered and abused. She needs reprieve and she struggles against the waves. She whispers the name of the lord and saviour Jesus Christ and a hand holds her from the waves. She is amazed, is lifted, murky, confused and disoriented. She sees the Christ in front of her. She thinks of him to be a king. Jesus on his part says he was always there, waiting for her, waiting for her call. The poetry makes us think how we feel about the almighty. How he gives life and then helps us cross over through it.

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Review of Muscle Pumper!  
Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is a good article. The muscle pumper or flexer is good enough for anyone wanting to build their muscles to impressive measures. The pumping brings forth the veins while the muscles shows out in the open. The suit eventually explodes and it is of no use thereafter. Betty cries at the destruction of the suit. The story makes us think how we try to get things faster than usual leading to damaging ways. Betty wants to get muscles even before she can plan them for months. The suit cannot handle the pressure and breaks off.

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Review of GATE 8  
Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is good poetry. The poetry makes us think of our sojourn on airports and how we take different gates to reach another destination different from ours. The poem only partly describes the story of the couple. The flowers blooming in the prairie makes them sad. It reminds them of their plight. They stop for a snack and a coffee along the way. The gloom they share is still not known. They have a story to say but it's in their minds. They leave their friends behind who they thought would never part with them. They say their last goodbye's. The poetry is nice to read and makes us think of the many things we have to part or give up to keep going on.

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Review of Election Day 2016  
Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.5)

This is a nice poem. Elections are up and the people have to decide whom to choose. The country is in doldrums and it has to be seen how it can be put into place. A candidate professes what he can do for the nation and people let him go ahead with his agenda. The battle of the elections are fierce as one candidate is pitched against another. There is heat in the competition. The campaigns are vicious and vile. The poetry shows how the elections are drawn out and how the world watches in awe. There is anger and fear that will decide the turnout and the race.

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Review of Damaged sight  
Review by Soulraider
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)

This is a nice story. The elements of magic is never lost on anyone who watches or practices it. Magic can transform reality into a fantasy and hence make us see various things never seen before. Mystical creatures, angels and demons all come to life. The story says how the son starts believing the father and sight is restored to him. Magic can make one spellbound. Bill wanted to stay a unbeliever but he opts to keep the experience in memory. Bill tries to undecipher the spell and it takes him years to do so.

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Review of The Trip  
Review by Soulraider
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)

This is a nice piece of writing. Pondering's on various things. Puddles of consciousness, the sky warps, bends and glares. Ants streaming around. The poet believes he is god and god is him. The eternal chatter melts away. The writer is taken over by singular awareness. There is a yearning, a longing, and a pulling. Heads are in the clouds and feet inspecting the bathroom tiles. Demons are dancing out of reach. The poet feels he is in hell. The devil speaks in a sing song melody. The writer sits on top of a throne as big as earth itself. The piece of writing makes us think about musings of the writer.

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Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is a nice article. A article about writing and how amateur writers feel about turning pro is quite fascinating. Amateur writers have a feeling of insecurity. They feel they are being watched. They also feel they would be laughed at for their big plans. Many are lazy and fall behind and never complete a big project. Amateur writers dream of bigtime of Youtube videos of themselves, of being famous and having television interviews on tv shows, press releases and also having their social media such as Facebook, Twitter and their personal websites ransacked by people. There are other occupations that interest them and baby sitting is one of them.

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Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is a nice story. The woman stands in the man's way. She is his competition.He plans meticulous to win against her and int he meantime falls in love with her. She on the other hand has long given up on him, while he wonder's why she has given up. The story makes us think about the people we come across, how we fight them tooth and nail and how we take a liking for them. He unsnaps her shredded cape around her neck and it blows away in the wind. She is still in shock and pain. The story brings forth the pain and sorrow of competing sexes.

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Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is a nice piece of writing. A thought about one's companion and how she is can make thoughtful writing. She has a difficult time during rough times. The poet feels she can do better. The poetry shows how we perceive our friend's and companion's. Its quite possible they have similar feeling's about us and our failing's. She does well when it comes to love and bring's about all the hugs and kisses. The poet wonder's if she really loves him. The brand new pair of kicks is quite desirable and the poet is glad about receiving such a gift. There is a good possibility his lady love is in love with him.
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Review of Reunion  
Review by Soulraider
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)

This is nice poetry. The poetry makes us think about our reunion. Our bondage with people we love. We cherish their company and long for them to be with us. Love makes us stronger with the bondage it brings about. The heart melts like tiny droplets of snow. His strong arms envelop her and make her feel better. The reunion is kind to both of them. His embrace relieves her and lives her breathless. She is taken over by his company. The walls of the old cabin tremble and disappear with his presence. The poetry shows the admiration the person holds to the poet.

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Review of Zombies  
Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is good poetry. A zombie is a puzzle our minds desires to unravel. He is out on the streets with his weird looks and lifestyles. The mind is devastated by some unknown assassin. The zombies are a living dead. An exotic plot to make them into drones is also a possibility. They live in a strange zone. People wonder about them and they hope they can get an answer. Finally, the poet thinks its just her kids on their cellphones. The poetry makes us think about zombies and how they live a parallel life. Their lives appear very strange to people.

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Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.5)

This is nice poetry. A father's day to honor the dear departed father is a nice way to cherish memories. A father who is a provider and caretaker to the family is remembered. He is also the boys' mother's lover. They honored him with gifts and cards. He is no longer with them. They hope to join him in heaven. The poetry is very symbolic of how we perceive our father's. How they stand in our memory as a friend and company. A father's death also reminds us of our own demise and how all life has to come to an end. The poetry makes us ponder and perhaps wait to be a father ourselves.

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Review of Unbroken  
Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is good poetry. A desire for solitude, understanding and grace is the theme. Two souls wanting understanding and grace. The two are very close and hold each other in their arms. The eyes lock into each other. A heroes resilience and strength shows. She shows her bravery and strength. The poetry is a ballad of two souls. More of two married couple going through the journey of life together. Facing every day as it come along. There is faith and admiration. Love is in the air as they love each other unconditionally.

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Review by Soulraider
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)

This is a nice article. The Kodak share price having zoomed and warrants coming into play make exciting news. Warrants do give high leverages. The trading volume also happens to be bigger. Kodak embracing blockchain technologies resulted in price spikes. The article is an eye opener into the stock markets. People trading on shares and making money off it is exciting. Warrants are something to lookout for. If Kodak is a good bet, readers would like to go for it. The changes and advances a company makes also results in changes in its price. A price surge is something to cash on.

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