While I read I could imagine the sounds you have described with honest words chosen I also related to memories such as you described for I have taken many midnight walks ,,,thank you as well for your message and I hope you do return to my works I look forward to your thoughts and feelings,,,,blessings ...Split
another one full of richness and value your gift is very very touching to me , you do have a way with placing truth and deep feelings in your writings and the flow was wonderful too.
a very touching and wonderous poem which touched me so very much in my heart you show so much talent of expression and asking questions well done and written from your heart and mind.
a short poem of words but not feelings and thoughts very well written and beautiful,the second stanza the last line it stumbled a little for me in my opinion the words ("and so" )are not really needed. my opinion.
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I truly enjoyed this piece and the flow was very good the only problem that I had was in the third stanza ,third line , last word just read a little wrong that is all that I felt or seen in this poem beautiful well written images well done.
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