Well written, historically well set, great story. I wish to express my sincere surprise while reading this odd yet captivating story of a time in History and a time that affected the whole world and done in an extraordinary way. I couldn't stop reading and was drawn into it from beginning till end. The last sentence was amazing and it made so much sense. I learned with you and felt the horror, we cannot forget.
This story startled and surprised me so very much. It was amazing. I never expected that ending I I still haven't recovered. And what an ending., about Marisa! I liked what he saw in th woodlands, though but it was scary. You must write more. You are good. Thank you for reading my coments.Tash
Aren't we all a bit like Ingrid - hearing things that are not there?Yes, I am certain that we must listen. I believe in spiritualism and lack of faith, lack of interest, in helping. You made me thik in a lot of things today. Good work. Tash
I loved the way you described the characters, the room , the places and especially the clothes. What an original, different story. I will find more of your stories. You write well. Sometimes a word here or there but who's perfect? I really liked it. Tash
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