I think I’ll wait for Mom to help with this. There, that wasn’t so hard.
Oh, how mom takes care of everything. What would we do without them? My son is 43 and still calls when he needs advice. But, I also call him when I need advice as well. I'm glad the road goes both ways.
Suggested Changes:
Here are the suggested changes: I hope that they are helpful and useful.
1. It was
time—the summer when life changes.
2. My clock radio, desk lamp, pencil cup, stapler, along with assorted paper clips, rubber bands, and other desk drawer junk
, add comma were stashed in a cardboard box sitting in the middle of the
floor
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3. Today was the day I dreaded
remove comma the day that should have come first but postponed to last.
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Add; It seems I remember some famous person saying, “Every great cleanout begins by opening the door,” or something to that effect.
5. “Yes. No. I mean
, add comma it works, but it’s no good unless you have two of them.”
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