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Review of Mark  
Review by Thannisan
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Ow! Remorseless but well written. I long for the 'but' to be followed by some hope or reason for having been... it sounds very real, very first person and makes me wonder if you have been there. I would make suggestions to improve the work but it is beautifully crafted.
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Review of Golden  
Review by Thannisan
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Poignant. I like it very much. This is my first review and admittedly I read a number of works before I found one I felt strongly enough about to write a review. The best line is the last one (which is fitting). "Then she laid her hand upon his heart; not still." The only part of the piece that seemed less than real was the coincidence of it being the exact day of the Anniversary and I only use this example to have at least one thing critical to offer. The greatest compliment I can pay is that I would like to read more by this writer.
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