Triv's (triv) Reviews

Great story and loved the light humor it portrayed despite the adversity faced. The use of the prompt was deftly done and I enjoyed the whole story and the two characters in it. Also liked the way the father truly knew what is important but said it in a non melodramatic way. Cool stuff!

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3

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#4482097

Review of The Pain That Stuck

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Rated: ASR

| (5.0)

Loved the story. Very well written. The untold pain and suffering were brought out so beautifully! All the best.

4

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#4476963

Review of Angelic Kisses

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

I loved this piece. It was evocative and brought up large visualizations in my mind. Very well written!

5

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#4474014

Review of I Visited Very Sara’s Port

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

A poignant and well written poem. I liked the simplicity of the words and the fact that it is also quite powerful emotionally

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6

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#4473171

Review of They Saw Him Do It

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Fun story!

7

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#4472425

Review of Fill in the Blanks

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Very cool idea!

8

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#4451548

Review of conversation at the seed of health

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In affiliation with The Talent Pond

Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

Loved the poem. As someone who's been struggling with dieting and eating healthy all my life, I could relate to this. I especially loved the ending with the stupid fruit. The writing is really good and the way the poem evolves was a lot of fun to read. Keep writing!

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9

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#4451546

Review of The Birthday Mirror

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In affiliation with The Talent Pond

Rated: 13+

| (4.0)

I liked the simple way of narrating the story and the ending. One tiny niggle...
“I know your there, dear. I can hear you.”

Change that to 'you're'.

Keep writing!

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