Though it is a very small poem written in five lines, it is a very meaningful poem.
Through these five lines, it is conveying its meaning very clearly...
Hi Farooq,
It was a very well written story. Your writing compelled me to finish it one go. The characters were common people of daily life.
The storyline was simple & straight. Not a single word seemed useless. Every word & sentence was perfectly inserted in the story. Your story straightly touched my heart. Style of narration was very good. The way you narrated feelings of the Lady just before her impending death is excellent.
I feel that it was a story perfectly written & in my thinking, there was nothing left out in the story to add or modify.
Reading it made me satisfied for my hunger of well written nice stories.
Keep writing…. Best of luck…
Hi Tom, I am not a very good reviewer and this is my first ever review i am doing. Also Kindly forgive me for grammatical mistakes & incorrect sentence structure if any.
First of all, I would like to thank you for writing such a good story with science fiction element.
Your writing made me feel as it is our own story. The plot of the story was very interesting & the characters were common people of daily life. The whole story was very simple & so easily touched my heart.
Style of narration was good. The timeframe chosen for the story was perfect. Also place and other setting characteristics worked together very well. I liked most the storyline as it is a realistic story and it or similar can happen. This is one of a very good Science fiction story which needed no alien attack etc etc which has become too common for science fictions & bored me too much.
I don’t say that there was anything left out in the story but in my thinking you should have gone for a positive climax with solution to the virus problem getting solved after death of some family members of the main character.
Anyway it was a very good science fiction & reading it made me happy. You should try to write a novel on this story with some modifications.
Keep writing…. Best of luck…
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