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Review of Forged in Winter  
Rated: E | (4.5)
What a vivid description of trees in general.

I think you've captured the nature of trees very well. They are such beautiful creations and are said to give you energy if you hug them!!!

The poem is just the right length and has enough description content to give your thoughts over perfectly.

Well done and keep writing.
Frankies Girl*Smile*
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Review of My Friend  
Rated: E | (3.5)
What a lovely description of your friend. You seem to know her inside out and accept her - faults and all!

You are obviously a good friend too!

Well written and I hope to read more of your work soon.

Frankies Girl
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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
You have great descriptive powers. Congratulations!

The feelings came through very well. The beginning is a little "clinical" which in one way gives the feel of a Psychiatric ward, yet in another way seems a little detached from the rest of the story. Maybe you could work on the intro and make it even more intriguing/tragic etc.

Well done. Keep writing and good luck.
Frankies Girl
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
This piece gets my vote for great descriptive talent. Your choice of words allows the reader to feel the setting very well. I only wish that it could be spiced up a little more with the introduction of some dialogue. Who know's maybe if you play a little along those lines, you'll find that you have a novel on your hands without even trying. Keep up the good work. Good luck. Frankie's Girl.
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