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Review of SMALL AM I  
Review by vasquezsavage
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a wonderful poem. I found it by accident. I was looking to see what kind of poetry would be found int the traditional group contest and found your stuff of abuse. I am a 31 yr. social worker. Have worked w/kids for all these years. Adopted/fostered many abused kids and adopted two. I was never abused, but I was adopted at age 5. I really love your work. I wrote a poem "Is Anybody Listening" about my adopted son who was abused. If you want to read it, it is in my portfolio. I want to come back to your portfolio and read more. I like the way you write. I also may enter the contest. I havn't done much on here lately. Too busy getting my website & ministry up and going. Thanx for sharing your work! vasquez savage
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
interesting story. makes me want to know how she handles this stranger. is the bonding easy or does she find it difficult to accept losing the bonding experience of birthing. i look forward to reading more. you left me wanting more. that is what it is meant to do. good job! vs
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Review by vasquezsavage
Rated: E | (4.5)
loved your poem. wouldn't change a thing. i like the message, the flow, & the simple, but well thought out imagary. reminded me just a little of one of my poems "The Sound of Grace". i had a similar thought pattern on what grace sounds like. i love the way you used the expanded view of listening. this poem reminded me of so many things. it was cool!
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