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Review by Velva
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Good work. It was easy to read. I enjoyed reading it.
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Review by Velva
Rated: E | (5.0)

This took me back to memory lane. I could hear every sound you described. Nice work.
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Review by Velva
Rated: E | (5.0)
I really liked this writing. I have not clue how to write in this form. Well done, It was easy to read and it told a good story.
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Review of Jobs for the Wife  
Review by Velva
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very nice writing and humorous.
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Review by Velva
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Yes! times have changed. Great job with the prompt.
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Review by Velva
Rated: ASR | (5.0)

Great very funny.
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Review by Velva
Rated: E | (5.0)
This makes me wish I had read what had lead up to this point and I long to read more. I truly love fantasies. Hope you write many books.
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Review by Velva
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I liked this as it is quite humorous, easy to read. Well done.
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Review of President Kroquer  
Review by Velva
Rated: E | (5.0)
Oh! this is way funny. good job.
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Review of Grandpa  
Review by Velva
Rated: E | (5.0)
A very heartwarming yet sad story. It brought back memories of my grandparents.
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Review of Man at Sea  
Review by Velva
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow you are a great writer. I enjoyed each word and each line of this one.
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Review by Velva
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
You followed the prompt. Very well written as I felt the frustration of the customer. It happens to me when I call government offices every time.
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Review by Velva
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Cool poem. Great confession. I only wish is that I can write like you someday.
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Review of I Remember  
Review by Velva
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
wow! You are a great Writer. I could completely relate to this one. Thanks for a poem I could actually understand.
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Review by Velva
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I really liked this story, probably because I love ghost stories.Gpod luck on winning the contest.
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Review of Ladybug Bea  
Review by Velva
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a great one. I could just see Ladybug Bea out in the garden checking everything out. I will read more of your work.
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Review of Brass Taps  
Review by Velva
Rated: E | (5.0)
Great memory of your Grandfather.
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Review of March As A Lion  
Review by Velva
Rated: E | (5.0)
Well, I wish I could write so good. It fit the prompt perfectly. Great poem.
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Review of Myself and I  
Review by Velva
Rated: E | (5.0)
Oh oh Me believes she has meant another Me. Your poem is written so professional. I cannot do that. I only write how I talk. I enter the contests to have fun. Thank you for the great poem.
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Review by Velva
Rated: E | (5.0)
Okay, I am now crying. This poem was so touching that I remembered the old folks and how they did not know their loved ones. Great writing
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Review by Velva
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Nice job using the prompt. I liked the story as well.
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Review by Velva
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very descriptive of the characters. It was easy to follow.
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Review of As she waits  
Review by Velva
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Too sad I can see the poor pet. Well written and the message is clear. Take care of your pets as you would your family.
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Review by Velva
Rated: E | (4.5)
This was humorous and so true of a cat. I thought it might be something other than a human. Good one.
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Review of Veggies  
Review by Velva
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was funny. I could see the snooty person ordering and the waiter getting frustrated. I most certainly would change the sign. Ha Ha
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