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Review by Velva
Rated: E | (5.0)
This could be a memory of the authors. It was written well. the words just flowed. I had no trouble reading it out loud.
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Review of Jared's Decision  
Review by Velva
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Very emotional writing. Not something I would normally read, being an old lady but it was written very well. I could not stop reading it. Great Job.
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Review of My Girl  
Review by Velva
Rated: E | (5.0)
AT last a poem that I understand and can relate to. Most I read are beyond my vocabulary and leave too much to my imagination as to what they were trying to say. Thanks for the gps you sent really appreciated them.
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Review of I Miss  
Review by Velva
Rated: E | (5.0)
Ok you gone and made me cry. I miss my Grandma too and my Mother .Good piece of writing Sorry I cannot give many points. I got too generous I suppose.
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Review of My best season  
Review by Velva
Rated: E | (5.0)
Well I can see why you placed first in a contest. You have the amazing ability to express your thoughts. I will be reading more of yours. velva I am extremely low on points so am sending 50 because I truly loved this poem
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Review by Velva
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very nice it made me tear up a little. Reminds me of my loved ones whom have passed. And still I mourn. well written. I don't have man points left hopefully 100 will be ok?
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Review of Lion Attack  
Review by Velva
Rated: E | (5.0)
I felt the fear this man was experiencing as he ran to escape.
The surprise ending was truly a suprise' as I didn't realize the truth til the announcement from the ringmaster. Good one
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Review by Velva
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I thought they had drugs. Very well written it contained suspense and a surprise ending loved it. I don't know much about proper English or punctuation but it seemed to flow well.
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Review of A Raft of Air  
Review by Velva
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
I wanted to be on that raft in the sky. Good description of the events. Maybe write a novel I would read it.
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Review of Haiku for you!  
Review by Velva
Rated: E | (5.0)
I too had to learn to write haiku. These are wonderful and you aced it. I have hundreds but not sure I want to put them out in public. Your first one about the sun and rain is great I felt that is was very hot and I was waiting for rain. the next one made me shiver as I am always cold and do not like the winter.
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Review by Velva
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I should not read these kinds of poems because I always end up crying. I am thoroughly impressed. To me it meant that the friendship was always there and had never left. Great job.
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Review by Velva
Rated: E | (5.0)
ok this poem I understand. I love poems that speak the way we all speak. Thoroughly enjoyed this because I have been homeless and endured the hunger and cold. Well written and easy to read.
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Review by Velva
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
This reminded me of my early childhood. I was not an only child but played solo quite a bit. My siblings were 5 and 7 years older than me and had other things to do than play with me. I had a lot of stuffed animals, 11 cats(which I loved to dress up in doll clothes) Most of which I tried to haul around the neighborhood in my wagon. You made me smile and remember. Loved it. Velva
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