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Review by Aneska
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello mchupta44

This is a very well written poem - I enjoyed it.

And it's true, Money isn't everything - but it sure does help when you are trying to retire. *Smile*

Thank you for sharing your talent!
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Review of Guilty Pleasures  
Review by Aneska
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello ruthie4u

This read a lot like Prose -

A life changing encounter that put the character in a struggle between the life she led and the new excitement of the life she is now leading.

*Star* favorite lines:
He showed her a world she never thought she had ever wanted. She suddenly longed for it. Her tranquil and peaceful existence suddenly felt mundane.

A few spacing errors that should be corrected, but overall well written

Thank you for sharing
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Review of Chivalry  
Review by Aneska
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hello musey

I enjoyed this poem

*Star* Favorite Stanza

Embedded thus, they dare defy
the higher forces. Yet
his chivalry is impotent.
For nature soaks her wet.

Well written and give a clear impression of his concern for others.

Thank you for sharing
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Review of Her Delicate Ways  
Review by Aneska
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Spiritual Dawning

I enjoyed your poem

Well written and flows well

*Star* Favorite Stanza:

She says, "I'm just being me, I'm not anything special"
But only I know her sway is that of a petal.

Thank you for sharing -
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Review by Aneska
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello nick

Very entertaining story - I see this is Biographical. Hope that the "refreshing change" stuck a bit longer than only one holiday and you didn't spend additional time in the nick *Laugh*

*Star* a small typo: But as the Hughes boys well Knew, the - the capitalization of "knew"

Otherwise well written, and I enjoyed the story.

Thank you for sharing -

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Review by Aneska
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Jay O'Toole

I enjoyed the star wars inspired poetry -

Although I know this is no place for opinion (haha in reality this site is almost all about opinion) - I thought I'd provide an small opinion regarding the quote: In my opinion, humans are conditioned to suffer - we have all the means to end an extensive amount suffering and yet still, we cannot agree on how and when to employ those means.

Anyway - very thought provoking comedic poem

Thank you for sharing
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Review of Force of Nature  
Review by Aneska
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hello cosmikraken

A poetic tribute to the force of nature -

Powerful impact, well presented, and I enjoyed the poem

Thank you for sharing -

*Star* Useless Trivia There were over 23 natural disasters in the year 2003 - if that influenced your writing at that time *Smile*
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Review of My Monopoly Hat  
Review by Aneska
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Sum1

A very nice poetic tribute to your significant other

Good to have those memories that unite one with a friend or family member past or present.

Thank you for sharing -


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Review by Aneska
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Rhymer Reisen

Very entertaining fairytale story with endearing characters. I enjoyed the plotline and the warm and fuzzy ending.

Well written,

Thank you for sharing
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Review by Aneska
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello winklett in the woods

I enjoyed the pantoum you wrote - A beautiful depiction of father and son.

I would highlight the stanza I enjoyed most, but this is a pantoum - so this is the line that stood out (to me) amongst the repetition of the others -

unashamedly off-key: the bear went over the mountain...

Very touching tribute - Thank you for sharing
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Review of NATURE OF LOVE  
Review by Aneska
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Dr M C Gupta

I found this using the read and review feature of the site -

The poem format was easy to read and I enjoyed the verse -

Favorite stanza:

Love cannot be hidden but
Yet it is a mystery,
That unsure of the lover's
Thoughts remains the beloved!

Thank you for sharing -

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Review by Aneska
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Paul

Well written dialogue - flowed well and depicted a comical discussion.

*Star* Small typo's - Well, I keep al (all) my lipsticks in one.

And if you are following grammatical rules numbers up to the numeral 10 - should be spelled out. (Although I am in no way a grammatical guru - *Smile* )

Enjoyed the piece - Thank you for sharing
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Review of Parental Guidance  
Review by Aneska
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello 🌕 HuntersMoon

Oh so made me laugh this evening. *Rolling*

Well written -

Thank you for sharing
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Review of Slight of Time  
Review by Aneska
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello Don Two

I enjoyed the poem you created

Favorite comparison lines:

like surfers do
when waves are slack,
like painters do
when paints harden,
or singers do
when throats are sore.
I can read a novel,
compose a symphony
with words,

Well written,

Thank you for sharing -



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Review of On Beauty  
Review by Aneska
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello satisle

I enjoyed reading this poetry - I liked the imagery

Favorite Stanza:
Whistles, chirps, hoots
And melodious symphony,
Like the incessant waves
Slashing on the shores of the Atlantic.

Well written

Thank you for sharing -
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Review of The Hanging  
Review by Aneska
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello Ben Langhinrichs

Interesting write - A hanging and the death of an entire family by undercooked dinner - all in 221 words.

Well done! (pun intended)

Thanks for sharing
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Review by Aneska
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Kitbok

Line: Alas ! When they opened their eyes,
They knew they were naked.

Meaning: Ignorance is bliss?

Well written poetic expression, Thank you for sharing
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Review by Aneska
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello De Boyish Man

This is an interesting opinion piece on a sometimes constant need to classify writers based on the length of write instead of context.

*Star* I strongly believe that in these this age many are struggling to read due to numerous distractions,

While I'm not here to agree nor disagree with the information presented. I found it well articulated in a "stand on your soapbox" type piece.

Well written, thank you for sharing.
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Review of BRACKENAUR  
Review by Aneska
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
LJ Apollo

Good Story - I enjoyed the plotline and the surprise ending wasn't so far out of the storyline that it wasn't a plausible ending.

A few spacing and punctuation errors - easily correctible.

Well written - Thank you for sharing.
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Review by Aneska
Rated: E | (4.5)
Anna Marie Carlson

This was a delightfully written piece of children's fiction - and fantasy life of a dream princess.

Although in my personal estimation a princess is more of a kept object to be admired, often donating their life to the duty and care of their subjects.

I found the piece well constructed and endearing.

Thank you for Sharing.
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Review of 02.08.2021  
Review by Aneska
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello feyre st. clair

I found this piece while using the read & review feature.

The rhythm flowed, set a scene, the verse emanated feeling of a connection made, but not returned - and how the memory lingers.


Thank you for sharing -
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Review of The Mountains  
Review by Aneska
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Dawn Embers

This piece came up while browsing the read and review feature.

A contest for Writers Cramp entry written in the time frame of 24 hours -

Well written Haiku poem about getting away from daily life and escaping to a more peaceful setting.

Thank you for sharing.
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Review by Aneska
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Hello Warriorprinesss

Very personal piece. I would suggest that you edit "u" to "you" and the "ur to "you are" only because unless you are entering a contest with that requires a poem written as if it's a text message - it distracts from the emotional meaning of the piece. *Smile*

Appears to be free verse about making the best of a difficult relationship unsure if you are doing what's best for yourself.

Well written, Thank you for sharing
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Review of Coffee-ku  
Review by Aneska
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hello ridinghood

I found this linked Haiku while browsing he read & review feature on the site.

Haiku is one of my favorite form poetry, next to limerick *Smile*

This meets the 5-7-5 format and links together. Since Haiku is about imagery and feeling, the subject of Coffee has been creatively flipped as you insinuate a romantic relationship with the beverage or the barista, and a remembrance of the moment as you pass each coffee stand. Either way, during this Pandemic days coffee delivered directly to your door by a Barista is possible. LOL

Well done - Enjoyed the read.


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