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Review by mama umbridge
Rated: E | (5.0)
awww! I loved it! It was so sweet!
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Review by mama umbridge
Rated: E | (5.0)
Aw. I really love your poem. I love the way it's a worded and just completely love it!
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Review of Child Fears  
Review by mama umbridge
Rated: E | (4.5)
I really loved your....song I think is what you said it was. It was well worded except for a few typos here and there and was good overall.
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Review by mama umbridge
Rated: E | (5.0)
I really love the wording in this and the ending made me tear up a bit because it was so sweet :') I love going to my grandma's house because she's always making something delicious and I know what you mean about how the house has a certain smell. I'm lucky enough to still have my grandma and her home-baked goods. You make me cherish this fact more than I ever have.
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Review by mama umbridge
Rated: E | (5.0)
Now that was a twist that I didn't expect. Bravo :)
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Review of The owl  
Review by mama umbridge
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
That was fabulous! You used very good vocabulary and the story really hooks the reader's attention. I think should continue this. I want to know what happens!
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Review of Selfless Bastard  
Review by mama umbridge
Rated: E | (4.5)
I understand what you mean. It seems like just yesterday that I was a little kid and now....I'll be 18 in 10 months. Time really does fly. And it sucks. Great job.
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Review by mama umbridge
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I loved this story! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! Write some more!
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Review of Over the Edge  
Review by mama umbridge
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
awesome story. good job!
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Review of Blue M&M  
Review by mama umbridge
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
that was awesome
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Review of The Long Journey  
Review by mama umbridge
Rated: E | (4.5)
Loved the wording and the twist. Haha!
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Review of A Ghost Story  
Review by mama umbridge
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was awesome. It made a chill go down my spine. Keep writing Kerry! *Heart*
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Review of Fire in Podunk  
Review by mama umbridge
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Fantastic job. I feel so bad for Lucy and for Michael because now he has to live with the guilt that it was his fault that Lucy died. I can find nothing wrong with your story and I think you'd make a successful writer. Write on!
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Review of The Crime  
Review by mama umbridge
Rated: E | (4.0)
Aww. That was sad. But way to go Alli!
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Review of Prisoner  
Review by mama umbridge
Rated: E | (4.5)
Loved your story. It was really cool. Write on! :)
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Review of Bound By Love  
Review by mama umbridge
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Love it! *Heart* Great job!
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Review of Nine  
Review by mama umbridge
Rated: E | (3.5)
I kind of liked the poem. I don't know anything about baseball and I don't really like rhyming. Other than that, thought you did a very good job with the poem.
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Review of My Angel  
Review by mama umbridge
Rated: E | (4.5)
I thought this was very well written. The author of this poem did a very good job. I only have one question about line 4 stanza 1. Is that word supposed to be grovel? If it is that would make a lot more sense.
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