A wonderful idea! You have a wide sellection, for many different occasions. This article is self-explanatory and easily accessible. I know so many people that deserve these badges, I can't wait to start giving them out, lol. Thank you for this inspiration!
With Much Love,
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A truly fasinating story, Viv! You did a wonderful job on this. Congratulations on your winning entry. You really captured the reader in your descriptions. I only found a couple of small errors. (1)-In the 9th paragraph that begins with: Deborah dropped her head in shame..."You are night." (I think you meant 'right'). (2)-"And do you not think he saw{/}" (3)-As she dropped to the bench, Mary sagged..."Hehas been hurt." (just need a space in between he and has). A tremendous story that shows the suffering of what our savior went through!! Great job!!
With Much Love,
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A very good contest listing. Instructions are easily understood. I especially like how you've given the writer exactly what you are looking for. Great job!
With Much love,
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A great story, Viv. I have a some questions and comments. (1)-In the 8th paragraph: "All I could see...but I wonder if...No, those are just rumors"..-(Should 'No' be capitalized?) (2)-10th paragraph-(You left the 't' out of military.) (3)-10th paragraph-...her "room,"...(Shouldn't the comma be after the quotation mark? I just looked in "Grammatically Correct" and I could be wrong, but take a look and let me know.) (4)-In unison, aunt and nephew answered, "Sure." "If you don't mind." (Quotation marks incorrect?) (5)-(Should "marine" be capitalized?) (6)-(In the middle of the story, "Trisha" turns to "Trina", and then on down, "Triana, I love you". Sorry I didn't put exactly where.) I may be wrong on a couple of these. Let me know. It's a very good story, I truly enjoyed it. Good luck with your contest!
With Much Love,
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LOL, I see no one wants to be President. A very good poll. I wish you had of had "other", as a response. This is very interesting, because lately, I have felt that I needed a "purpose" in life. So, I prayed to God and ask him, "what is my purpose? Please use me as a tool to help others." Immediately, I was put in the right place, at the right time, by God. I have helped an abused Mother pay her first month's rent to get away from the abuser, and the other day, I ran into a girl that had no food or diapers for her baby. Don't get me wrong, I am struggling myself with 4 children, but I did it, and through the grace of God, I am still making ends meet. A wonderful poll!
Be blessed.
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This is a very informative article. I just received notice that my upgrade will expire at the end of April, and this was very helpful to know which fifteen items we can keep. Although, I don't think I could live without my premium membership, lol. I rated this a 5. Very informative, professionally done, and I would recommend this article to anyone that needs to know these important facts. Thank you for providing this for us.
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Kenzie,
This is a beautiful way to show these special men and woman that we do support and stand behind them. This is well written and you have done a very honorable deed by sharing this with our community of Writing.com. many thanks to you, my friend!
With Much Love,
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A very good poem, Miranda! I really like it. In the first stanza, third line, the word "thinking" should be capitalized. You can hit edit and correct this. Also, in the box that is titled "Keywords" write as many thaqt pertains to this poem, because you will get referrals from this. Example: Experience, Poetry, Prose, Sleep, Nonfiction, ect. If you need aqny help, don't hesitate to write me.
I love you, Baby.
Aunt Vicki
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This looks like a very helpful group! I try to seek out newbies myself and help them with all the features we have. I would love to join this when I turn blue. I'll keep it in my favorites for now. New members are so important to Writing.com. I try to encourage them to join Portfolio Support Society, too! Good luck with this wonderful group.:)
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A wonderful poem. You have a talent for poetry. You might want to consider puting your best pieces towards the top of your portfolio. It will encourage the reader to read more.:)
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