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Review of Origami Flowers  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Nice story. I really think this is a smooth read. the character is well introduced to the reader. It reminds me of all the times that I have had to yell at my own teenaged son about chewing paper, glue, and his shirt. I used to get calls about his distractions often.

I found you item highlighted in a newsletter that I subscribe to.

"Comedy Newsletter (May 15, 2013)" 

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Ida


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Review of Staremaster  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a cute story that could happen to anyone. I like the description. The flow of the story was smooth. Though it is usually when we think that we look good when we do make those ugly mistakes. I know that to those of us who aren't looking so good (underneath) really feel a little more normal.

I found this story highlighted on the newsletter "Comedy Newsletter (May 15, 2013)" 


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Review of Just Believe  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Welcome to the writing.com family. This is a place that I have found support on and off the computer.

I have had days like this. Even to the not getting the fire started. My family and I grew up with fireplaces and pot bellied stoves. It seemed that they were the hardest to get started on the coldest Kentucky nights.

I have found your story highlighted in the newspaper "Comedy Newsletter (May 15, 2013)" 


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Review of Target Practice  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I now live in Florida. I live in the flat city of Sarasota. I am from the hills of Kentucky so it would be cool to see both ocean and highlands meet. I love the memory in your story, and the emotion that you show here. You are able to tell it with a different edge than you would have the same day. I think that though this day seemed to be bothersome and uneventfull, you now have a cherished time.

I found your item highlighted in a newsletter that I suscribe to.

"Comedy Newsletter (May 15, 2013)" 

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Ida


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Review of Hunter McGee  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I found this in a news letter

"Comedy Newsletter (May 15, 2013)" 

This poem had a great flow. I love the rhyme. The story was one to make me smile. I was able to see the storyline unfold. I really thought that the last line may have needed a little tweeking. I am not much about a beat or using sylabols in the lines but it just seemed to end abruptly.

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Ida


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In affiliation with Blogging Circle of Friends  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I love the information of this blog, and I hope some day that I am able to have one formatted half as well as your page is. The information is entertaining, and I like how you used the media to explain your opinion of why you feel the glass is neither half empty or full..

I tryly enjoy your items.
Ida


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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Title:

Created a question that I wanted to know what happened twice in a life time.

Paragraphs:

It would make it much easier for the eyes if you placed a line between the paragraphs.

Story:

I love this kind of story. Lost love becomes lifelong. I am kind of living that story. A man that I met over ten years ago and fell in love with moved to florida. Now after that time apart we are finally together. This was a wonderfully heart wantming story.

Closing:

I love the emotion and detail that you used in this story.

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"Noticing Newbies Newsletter (May 15, 2013)" 
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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Title:

The title creates a question that needs to be answered for me. What seats are the ladies to take.

Story:

I live in a house with my two teenaged sons and my lover. My mate puts the seat down, but my sons are lucky if their stream hits the water. When we visit his mother each weekend, there are three girls, his mother, his sister, and me there. This creates a problem. The teenaged girls are not having any of the leaving the seat up. The boys have to go and take care of the seat.

Closing:

Funny and true issue with a simple soluation.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Title:

My courisity was peeked so that I had to find out more.

Paragraphs:

I think that it would be easier on the eyes if you place an line between the paragraphs.

Story:

To me this read more of an essay or article. I can see the admireation for this man. The good things is that I learned something tonight.


Closing:

I was surprised to know that he was banned from the history books. I wonder how many other important people have been hidden from the world.

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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
First I would like to welcome you to our writing.com family. I have found encouragement in both writing and life from those who you will meet there.

Title:

The title got me thinking about what life would be like without color even before I read the story. I had to find out what the Title meant to the author.

Paragraphs:

I like the spacing between the paragraphs. It makes it easy for my eyes to handle.

Story:

I can relate to the story. Right now we live in a neighbor of the sweetest African Americans. We are close with our neighbor, and has become my best friend.

When I was pregnant with my first child, I went and interviewed doctors to have the best one to care for her. The main question was do you believe in God. We ask our selves and others so many questions about what is good for our unborn child, but it always seems to work out.

Character:

I like the Grandmother. I hope that I will be remembered much like her when I have gone.

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Review of Pandemonium  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This is an interesting story that I found a smile on my face as I read it. The names are unique. I like the characters Elliot and Merry. The conversation seems heated due to the aggervation.

I love this phrase:

curiosity opened the door to understanding.

It can be used in everyday life. I look at it as an pick me up. It also helps me to handle the constant questions of my five children.

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Review of Writing.Com 101  
for entry "Group" 
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I am sorry, but I am truly needing help. I want to start a group, and wanted to know how to create the gps bank. I have done forums and contests, but I have not done this before. I have ideas form more than one. One is for information between parents who have younger children who are going to attend college. I am planning to fill it with information and research such as scholarships, contests, and such.

Thank you for any help that you can give me.
Ida
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In affiliation with  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Reading the posts in this newsletter is truly getting me to want a snack and a cup of coffee.
The description of the candies is mouth watering.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Poetry Newsletter (May 15, 2013)" 

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Review of ODE TO COFFEE  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I really enjoyed the aroma and the sound of the coffee maker. I don't really like coffee, but drink it from time to time. I enjoyed this silly poem.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Poetry Newsletter (May 15, 2013)" 

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Review of DONUT  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Beautifully written. I am left a little hungry for a night time snack. This has tought me a little about a new form of poetry.

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"Poetry Newsletter (May 15, 2013)" 

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In affiliation with  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This was an amusing poem, but I really didn't expect the story to be what it was. The flow was smooth. I had to smile as I watched the poet creat the dish for his mother-in-law.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Poetry Newsletter (May 15, 2013)" 

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Review of Inside the Moment  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a cool and wonderful poem. I enjoyed the read.

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"Romance/Love Newsletter (May 15, 2013)" 

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Review of Gold  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
THis is a wonderful story. I really like the emotions that you have covered. Love is such a life ride that never can be perdicted. I really don't know how we finally deal with long term relationships ending, but we manage to survive.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

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Review of Forebearance  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a great story. I have tried relationships on line, but I really could not make them work. They were either married or just obcessive. I did carry a relationship long distance for years. Now we both live in Florida loving our six children.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Romance/Love Newsletter (May 15, 2013)" 

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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I met my soul mate in person working right across the road from where I worked, but he then moved to Florida. I remained in Kentucky. After three years of long distance internet love and two years being just friends, now we are living happily in Florida.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

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Review of Hidden Knowledge  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
The format is one that is easy on my tired eyes. The prompt is an interesting one, but you did a great job. The flow was really smooth. The story line was one that was easy to follow.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Short Stories Newsletter (May 15, 2013)" 

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a wonderful story. The flow is smooth, and I really enjoyed the read. This is a great story. The descriptions are to the point that I felt that I was there.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Short Stories Newsletter (May 15, 2013)" 

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Review of Nameless  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I like the third person point of view. The story is told straight forward, and it has consistant verb tense. That is where I find my worst problem. I can not seem to get my tense right from the entire item.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Short Stories Newsletter (May 15, 2013)" 

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Review of Is It Worth It?  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Tears are filling my eyes. This poem is well written, and the flow is excellent. The message is so beautiful especially the week of mother's day.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Spiritual Newsletter (May 15, 2013)" 

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Review of StrongWoman  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This is full of inspiration and emotion. I found the read well written, and I enjoyed reading it very much.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Spiritual Newsletter (May 15, 2013)" 

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