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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this story. The item is relatable, and I see a lot of my self in the conversation you have created to move the story along so smoothely. There is witness in your words.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Spiritual Newsletter (May 15, 2013)" 
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Ida

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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I like this page. I am glad to have found it. The message is clear in the story, and the flow creates an easy read. I really like the way you seperated the scenes so that my mind could tell when they are about to change.

I all so appreciate that you show that the names have been changed. I think that it shows class.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Spiritual Newsletter (May 15, 2013)" 
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Ida

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Review of Little Bear  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I am glad to have read this story. The emotions are fimular to me. The story was well written, and the character was believable. I think that this story can help others who are in the same situation.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Spiritual Newsletter (May 15, 2013)" 
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Ida

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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I have to think about this for a while. I have never been big on games, but my family are. I remember Sonic, and matter of fact my partner is looking for the games for Play Station 3 or Xbox 360.

That being said, I think that this is a wonderful idea. I like the idea of making the characters more human.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a good poem about a good game. This is well written, and I know that bowling is a fun sport. I had a friend to loose over 100 pounds playing for fun. I have gone a couple times with my children. I loved it.

The flow of this poem is smooth, and the description that you use shows the emotion for the game.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a great story. The flow is smooth, and the structure of the page is easy on my eyes. The description brought me into the story and lodge. It is hard for me to write first person sometimes because I have a problem keeping my berb tense constant. However, you have made it look effortless.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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Review of A Working Life  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this form of poetry. The first and third line rhyming and the second and fourth is the way that I learned to write a poem. This kind of poems are what my port is full of.

The flow and rhyme are smooth and creates an enjoyable read.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
First thing that I noticed is how the story is formatted. The spacing created a comfrontable read for my sore eyes.

The story proved to be well written, and the story line is one of my favorites. It shows how we are always looking for answers.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"For Authors Newsletter (May 8, 2013)" 

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Ida


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I really like this poem. I remember the programs that I have enjoyed. I think that you have found a great way to let us get to know more about you.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"For Authors Newsletter (May 8, 2013)" 

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Ida


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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love the vivid description in this poem. I also like the story of a nice place to go an read. I would visit just to get a few minutes of silence.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"For Authors Newsletter (May 8, 2013)" 

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Ida


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Review of Suggestion Box  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I found this page to be very useful. I would like to see a course here that will teach us somethings like how to create a successful contests and events. I would like to learn animated things. I would like to know how to create a seperate bank for a created page or contest.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Noticing Newbies Newsletter (May 1, 2013)" 

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Ida
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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Thisa is a place that will come in handy for me. I have been part of this family for years, but I learn more everyday.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Noticing Newbies Newsletter (May 1, 2013)" 

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Ida
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Review of Gun Hands  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
The story is well written. The flow is smooth, and the storyline is one that could be told in any television show.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Mystery Newsletter (May 1, 2013)" 

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Ida


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Review of Star Reviewer  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Special shout out to Ida_Matilda_Wright , Angus , Claire Renee , Nik A. and to all those who remember to affiliate their reviews with the group Keep up the fantastic work!

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

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Ida
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In affiliation with Blogging Circle of Friends  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I wish that I understood how to create these added videos and such. THis is a great item I can not understand why the mother has all the say. This sounds crazy, but maybe "dad"can find a sergant to host the bundle. I mean, if it is trash why not just find another container.

Thank you for sharing this.
Ida


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I loved the story line and the characters. I can tell that this was for flash fiction, but have you thought about making it larger? I would love to know how Shelley first got thought up.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Fantasy Newsletter (May 8, 2013)" 

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Ida


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Review of Pluto’s Rock  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I liked the story. The characters are well developed. The flow was smooth and helped along with well written dialog. I have problems with fluent dialog, and I noticed that you made it seem easy.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Fantasy Newsletter (May 8, 2013)" 

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Ida


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Review of Little Red  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
I loved this poem. The story was so cute, and it filled the need to read something that makes me young again.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Fantasy Newsletter (May 8, 2013)" 

Thank you so much for sharing this with us.
Ida


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Rated: E | (5.0)


I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Fantasy Newsletter (May 8, 2013)" 

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Ida


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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a very good story about action and vivid description. I felt as though I was in the rafters with your character.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Fantasy Newsletter (May 8, 2013)" 

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Ida


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Review of Beltane  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
The main trait that caught my attention is the skill that you show in dialog. The conversation flows well without obstruction.


I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Fantasy Newsletter (May 8, 2013)" 

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Ida


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In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Welcome to the writing .com family. I have foudn encouragment in both writing and life.

I loved this poem. It is smooth and the message is one that I truly enjoyed with the vivid way you painted the story.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Drama Newsletter (May 8, 2013)" 

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Ida


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I really love the format of this story. Especially during the mother day seek. The story was well told, and the emotions were strong in the words and in the relationship.


found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Drama Newsletter (May 8, 2013)" 

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Ida


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Review of Rest Stop  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a funny story in verse form. The only thing that I wonder about is if you are talking about her bed or bedroom. Though there are times that my bed is much like the description. I have today's mail, children's school papers, c-pap, and what ever else that I had been doing during the day has to be moved before I lay down. The only things that remain is my two cats who guide me into dream land.


I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Comedy Newsletter (May 8, 2013)" 

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Ida


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Review of The Director  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I like reviewing the comedy newsletter. Days are hard and the need for a good smile is mighty. I truly enjoyed this story.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Comedy Newsletter (May 8, 2013)" 

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Ida


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