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by Oriana
Rated: E · Poetry · Contest Entry · #1908676
A haiku for the Writer's Cramp contest; which version is preferable?
Finding the Right Words

A Haiku

Twin moons hide, yearning
under furrowed brow; searching
lips move soundlessly.


or

Two eyes hide, yearning
under furrowed brow; searching
lips move soundlessly.
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