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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A good poem and written well. I agree something needs to be done. I live in Texas and our borders are overrun. I have no problem with LEGAL immigration.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I feel that way sometimes too, but we cannot give up. Writing is a wonderful thing and you wrote this poem very well.

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Dianne
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I don't know if this is a poem or prose, and though I do not agree, I respect your views and your right to say them.

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Dianne
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Review of Huh?  
Rated: E | (4.0)
The end is not yet, but there will be a glorious beginning.

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Dianne
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Review of I do be tired  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Usually when I lay down to sleep that is when my mind wants to start running the film of my life. Sometimes I don't sleep.

Good poem.

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Dianne
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Review of My fault  
Rated: E | (4.0)
I know that there are times when we feel this way but things are rarely just one person's fault.

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Dianne
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Review of Craving Flesh  
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Interesting thoughts.

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Dianne
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
That is how I feel sometimes when trying to get rid of stress!
Good poem.

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Dianne
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Review of Slab Kitty  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
That's the way with man, always wanting a fight and looking for a weapon. Good story though.

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Dianne
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Review of Clean Up  
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
I like this story and you had me all the way to the end - I don't understand the ending. Is Damon supposed to be the killer and is evil?
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Review of A Modest Proposal  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I really enjoyed this story. It kept my attention and made me laugh at the end.

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Dianne
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Review of Ides of March  
Rated: E | (5.0)
A good story. I would like to know more of the story, how did it get to this point? I like dystopian stories. I think you wrote it well and I didn't see any grammatical errors.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
We will eventually have the Victory! Good poem.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Sounds like a great place to visit.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A very interesting essay on reviewing. I sometimes find it difficult but try anyway. You have given some good points to look for in reading someone's story.
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Review of Born to Die  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
A good poem. It is sad, too many soldiers die. I pray they all come home.
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Review of THE ORDER  
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a very sad story! But it does teach us to have patience with others and to be kind. You never know what will happen.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Very sad. It tells a story, I like it.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I like the poem, I must admit it took a minute to put it together.
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Review of I AM  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice poem. I like it, it reminds me of my Savior Jesus Christ.

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Dianne
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Rated: E | (4.0)
It might be nice to live in the forest in a treehouse. A good story.

Putting it in paragraph form would make for easier reading.

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Dianne
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Review of Haircut  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good story! I like it. Umbrellas can be hateful things!
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Dianne
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Review of JUNO  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love a good paranormal story. Thanks for writing.

Dianne
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Review of HIGH and DRY  
Rated: E | (5.0)
But what happens when he meets the boss-man again? Loved the story.

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Dianne
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this story but it is really kind of sad. What happened to Peter?

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Dianne
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