I love Harry Potter!! I enjoyed your story. I would like a little more dialog between the students. Is this something you are going to continue? Would like to know more about Sophie and Jonathan.
This was a strange and different story! I enjoyed it and was waiting to see what was going to happen next. I always felt there was a fat person inside me waiting to get out....think I'll keep her thin!
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