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Review of Sleeping  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I enjoyed this story and I like the way it ended.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Review of Mr Average  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a good story. I could see Harry quite plainly and understand his decision. The thing I don't quite understand is why he laughed when he found out his friend was marrying his old girlfriend because she was pregnant.

Keep Writing,
Dianne
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Very good story. I realize it is a contest entry but I would like to read more.

Dianne
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Review of The Sound of Ice  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is great! Im glad i dont live with all that ice!
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Ok, that makes more sense to me now! I'm really not into erotica but so far not seen much of it. I still think they need to be longer, but it is your story and writing and I did enjoy it.

Thanks for sending me the rest of the story. I look forward to reading the rest.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Good start, need more beginning as to why and then what happens.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed this story. It's nice her dream came true.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Review of Being Kirk  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love Star Trek, too bad it went off.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Very good poem and oh so true!

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Review of NANNY  
Rated: E | (5.0)
How sweet and how true! My grandmother was Nanny, My mother was Nanny and I was Nanny and Grandma and Grammie it does not matter what we are called as long as we are called.
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Review of Shatner  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Love it!

Dianne
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Very good story, I really enjoyed it.
Keep Writing
Dianne
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I think we all have to decide for ourselves what is acceptable or not. I think most people are fair-minded and understand what injustice is. Some people are too timid to step up and make a difference.

I think our government and lawmakers to often try to stir up the people and only make things worse.

I like your poem and it does make you stop and think.

Keep Writing, glad you won.
Dianne
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Very good story but a very sad story. It is really sad that people actually act like this.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Very inspiring. Please remember this as you grow up.

Keep Writing and welcome to WDC.
Dianne
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Each person has good and bad inside. It is how you decide to handle the good or the bad that decides which you are.

If you have accepted Christ as Savior and Lord, the bad has been forgiven and Christ does not see it any longer. We need Christ to remove the bad so that we can be good.

God Bless
Dianne
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is so very true. I appreciate your telling of your dream.

God Bless
Dianne
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Very good story! I would like to know what happened.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Good story. Could you make this longer? Does he survive?
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Review of Working it Out  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Liked your story, what actually happened when he showed Mr. Green the photo?
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Review of Other World  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I liked it, it was fun.
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Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)
A really nice poem. I enjoyed it.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This is beautiful! Very well written and it fills me with hope and love. Thank you
Dianne
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Review of A Very Good Day  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's always good to have a good babysitter!

Keep Writing
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Review of Bobby [162]  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Oh, I like this story. I hope there will be a chapter 2. It is really sad what war can do to people.
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