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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is very well written and very true. It does seem that, at times, we allow one thing to overshadow everything else. We forget that God is in control and will take care of all concerns. IN HIS TiME, NOT OURS!

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I enjoyed this poem. I don't write poetry, so I cannot critique it. I liked it and its right aging is the pits.

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Review of Kayla  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very sweet poem. Keep writing.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this poem. It tells a story. One I am too familiar with.
Keep writing
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Review of TWAS THE NIGHT  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I really enjoyed this poem! It made me laugh, it takes a lot to make me laugh these days. Thank you.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I am so sorry you went through all this.

I believe some churches do not understand Jesus' teachings at all!

I wish you well and healing.

Dianne
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Review of A Remote Chance  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
My remote has acted strange at times. I wonder if it is haunted? I like your story and found it compelling.

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Dianne
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is really good and it describes my digestive tract to a T.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I like this poem, and it is a good lesson.
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Review of FORGIVENESS  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Forgiveness is something we need to do for ourselves to move forward. Sometimes it is just very hard to do.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The first poem I ever read about the flu! However a very good one. I hope you are well now and feeling good.
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Review of Once In A .......  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem reminds me of the child's prayer, "Now I lay me down to sleep." but then it goes past that, and I think of a first love. It's really kind of peaceful.

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Dianne
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Very Halloween! I like it! You used the words in the list very well, and it held my attention. I could see it in my mind.
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Review of WDC  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a really great poem about WDC. I love it here too! Glad you joined.

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Dianne
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Rated: E | (5.0)
What a lovely poem! True friends are priceless!!

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Dianne
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Review of Dismay  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this poem. I am glad it won the contest.
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Review of Dear Me  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I just read your Dear Me letter for 2014. Very good important goals. I hope you made them.

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Dianne
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I think you did a very good job on the poem. I love unicorns, and I like this poem. I hope you win whatever contest you enter it in.
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Review of WDC & HALLOWEEN  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a very good poem. I don't know how to review poetry because I don't understand all the mechanics of writing poetry. However, I know what I like, and I like this one. Hope you win the contest.

Dianne
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Review of When I Write  
Rated: E | (5.0)
A very good poem. Glad you won!
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Very sweet. Ive lost touch with a soldier i once wrote to as a teenager. His bame was Joe.
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Review of Sea Runner  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
These creatures might be of some help in today's world. I like this creature, and I like the way you described them and their abilities.

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Dianne
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Review of The Fire  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I am glad he was able to save the dog. Sorry, he did not save himself. Fire is a dangerous thing. My husband and son were both firefighters. Fire is tragic. Glad his father was there to see him home.

I think you wrote a good story, and I enjoyed reading it.

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Dianne
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I like the beginning. Are you going to be giving more info about these characters? Do you have the next chapters ready? I would like to read more of this story.

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Dianne
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Review of I REMEMBER WHEN  
Rated: E | (5.0)
A very sweet and touching poem to your Daddy! I loved it. I could feel the love springing from his little girl and the love returned by your Dad.
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