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Great presentation, nice rhymes and rhythm. Well executed, well structured too. I think you used the prompt very well here. There was also good imagery coming from each word and line. Nice writing and well done!
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I found the words and lines to be very emotional to me. The way you built the words up with the starting comments. There was a beautiful feeling over me as I read this through. The love was deep and true. Keep expressing yourself and write on!
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I enjoyed every word and line you wrote out. There was good imagery from this writing. I liked the simplicity of your writing style here. You also expressed yourself so very well. The Moon is always a good source for poetry. You did a fine job here. Good work and write on!
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I really enjoyed this poem from you. It was written perfectly. Great rhythm, great rhymes and flow. I related well to what you had written, you summed up the food very well. Oddly enough, there was good imagery coming from each word and line. I could even smell the dumplings. Oh they are so tasty. Good work and write on!
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I thought you were right on the money here with this poems words. I am from the United Kingdom but still related to what you had written. Nice presentation, centered on the page. You managed to say so much in just a few lines. Nice writing and write on!
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I liked the flowing story line, it was very simple to follow. There was good imagery coming from each word and line. I was able to see the lady under the mistletoe, kissing him. Nice presentation. (I guess) The shameless kiss was a message to all other women who dared want her man. Nice tale and write on!
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Nice presentation, centered on the page. I thought this was a very different piece of writing to your other pieces. You are right in saying that we cannot be something we're not. And we can only be ourselves. It is human nature to try though. Nice philosophy used here. Good work and write on!
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I enjoyed reading this through. It was well written and nicely displayed, centered on the page. I think you spoke for millions of people here, I related very well to what you have written. I liked the title too. You reminded me just how sweet the Lord truly is. Great work and write on!
I liked the clever way you wrote this out. The punctuation was not there, so I read this all in one breath. The feeling of breathlessness was all across me as I read this through. Very clever. Good flowing lines, nice length, not too short and not too long. Certainly a dark piece well written. Write on!
I thought this writing from you was very revealing. If you really do listen to THEM, you are not alone. I liked the depth and inviting feel to this poem. I also realted very well to your poem. Good presentation, looks good on the page. Good flow and good rhythm. The spirit world is there for all to witness, its just if you look in the right places and at the right time. Write on!
Nice writing here. The rhythm was great and made the reading a real pleasure to me. I liked the tone of this poem, there was a reality in your work here. I also related to how you have lived your life so far. I enjoyed reading this through. Keep going and write on!
Great writing from you here. Great flowing rhymes, great rhythm too. The picture above the writing was a good touch and presented the poem perfectly. Your creativity was good here. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this poem. Good work and write on!
I really liked the poetic power and majestic tone to this poem from you. You wrote this out very well. The flow was good and the rhythm too. The title matched the poems words and lines very well. I enjoyed reading this through. No way of improving the item. Good work and write on!
Your grammar and skill in story telling made this a real joy to read through. The story was made exciting and fun for the reader. I don't normally read short stories but this one I enjoyed very much. You seem to have a natural talent for telling stories. Good work and write on!
A good mixture of events here in this folder. I don't normally read short stories but I managed to review a couple of items here. You have an eventful life to me. A well organised folder in your port. Keep writing and posting. It's good to express. Write on!
I loved your expressive manner here in this writing from you. There was pain, there was romantic power, there was raw emotions. A well crafted poem and rolled along perfectly. I enjoyed reading this through. I enjoy your works. Write on!
I thought your little poem here was inviting and interesting. All your little poems have good structure and tell good stories. I enjoyed reading this poem through. Your character in this poem seems strong and direct. A good read and write on!
Nice writing style here. You have expressed yourself so very well. I liked the presentation of this item from you. The title drew me into the poem. I liked your creatvity here. A good length for a poem, not too long and not too short. Keep writing and posting little gems. Write on!
I thought this was an interesting piece from you. Men will be men and women will be women. There was a nice tone to your writing here and I enjoyed reading this item through. Good theme and well written out. A nice length for a poem too, not too long and not too short. Good expressive writing.
Good writing style used here. I liked the flow and the rhythm too. Good expressions here in this item. To me I sensed a lot of emotion in every line written out. You were very creative in this poem. The title matched the writing very well. Good work and write on!
I thought this was a sweet and simple piece of poetry. There was good imagery coming from each word and line. I enjoyed reading this through. Nice presentation, centered on the page. The title was inviting to me and matched the poem well. Good work and write on!
A graphic description of not being able to write. Nice presentation, centered on the page. I liked the imagery coming from the words and lines. A good length for a poem, keeping my attention levels up high. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines. Creative writing here. Write on!
I thought your poem here was beautiful. Such a sweetly written piece of work. The rhymes and rhythm were perfect to me. There was a natural beauty, a heavenly presence in each word and line. A simple title. I loved and enjoyed every word. You have done a wonderful job here. Great work and write on!
I thought this little poem from you was nice and simple. The message was very clear. There was great positivity in this poem. I know this was written a few years ago but I hope the poem still stands today. An enjoyeable read. Nice presentation too. Good expressions. Write on!
Good expressive tone to this writing from you. I liked the title being used in the poem. I was gripped to each word and line. A deep, meaningful poem and it kept my attention high. You have good creativity in your expressions. Good, deep writing. Write on!
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