Hello FallenAngels27,
I just finished reading your piece of THIS LONELY LYRICS. It was a straight forward piece. Meaning you were telling it like it is. Like for example you were saying 'EMPTY STATIONS PEOPLE MAKING. it is hard to put into words just what that means to me. I think of something empty of all hope for one thing. I hope that I am right about this part. I hate to give a bad review. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello darkadan,
I just finished reading your piece of WAKE UP. It was a sad piece but a good one. Sounds as if you were wondering if you'd see another day. When one is touched with the feeling like these it is always sad. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Scarlett,
I just finished reading your piece of SOUR LOVE. It was a sad piece for sure. It was a good read, though. You lelt the man have it between the eyes so to speak. It was a shame the way you were treated and for the daughter to come along in the mess was something else again. I am so glad that you had the courage to leave him and be done with him. It is sad really sad that there was something like this going on. i applaud you though for the strength it took to leave him as said before. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you and your daughter. Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello arthury,
I just finished reading your piece of HIM Yes, it was scary. It was a short piece but a good one. I didn't find any mistakes found in the whole piece. I looked for some but couldnt' find any. GREAT job. You made a believer out of me. I believed what you were saying in this piece. the sign of a good writer is making someone believe your story. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Deanna,
I just finished reading your piece of UPLIFT. It is a good but short piece. You are speaking of a place. Right? Well, this place must be a haven for other people to be happy with. It sounds really peaceful and serene. A very good job on this piece is what this is. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Pastoral,
We meet again and so soon. I just finished reading your piece of WARPED. It was a short but good piece. There were no mistakes in the whole piece that was found. I know I looked for them but couldn't find any. GREAT job. I liked the last line most of al. To just remember. That means alot of things to alot of people You did well. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Nowhere_Girl,
I just ifnished reading your piece of OTHERLAND. It was a brief but good story. I didnt' find any mistakes in the whole piece. You are a good writer. You made me believe in another land called the Otherland. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Pastoral,
I just finished reading your piece of MIDDLE AGING. It was a very true piece. Your names of people and places made me think of what you were speaking. I remember them too. There are so many things in your piece that made sense that it was a very good read. I enjoyed it. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello her_majesty,
I just finished reading your piece of I MISS YOU. It was a sad one and a good one all at the same time. The pain of having him near you then letting him go again was terrible. You miss him for sure. I would do the same thing in missing someone very close to me as I miss my brother now. So, I know what you are going through with at least a little bit. i hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Gabriel,
I just finished reading your piece of ABORIGINE AND THE NATURAL WORLD. it sure seemed like a nightmare to me. One's hair changing color after color and not stopping. Deep blue eyes that seemed to pierce right through you. I would have woke up screaming and crying too. Though you just cried. I would have done both. WHEW that was scary,. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Helllo Pastoral,
I just finished reading your piece of TRUTH AND LOVE. it was a short but good piece. I do have a question. What is the meaning of the last sentence? "lost in urbanity' what is that. I know what an urban area is but I don't ever see the word urbanity. So, I dont' know. Please email me and let me know. I liked your piece it was very good. I hope t his finds you well and all the best to you. Beeline!!!!{image:1644262].
Hello Oly,
I just finished reading your piece of ONE LAST JOURNEY. It was a sad piece but good. One never knows the future. One cannot predict what will happen in the next few minutes of time. You brought that out in your piece. You did a good job. It was a good read. I hope this findsyou well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Miss Brittany,
We meet again. I just finished reading your piece of THE ONE. It was a good read and one that was very well done. Isn't young love grand? It sounds like you are really in love with this guy. The way he touches you sends shivers down your spine but warms your heart. I know what that is like. You have done a good job. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello perfect pretence,
We meet again and so soon. I just finished reading your piece of ROSES ARE RED. It was a good read but a sad piece. The love seemed to be there from you going to the other person and in so much of a heart that was glowing. However, there was rejection on his part and it left you lonely. I can understand the whimpering you were starting to do when you said r r r roses are red. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Lettia,
I have just finished reading your piece of LITTLE GIRL. It was a good piece. You had me right up to the part where you mentioned that it was her. She looked beyond a door and all the other things you said then you find the girl looking at herself. It was kind of hard to take what she saw. Meaning? Her cold blue lips. To me that meant that she was dead. I hope I am wrong on that note. But I feel that is what you were speaking. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Karen,
O I just finished reading your piece of I CAN'T LET YOU GO. It was a beautiful but sad piece. I was reading and it seemed that you were talking about your lover. I kept reading and found it was your son that you were speaking. This is really sad that someone had taken and emptied a gun inside the body of your son. I hope that things will get better for you. I don't know how but I hope so anyway. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello sydneyy,
I just finished reading youir piece of YOU'LL BE ALRIGHT. It is a poem and a good one. I don't see where it could have been a song for there is no chorus. It was only one verse. There was no bridge to it either. you made the person feel that they would be all right. That part was good,. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello BTek,
I just finished reading your piece of BORDERLINES (BOOK). It was an interesting read. There are some words in here that i would never would have used for anything. However, I am an adult and could use them if I chose to do it. Wonder whatever happened to Shaggy? is a good question. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello perfect pretence,
I just finished reading your piece of HEARTBREAK. It wasn't an easy read. There were some words in here I couldn't understand. Like for example, Vena Can'ta pump, and Systole. i dont' know what either of these two words mean so I couldn't give you a good review on the subject. I do know what a bundle of hysteria is and it is shown in this piece very well. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Semi-circle,
We meet again. I just finished reading your piece of TEENAGERS. For one thing it is hard to believe that you are a teenager. You write like you have been writing for years. It was a good piece but sad too. The last line of the piece touched me. You are uncertain about things to come from what I read and that it is sad. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello MissBrittanyNicole,
I just finished reading your piece of FEAR. It was a sad but good read. it is always sad when someone you love is away from you. Especially for a week at a time. One can't help but wonder what in the world happened to them. It is scary to say the least. I would like to know that he is okay and that he called you silly. That would make everything right. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!{image:1644262].
Hello Trigger,
I just finished reading your piece of NAME ACRONYM, It spelled out your name beautifully. It was a good read. I wish that more people would do this sort of writing. It is colorful and good. I liked the last letter E enabler. So you enable people to do things do you? That is a good trait to have. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello perfect pretence,
I just finished reading your piece of MIRROR. I was looking for more of a good thing but your words were short and sweet just the way I like them. It makes perfect sense to not look into the mirror if you dont' want to see the real you standing before it. You did a good job with this. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!{image:1644262].
Hello Ragingbuddist,
I just finished reading your piece of SUN MOON PARK. I thought to myself as I was reading that you were talking about nature and the beauty of it. So, I kept on reading the same thing occurred. Then I reached the last stanza and found that you were speaking of three women. I felt foolish. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Lettia,
I see we meet again. i just finished reading your piece of PRETTY COLORS. It was a great piece. There is something magical about a painting. The soul of the painter is in it. He or she has a built in drive to allow them to paint as is true with the writers we have in our day. You made this one come to life. I appreciate that for it showed me the pups and the other things you saw in his paintings. i hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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