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Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Dakota,
We meet again. I just finished reading your piece of NOT WHAT YOU THINK. it was a good piece. It was very short. I like them short and sweet. You did an excellent job. The last line cuts it for him doesn't it? But that's not what you think. is a great line to close out the piece. You did well. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of Jewelry  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello LA Sinn,
I just finished reading your piece of JEWELRY. It was a dark tale. One that was full of warmth to begin with and then it turned bitter. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You have done an excellent job. I don't like it that she planned to kill her husband. But that was what she was going to do wasn't it? That is the dark part. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Malcolm,
We meet again and it is a good meeting. I loved your piece of THE PROBLEM WITH AGE. It made an awful lot of sense to me. When you're young there are few people who hear what you have to say. When you get older there is the same dilemma. Few people are willing to understand where you are coming from and will not learn what you have to say to them. You covered this well. I hope this finds you well. and all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Malcolm,
i just finished reading your piece of MY PRAYER TO DEATH. It was a dark piece. You prayed to the Grim Reaper. That is morbid. I am sorry but I hope the prayer wasnt' answered. I do hope this is fiction anyway. There is Someone to pray to for your needs everyday and believing in Him you get your answers. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of We will never be  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Malcolm,
We meet again I just finished reading your p iece of "WE' WILL NEVER BE. What a sad piece this is. There is a you and her but it isn't a we in the equation. That is sad. You love her and wanted her to be yours. You wanted to give yourself to her. But there isn't a we. That is really sad. I hope this is fiction and not true. I feel for you if it is. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Pat,
This is a good piece. I just finished reading your piece of SO WILL HE KEEP ME. Oh the beauty of nature is seen throughout this piece. It is a good read and one where the structure is solid. You made me see the doe and the other animals in the woods. A great picture this was and you did through your words. I thank you for sharing this. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of Tiny Voices  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Hermoine,
I just finished reading your piece of TINY VOICES. It was a good but sad read. There are so many tiny voices today that go unheard. You hit the nail on the head so to speak. I enjoyed the read. The structure was solid. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of The Child  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Ashley,
We meet again. I just now finished reading your piece of THE CHILD. It was a good piece. One that inspired me to write something like it. You found in the piece a boy who didn't need to choose his friends for they all made up who the boy was. I think that is awfully good how you did this. It took some imagination and you have it. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
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Review of My Love  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Dragonfly,
We meet again I just finished reading your piece of MY LOVE. It was a very good read. You said so much in such a short span of time. You made it sound so lovely. And it was something free about the piece. You did a good job. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of Hollow Life  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hello Sofei,
We meet again. I just finished reading your piece of HOLLOW LIFE. It was a sad piece for sure enough. The pain this girl had was enormous. There was no other way out for her except to kill herself. it is always sad to lose anyone and a young girl is especially sad. You made a believer out of me and that is the sign of a good writer. You did it! I hope this finds you well.And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of Karla  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Silly chicken,
I just finished reading your piece of KARLA. It was a wonderful read. One that was romantic and special. The love was very much there for anyone to read and see. You are in love withthis person of whom lights your days and nights. There is spring and summer mixed in the piece and what beautiful times of the year for this to be brought out. I hope this finds you well.
and all the best toyou. Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review by Beeline
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello,
This is a good contest. I have thought about entering but don't know what the prompt is to do that. I hope that you have many people to enter the contest. The prizes are worth the entering. I found what is acceptable and what isn't acceptable. That is always good to know. I thank you for the contest and hope to enter at a later date. Beeline!!!!! (image:1644262}.
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Review of The One  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Miss Brittany,
I have reviewed this piece before with a 4.5 stars. I have re-read it again and find that I was too quick to post a reply. I have rated it a 5.0 now and hope that will put a smile on your face. It is a romantic piece and one that is enjoyable. I liked the last line best. You did a good job with this piece. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Wookibus,
We meet again. I just finished reading your piece of A LESSON IN LAMENTING. It was a good story. There was sadness in it though and the thoughts of my own Grandfather on my mom's side of the family came rushing back. You told a good tale. I liked it very much and sad that you lost your grandpa. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** ,.
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Review by Beeline
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello William,
I just finished reading your piece of THE MAIDEN BY THE BAY. it was a haunting good story. The descriptions of everything was beautiful. One could see the moon with you. One could hear the sounds that you heard. It was all a great piece of writing. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of IN HARM'S WAY  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello Oldwarrior,
I just wanted to say thank you for your service to our country. I just finished reading your piece of IN HARMS WAY. It was a tough piece to write not for sure but I think it was. You certainly added muchto this for being in the service yourself. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you, Sir. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of Hallways  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Sofei,
I just finished reading your pieceof HALLWAYS, It was a short but good piece. You were mentioning about colors and their uses I believe. Some even yelled. I liked to think that this is a metaphor for life. Life is always changing and it is true about life that it is uncertain. I hope I got this right. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Ly Ella,
I just finished reading your piece of IN A DARK NIGHTS SKY. It was a good read. It was romantic. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You have done an excellent job. this someone must be very special to you. I wonder if the person is gone from you or what. You equate them to a star up in the heavens. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review by Beeline
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello Patricia,
I just finished reading your work of A WRITER'S GUIDE. I must say that you have all the bases covered in this piece. It is a good one. There are many interesting things I found in this piece that applies to me as a writer. There is nothing left that hasnt' been covered. I appreciate the way you did this piece. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Gabriel Daniel Albrigo,
I just finished reading your piece of BIOLOGICAL PROCESSES PART 2. It was a good read. It is strange to say that you are not God nor man. I thought that was something else again. I follow what you are saying though and it makes perfect sense. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
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Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Adriel,
I just finished reading your piece of UNDER THE SHADE OF LIGHT. It was a very good read. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You have done an excellent job. The structure was solid. Being in the Devil's essence is something I don't want to be. Your character was though and it is for their undoing. You made this so clear to me in the piece. You have done a good job as said before. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of Every Tear  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello Lettia,
We meet again. I am Beeline! I have read your work before and have just finished reading your piece of EVERY TEAR. It was a very good read. It was a sad piece, though. There was romance in the piece too. Love like this is unequaled to a one night stand in a word. Your love in this piece shown through. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review by Beeline
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Phillip V,
I just finished reading your piece of DARKNESS SEA ii THE BOY. It was a sad piece. But good, however. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You have done an excellent job. The structure was solid. It was a good read as said before. I can't imagine a child being in the sea of darkness but I am sure this boy was or was made believed to be. You made me believe. That is the sign of a good writer. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of Darkness  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello Mr. Smith,
I just finished reading your piece of DARKNESS. It was a good read. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. The job was done in an excellent manner. So true about the darkness it strikes from no where and there you are. I liked the piece very much. I hope this finds you well. and all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of Gossip  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Destiny Kae,
I just finished reading your piece of GOSSIP. It was a sad one for the whole thing was made up of gossip and that is something that shouldn't have happened. Friends don't turn on each other like that. It seems to me that they were an acquaintance and that was all they were to you. I am sorry for the way things turned out for you. I hope things are better now. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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