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Review of butterflies  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello starfish,
i just finished your very short piece of BUTTERFLIES. It was good and brought out many pictures for one to see. There are the butterflies and the bees. Then there are the rocks and sticks for another. A picture perfect work if I ever saw of one. The prettyflowers is another one picture that was very good. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of Toy Soldiers  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello Eva White,
What an imagination! I just finished reading your piece of TOY SOLDIERS. It was something fierce for sure enough. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece but there were scary words in the piece. Imagine a toy soldier becoming a real one. You made a believer out of me. I can't believe that I let it happen again but I did. Good writing. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello AlexisCram,
I just finished reading your piece of ITS A TRUE WONDER. It was a good read. There are so many things that make sense of this piece. You are so right about it all. We are no different than other people who get what they want and not consider the consequences of gettng what we want. You made a lot of sense about this whole piece. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of Just Keep Dancing  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Jessfirmin,
I just finished reading your piece of JUST KEEP DANCING.. It was a good read. I think you used dancing as a metaphor for life. If so this makes sense to me. You are dancing to the sound of a certain beat in life and it shows. You should be proud of this piece it is a good one. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello WistyOne,
I just finished reading your acrostic of IN THE BEGINNING. It was spelled out beautifully. It spoke volumes of good sense and was a very smart piece. You have done a good job here with t his one. I hope you are proud of it for you should be. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of an ex frienship  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello her_majesty,
I just finished reading your piece of AN EX FRIENDSHIP. This is a dark piece and one so many people should be told to read. It goes from being friends to being foes. To have one person stab another in the back is so wrong but a whole group is unheard of .You did a good job with this piece. It causes people to think about their friends and how close they really are. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of This World  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Rayen,
I just finished reading your piec of THIS WORLD. You are so right it was dark. The pain in this piece was amazingly sorrowful. I didn't like the part where you said that people die but no one cares. That is a sad commentary on the people of the world. You did a good job with this piece, though. It was a good read. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of playgroup  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Sinead,
I just finished reading your piece of PLAYGROUP. It was short but romantic. Love is so wonderful and a wonderful thing. You made it sound like if it were a game that someone was playing. We know that isn't the case at all. But it seems like a jackpot when we get it don't we. You made it so very good and that is what it should be. I hope this finds you well And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Ashley,
You did a good job with this piece. I just finished reading your piece of DURING A WINTER STORM. The pictures were there within the words you used. Your choice of words was excellent. It painted a cold, snowy type day where the snow covered everything in sight. it was beautifully done. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of Cold and Black  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Mr. Smith,
I just finished reading your piece of COLD AND BLACK. it was a good read. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. There was a beautiful story you told within the piece. There is a difference from a poem and story I know but this told a story of good things. Never going back to the world cold and black is something desired of all of us. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!![IMAGE:1644262}.
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Review of My Paper Heart  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello PoeticMisconceptions,
I just finished reading your piece of MY PAPER HEART. The rhyming scheme was beautiful. It is no wonder you couldnt' stop rhyming it is perfect the way it is. You were using the paper as a metaphor and it worked well. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of As the River Goes  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Ashley,
What a beautiful piece this is. I just finished reading your piece of AS THE RIVER GOES. Friendships are hard to find in this day and time. When you find someone who is a friend is worth holding onto that person. You projected this in your piece which is great. I enjoyed the read. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!{image:1644262].
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Review of mirror  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Brittany,
I just finished reading your piece of MIRROR. You captured it really well. It was a good read. Mirrors always show what the person wants to see. It is looking at you one way or the other. It dispels the fear in some people and enhances it in others. You did a good job. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of From East to West  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello PoeticMisconceptions,
I just finished reading your piece of MIRROR. It was a great read. There were pictures to be seen within the piece. One of them is where you were looking in the mirror and seeing your self. It gave a true reflection of yourself. However, it was different. You did an excellent job with this piece. I hope this findsyou well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .;
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Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Malcolm,
We meet again and so soon. I just finished reading your piece of INNOCENT FREEDOM, WISEST MISERY. It followed Ignorance is Bliss and very well at that. You made perfect sense to the whole issue. There was the optimist and the pessimist included in this piece and that is something you didn't have before. I liked this piece very much. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you,. Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Malcolm,
I just finished reading your piece of IGNORANCE IS BLISS. It does leave the question is it worth it? You have done well in writing this piece. There are no mistakes found in the whole piece. You have done an excellent job. Imagine no worries or cares or anything like that and being naieve all the time. it doesn't work too well. Not in my way of thinking. I hope you will have a good day and all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of Lost  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello JabViking,
I just finished reading your piece of LOST. It was a sad and dark piece. Seems to me you were caught up in a dream and dreaming all of these things that was going through your head. Then there was something to wake you up from the dream. I hope I am right in assuming this to be true. I liked it when you said the dream was over. At least you woke up safe and sound. That is mighty good to hear. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!!!{image:1644262].
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Review of The Inquisitorial  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello yellow,
I just finished reading your piece of THE INQUISITORIAL. It was a strange piece. Not one that I have ever seen before. It was a good read. You spoke of darkness as a friend almost. It seemed that way to me anyway. Your piece was one of darkness. There was some light to it but not much. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of The Room  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Davil,
What a good piece this is. I just finished reading your piece of THE ROOM. It was dark and sad. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. It was an excellent job. To come to find out it was you that you were talking about floored me. It was such a sad piece. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review by Beeline
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Dear Ashanti,
I just finished reading your piece of WITHIN THE HOUR, MY HOUR CHP.1. It was a good read. Imagine someone who could read minds and the other could predict the future. Amazing. Your character seemed well rooted in the world. that was good that she wasn't like the parents.. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!!!{image:1644262].
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Review of Voices  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Davil,
I just finished reading your piece of VOICES. The rhyming scheme was great. You did a good job. Voices deep in the mind is something else isnt' it? Pulling one way or the other and you dont' know who or which road to take. I think you conveyed this in your piece. I hope I am right about that. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of This Black Coffin  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello FallenAngels27,
I just finished reading your piece of THE BLACK COFFIN. It was gruesome. The detail was such that I believed that you were in the black coffin. What a sad state to be. imagine it if you can and I am sure you did imagine this piece. It was a good one. Good writers make people believe what they are told. I ibelieved you for sure enough. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of Bathroom Floor  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello FallenAngels27,
I just finished reading your piece of BATHROOM FLOOR. First of all I hope this is fiction. I hope you don't really cut yourself. However, you made me believe that you did. You described it beauti -fully. You were so precise in what you said that it was an easy to believe piece. Great job. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (3.0)
I don't know your real name but Not for my glory is something I abhor. You hide behind this name for use on Writing.com and you know nothing of glory of anything. I am not here to judge you and I dont' really because you have already been judge by God Himself. I hope that you can live with yourself writing something like this. I hope this is not considered harrassment for if it is then I can stand to lose my membership. I hate the idea of that. Ijust know that I wouldn't want to put my okay on a piece like this. I rated this an average 3.0. That is as far as I can go on this one. I hope your other work is a lot better than this one. cubby
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Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello letterbox,
I just finished reading your piece of WORTH LIVING. It was a sweet little piece. It seems you are thanking someone or God for the joy you feel. It is a graceful piece that you are thanking this someone or God and it is a great read. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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