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Review by Beeline
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Sabre,
I just finished reading your piece of THE HISTORY OF OUR LOVE. I need my Kleenex. This was a tear jerker for sure. Everything was so descriptive. You made me feel like I was in the collapsed building with them. Now that is good writing. You made a believer out of me. I like that so very much. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Malcolm,
I just finished reading your piece of OH WHAT PATHETIC LIES. So true, so true, so true. We do tell ourselves lies about things in our life. You have hit the nail on the head so to speak about this piece. It is a great one. You have done well with no mistakes or anything out of line. Good job. I hope this finds you well and all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Helllo Mscassie,
Glad to make your acquaintance. I just finished reading your piece of USER NAME ...MSCASSIE. It was a great story. I didn't know about the kind of bird you were mentioning but I am sure that you got the whole run down on the bird. So it is flightless. what a wonder that is. Anyway, I enjoyed your story of your user name and will remember it for a long time to come. I hope this finds you well and all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of Savory Fear  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello Fox,
it is Beeline again. I just finished reading your piece of SAVORY FEAR. It wasn't as good as the one before it. There was something missing in the piece and I can't tell you what that piece was that is missing but it missed something I was looking for in this one. You did a good write for sure enough. It was all without errors and such. It was a good read. it just missed something that I was expecting. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** ..
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Review of Summer Memories  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello teen15writer,
We meet again and so soon. I just finished reading your piece of SUMMER MEMORIES. It was a good read. You did well with this piece. The structure was solid. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. Imagine the two of them taking care of you Was something else for sure. It was a beautiful story. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of Nyra's Gift  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello teen15writer,
I just finished reading your piece of NYRA'S GIFT. I rated it a 5.0 for it is that good. You have done a great job with this piece. I didn't quite understand at the beginning but later found out you were talking about a wolf. Your authorpomorphism was great. To say the least. You kept me on the edge of my seat for the whole story. That is something most cant' do but you did. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!!{image:1644262].
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Review of Myself  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Destiny Kae,
I just finished reading your piece of MYSELF. It was a good read. I was reading along and felt that her enemy would be someone or something so grotesque that you wouldn't want to meet them or it. You said it wasn't the girl or the boy so it had to be something. I didn't know that it was herself that she was speaking. A very good piece is this one. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of Only For My Soul  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello Fox,
We meet again. I just finished reading your piece of ONLY FOR MY SOUL. It was a good piece but a sad one. The poor beggar in this was really something else again. He was worthless as a beggar. Yet there was something redeeming about him as everyone is. I liked it when you opened your heart to him. That was the good part of this piece. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of Season of Flowers  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Fox,
I just finished reading your piece of SEASON OF FLOWERS. It was a beautiful piece. One could see the majestic snows and the flowers fading away. But then the warm summer winds have their part in the piece too. Beautiful all the way through. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!{image:1644262].
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Review of First Cut  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Clare,
I just finished reading your piece of FIRST CUT. It was a good but sad read. It seems you are a self mutilator and that is one thing I can't understand. There is no reason to cut yourself for any reason. Be it a high or a low time in your life and cut yourself is wrong. I hope this is fiction anyway. That way I will feel better about the piece. You made a believer out of me though for sure enough. I hope this finds you well and all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review by Beeline
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello I Promis You,
I just finished reading your piece of fA FIRST DATE WITH DAISY. It was a very good read. there was so much in this piece that was kind of funny but it all made sense to me. She was pondring about it as to what to do next. Like wanting to jump into his arms. That was kind of funny. I n a word anyway. But when he gave her the daisies it was such a beautiful moment in the piece. I enjoyed the read. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello The Silenced,
I just finished reading your piece of A LIFE WITHOUT YOU. I thought it was going to be something differen than it is. I hope you are just writing this and not experiencing the art of cutting one self. I call it an art for they know what veins to hit and ones not to hit to make it a suicide. I hope you are not a self mutilator. If so, seek professional help for it is out there for you. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of Happier times.  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello arthury,
We meet again. I just finished reading your piece of HAPPIER TIMES. So, the word was Hello. I can see that now and wondered about it before I finished reading the piece. I thought what word was it that she was or he was mentioning. Having finished the piece i got the word and the word was Hello. I can see it now. As I said before. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of Newbie Again  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello I Promis You,
I just finished reading your piece of NEWBIE AGAIN. I can understand why you called the poem this way. It is so true with every new experience that you are a newbie. That nothing stays the same. It is all new inside and out. I think you did an excellent job with this piece. There is no room for improvement. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of Damaged Goods  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello 17Cherry,
I just finished reading your piece of DAMAGED GOODS. It was a sad read but a good one. You were using these things as metaphors for the heart as far as I could tell. Well, the sad part is the thing of having half a heart. It is sad to not have a whole one. One that is sheltered in love and devotion. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!{image:1644262].
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Review of Bliss  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Regina,
We meet again. I just finished reading your piece of BLISS. I have to say it was a good piece but not as good as the first one I reviewed. That is why I rated it a 4.0. there was romance in this piece. It was so very interesting. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** . You might want to edit this piece and not have the message so far apart from the first thought to the last part separated. Join them together. It would make it better.
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Review of That Memory  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello 17Cherry,
I just finished reading your piece of THAT MEMORY. it took in a whole lifetime of being with someone special. It was a beautiful piece. But it was sad toward the end. You have alot of memories to think about don't you? I think you have written this well. It is so clear and concise. It didn't drag on and on. I liked that very much. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of Alone- Part Three  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello RagerEdge,
I just finished reading your piece of ALONE-PART THREE. It was an interesting piece. Your words painted many pictures that I was able to see. You did a good job. You made a believer out of me. That to me is the sign of a good writer. To make someone believe what they're being told. You did it. I hope this finds youy well. And I wish you all the best.. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of Love Waits  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello wookibus,
We meet again. I just finished reading your piece of LOVE WAITS. It is a good piece. One with romance and some great pictures to be seen through your words. Your choice of words was great. One could feel the emotion as they read this piece. I know I did. You painted a great picture within your words. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello wookibus,
I just finished reading your piece of THE GIFT (IN YOUR HANDS). It was a good piece. There is an artist at work in this piece. And they with every stroke paint something beautiful. One thing to be remembered by all who see it. You are an artist as well painting this picture of the painter. I hope this findsyou well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Rebecca,
We meet again. This is Beeline!!! I just finished reading your piece of INNOCENCE PERSONIFIED. It was a good piece. One could see the children looking at you with innocent eyes. One could hear the sounds they make and the heart of love that is theirs to share. I liked the part where you said about not judging them. That is a beautiful statement. It was all a good piece. All the way around. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of A Day Spent  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello njames51,
I just finished reading your piece of A DAY SPENT. It was a good piece and one of tranquility. One got lost in the reading of this piece. Thinking to themselves of the great things that they have experienced. If I am right you spoke of all the four seasons in this piece. Another good picture it was too. I hope this findsyou well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of Time to Sleep  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello darkadan,
We meet again and so soon. I just finished reading your piece of TIME TO SLEEP. I liked the piece very much. The lil spots were the stars up in the heavens. You wondered if they would be your light for the night while you played. I like that so very much. You have great pictures here within the piece. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of Youthful Night  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello darkadan,
I see we meet again. I just finished reading your piece of YOUTHFUL NIGHT. This was a good piece. It was talking about bringing forth the sunshine in a person's life if I am correct. We were admonished to not regret the sunshine but embrace it. I hope I am right in this assumption. You have a good piece on your hands. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of Walking  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Kilo,
I just finished reading your piece of WALKING. it was a good piece and one that is shared by many who feel the same way. One falls there is hope that one will pick that person up so they may continue on what they were doing. I liked the part where you said "Let's go to a different place that's all the same". That was a good line. Life is like that isn't it? It is different but yet it is all the same. I hope this finds you well. and all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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