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Review of My Saturday Slide  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
To the Child,
I just finished reading your piece of MY SATURDAY SLIDE. It was a good story. Don't you think that the Pirate Ship Park should have been capitalized? it was your favorite park after all. The story was funny and also horrific as well. it was a long way down from the roof You made it so clear that it was a good read. Thank you for sharing this with us on WDC. I hope this finds you well. and all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello KingMo82,
I just finished reading your piece of CONCEPT OF A FRIEND. It was a good read. There are many things in here that I agree. A friend is someone who has what another wants or needs. I liked to think that I have had many friends over the years but I find I can count only a few of them that actually were my friends. There are many acquaintances but very few friends. You have done well with this piece. It makes perfect sense to me. I am glad that you wrote it. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Bacia,
I just finished reading your piece of WIND OF PASSION BREEZE OF LOVE. It was a lovely tribute to your mother and also dad. For in this you could see the love that was there. He used metaphors of the breeze and the wind as love. it is a wonderful piece and so glad that you shared it with us. It is hoped that you are doing well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of As I Found Love  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello nurulnabilahh,
I just finished reading your piece of AS I FOUND LOVE. It was a good read. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You have done an excellent job. It is about love as I got that but I didnt' understand it all. I was wondering if you'd email me and explain the piece to me. I'd be so grateful. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of The Crate  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello Lainy,
I just finished reading your piece of THE CRATE. It was a good read though one that was full of adventure. You made a believer out of me for believing that you were in a crate. That is the sign of a good writer to make people believe what you tell them. I was convinced. it was sad at the end for it mentions about you dying. or better put your character dies in the piece. That is sad. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of The Verdict  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Prof Moriarty,
I just finished reading your piece of THE VERDICT. It was a good read but also a sad one. For the livelihood of these men was at stake and they had lost the fight. It was terrible that Abdul wasn't able to teach his son about the independence of fishing and therefore providing for his family. It was really sad. I hope this finds you well. You made a believer out of me and that is a sign of a good writer. keep up the good work. And all the best to you. Beeline!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Silver Ghost,
I just finished reading your piece of THE SUN IS MY ENEMY. i was attracted to the piece by way of the title. I wondered how could the sun be anyone's enemy. Then as i began to read, I was made aware of your disease. The part I liked best was when you were describing your gloves. I love gloves any kind of them. The elbow length ones really sounds boss. I wouldn't mind having a pair for myself. However, thankfully I don't suffer from the same disease that you do. I cant' walk now I am in a wheelchair and have been for five or almost six years now. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!{image:1644262].
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Review of Quiet Attraction  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Set in Stone,
I just finished reading your piece of QUIET ATTRACTION. It was a good read and one that is endearing. There was romance in the piece and a lovely sentiment it was too. You are speaking to your love and wanting to see her before you go and wasn't able. That was the sad part of the piece. But there will be other times for you seeing her though. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review by Beeline
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello almost Alice,
I just finished reading your piece of HE WHO DARED TO LOVE. It was a sad but good piece. The man was confident in his surroudnings and all. He found her as his first love. She was everything to him and he loved her. Then she goes and finds another man. How sad this is for the main character. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of Creativity ?  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello jonisen,
I just finished reading your piece of CREATIVITIY? it was a good acrostic. You did a good job. I love to do acrostics, too. It is such a beautiful picture when it is done. Don't you think so? The only problem I had with it was the second I imitating God. One cannot do that and for it to be worthwhile. I hope you will agree. But it made a good line in the poem. Great job. Beeline!!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of Please Dad  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello Kilo,
We meet again. I just finished reading your piece of PLEASE DAD. It was good but sad. I found no mistakes in the piece and it was a good read. Your dad and you went through some times didn't you. From the bicycle and the wreck that you had on it and the skinned knees and all. He was right there for you. I am glad that you wrote this tribute to your dad. I am sure that he is veyr proud of you wherever he may be now. I believe you said he died. Well, in Heaven I am sure he is smiling. All the best to you. And I hope this finds you well.
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Review of Atlantic Wedding  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Rebecca,
We meet again. I just finished reading your piece of ATLANTIC WEDDING. it was a beautfiul haiku. One could see the lighthouse. One could sense the feelings of the wedding. There were beautiful pictures to be seen within this piece. You have done a great job. I love haikus and you did an excellent job on this one. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Rebecca,
I just finished reading your piece of SEARCHING FOR ANSWERS. It was a good but sad read. from what I gathered out of this piece the person you were with was going to die. And they eluded you and wanted to get away. But you found the note that was in his coat. I think it is sad whenever a person has to die and they know they are going to die. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of The Rain  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Kilo,
We meet again. I am glad you wrote this piece about the rain. It makes perfect sense to me. I just finished reading your piece of THE RAIN. needless to say it was a good piece. Rain can mean alot of things to different people. You see new tomorrows and others see sorrow. I liked your outlook on the rain more than the others. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!![Image:1644262}.
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Review of When I'm gone  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Semi circle,
I just finished reading your piece of WHEN I'M GONE. It was a good but sad read. The love that you had for this person has been lost. The memories you used to have and they were good ones now pague you to the core. It is really a sad piece and one that I am sorry I chose to read for the pain of it was much. However, it was as said before it was a good read. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello almost Alice,
I just finished reading your piece of WHERE ARE YOU GOING? It was a good read and one that I thought was being asked or told by the man in the relationship. I didn't know it was the female character. I just know that it was heartbreaking and sad for the man to keep going away. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hello Oldwarrior,
I just finished reading your piece off THE HALLOWEEN GHOUL. It was a good read and one that was funny. Not being funny that you're dead or anything like that it is just funny for what you said. I liked the pictures it showed in this piece. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of Ticket for Two  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Hannah,
I just finished reading your piece of TICKET FOR TWO. It was a good read. One that put you on an imaginary path of excitement. You did really well. I hope you are proud of it for you should be. Imagine flying to Mars. That is one thing I can't fathom or even think about. I'd rather stay on the ground. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of Lost Today  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello Kilo,
I just finished reading your piece of LOST TODAY. It was a good but sad read. It is something you wouldn't forget in a good while to be accused of something that you did not do and worse yet to be punished for it. I hope the real culprit was the one to pay after all. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello libralover,
We meet again. I just finished reading your piece of MISSING ME: DESPAIR. As was the first chapter this one was good too. It seems the girls were destined to ruin the party. They crashed the party and went on in like they owned the place. It was a good read. Funny to say the least. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of Desires  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello wintryme,
I just finished reading your piece of DESIRES. You have the greatest imagaination. Imagine you wanting the sun to shine and the stars to be dark and all of that. You want the wind to blow and for you to make a wand out of it. There are other things in here that were far fetched but it made a good read. Good going. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of Uneasy  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Set in stone,
I just finished reading your piece of UNEASY. It was a very good write. You did an excellent job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. It is true love that you are talking about here. It can be seen within the words. You have spelled out your heart to the person with whom you're in love with. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of Slave me  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello libralover,
I just finished reading your piece of SLAVE ME. It was a good write. You did well in making this up. It is sad that there were slaves to begin. There were many things that went on while there were slaves. As you know there were unwanted preganancies. The men having a time with their slave women and such. It was a rough time back then. Look how far we have come since that time. You did a great job with this piece. One could see the slaves and all that you wrote about. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of Soular Eclipse  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Laura M,
I just finished reading your piece of SOULAR ECLIPSE. It is a good piece. Therre were no mistakes found in the whole piece. It was a beautiful picture of nature in a word the way that I saw it anyway. I liked the last line the best. "And let the moon win". What a good line this is! I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of My Daughter  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
I was going to rate this a 5.0 but since you didnt' want ratings I will give this review. I just finished reading your piece of MY DAUGHTER. It was a heartwarming piece and one for the books to share. You did such a good job with this. It is very beautiful. Your daughter is your life from what i got out of the piece. And that is wonderful. You'd never leave her and that is also wonderful. You did a good job with this piece and I am very glad that I chose to read it. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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