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When the world went silent, the water plant became the last place to breathe.

#1101249 added November 19, 2025 at 8:18am
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Chapter 19 - Breaking Point
Evening light sat low across the yard, turning the cleared dirt into a flat bronze sheet. Kids were finishing food. Engineers were checking gauges. Guards were rotating shifts. On the surface, everything said calm.

But underneath, the whole plant was holding its breath.

Everyone felt it.

Two men had been circling each other for days, and the yard knew damn well the orbit was about to collapse.

Rourke stood by the fuel drums with Stacks, Burns, and Hawk—his little shadow unit. His arm was still braced from the stiff-arm strike I’d driven through his face days earlier. The bruising had settled into a deep purple mask that made him look half dead already.

He saw me walking his way.

A slow, venomous grin spread across his face.

“There he is,” he said loud, projecting for the yard. “The man with the soft hands.”

Burns laughed. Stacks smirked. Hawk didn’t laugh, didn’t smile… but he didn’t walk away either. That was the tell.

I stopped ten feet out.

“Rourke,” I said. “We’re not doing this tonight.”

“Oh,” he said, stepping closer. “Yes. We are.”

I didn’t move. Didn’t raise my hands.
Back in Corrections, one Code Blue brought the cavalry. Boots slamming concrete. Radios screaming. A whole building storming in before anyone had time to bleed.

Right now?

There was no cavalry.

Just him and me.

No backup.
No safety net.
No one coming.

Just two men settling something the yard had been waiting on.

I said it calm, controlled, without raising my voice.

“Tell me something, Rourke… what the hell do you think they could possibly see in you?”

His grin widened.

“A real leader. Not a badge checker pretending to be one.”

The yard stilled.

He stepped right into my space, breath hot and sour.

“You’re not made for this world, Johnson.”

“You sure?” I whispered.

He swung first.

And he caught me clean.

A right cross that detonated on my cheekbone. My vision flashed white. Gravel shifted under my boots as I staggered backward.

Someone whispered, “He rocked him…”

Rourke surged, throwing jab-jab-hook into my ribs. Breath knocked out of me. I dropped to one knee, the world tilting sideways.

He circled me like a predator tasting blood.

“Get up, gate-guard!” he shouted. “Show them you’re more than a uniform!”

I pushed myself up slow.

The yard was silent. No one was cheering—this wasn’t entertainment. This was judgment.

He charged again.

This time I moved.

His punch sailed past my ear—an inch off target—and he overcommitted. His momentum dragged him forward.

Opening.

I pivoted and drove a precise, brutal kick straight into the common peroneal nerve on the outside of his right leg.

His leg buckled instantly.

Gasps rippled through the yard.

He snarled, grabbed at me, and tackled me to the ground. My back slammed into dirt, and he rained fists down—wild, furious, blinded by ego. One split my eyebrow. Another clipped my jaw. A third hit my shoulder so hard my arm went numb.

He clawed at my face—literally clawed—raking dirt and nails across my skin like he wanted to brand me.

I trapped his wrist, rolled hard, and we tumbled.

Fists. Knees. Elbows. Dirt. Blood.
No technique now—just survival.

He mounted me and hammered down punches, screaming, “Say it! Say I’m better!”

I spit blood in his face.

That stunned him long enough.

I bucked, rolled, scrambled up. He staggered upright too, wiping blood and dirt from his eyes.

I charged.

He head-butted me.

My skull rang like metal hit with a sledge. My legs threatened to quit. I grabbed his shirt and blasted a forearm into his jaw. He answered with a savage elbow into my ribs.

We were fighting like two exhausted animals, lungs burning, bodies overheating fast.

He grabbed my head.

I grabbed his.

And I rammed his face straight into my knee.

Cartilage shattered.
His nose exploded.
Blood poured instantly.

The yard recoiled.

He dropped to his knees, listing sideways, vision wobbling.

I grabbed his right arm.

He threw a weak left, but his balance was gone. His breath came ragged and wet.

This was the turn.

I wrenched his arm behind him and forced him down into the dirt. His face slammed hard, kicking up dust.

I drove my knee between his shoulder blades. One inch more and I could paralyze him. Two inches and I’d collapse his trachea.

“Submit,” I said.

“Go to hell.”

“Submit.”

“DO IT!” he screamed. “SHOW THEM WHO YOU REALLY ARE!”

The yard froze.

Everyone watching.

Everyone learning something dangerous about both of us.

He kept thrashing, refusing to concede even as his strength drained out.

I shifted.

Left leg over his face.

Right leg across his ribcage.

His arm locked between my thighs.

And I pulled.

CRACK.

His scream wasn’t human.
It tore out of him—raw, guttural, primal.
Echoing off metal tanks, cutting clean through the yard.

His elbow snapped clean. The arm bent the wrong way at the joint.

He collapsed, clutching it, gasping through spit and blood and dirt.

Stacks and Burns sprinted to him. Hawk stayed still—eyes on me, re-evaluating everything he ever thought he knew.

Whispers:

“He had it coming…”
“RJ killed him…”
“No he didn’t—he held back…”
“I ain’t crossing RJ…”
“That crack… holy shit…”
“Rourke picked the wrong man…”

I stood up slow, face covered in blood, ribs screaming, vision blurry.

Neal arrived late, boots pounding gravel. She saw Rourke on the ground, bent arm, screaming into dirt. Then she looked at me—bloody, breathing hard, barely standing.

“What the hell happened?” she demanded.

“He pushed,” I said. “I pushed back.”

She scanned the faces around her. The yard was silent, unified in a way that hadn’t existed until this moment.

She nodded once.

“It’s done.”

And everyone accepted it.

Because after tonight?

No one questioned me.

And no one underestimated Rourke again…
because breaking him wasn’t dominance.

Breaking him was a warning.

To him.
To them.
To me.

And we were all about to pay for it.

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ANONYMOUS FIELD LOG — ENTRY A
CLASSIFIED — PROJECT ECHO CLEARANCE REQUIRED:
Internal cohesion at CWP destabilized by escalating behavior from dissident Rourke, formerly FEMA military personnel extracted from MCU confinement during Subject Zero’s rescue operation. Direct confrontation between Subject Zero and Rourke resulted in decisive incapacitation of the dissident via joint fracture. Anchor resonance remained stable; population realigned under Subject Zero’s authority following the engagement. Fracture event neutralized immediate threat but long-term volatility persists as remaining personnel reassess internal power structures.
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ANONYMOUS FIELD LOG — ENTRY B
CLASSIFIED — PROJECT ECHO CLEARANCE REQUIRED:
NLC internal cohesion deteriorating further. Two altercations across ration and shift disputes resulted in staff injuries; disciplinary action delayed due to leadership resource strain. Increased Phase III resonance vocalizations recorded outside east perimeter, triggering heightened anxiety among civilians. Command showing signs of operational fatigue. Embedded position remains uncompromised; facility stability trending toward critical threshold.
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