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Plugger: John*In*Va
The Plug: An expression of love to one from afar.

Poetry
Pluggee: You Know How I Care     (E)
Genre(s): Relationship :: Psychology :: Romance/Love
Description: A poem about separation from a loved one.

Plugger: elizjohn
The Plug: Been a while since I've visited this page. Looking for some feedback. It's the edited version for a contest, I can't release the long one yet for judging purposes, but I'd like to know if the storyline is solid. It says "dark", but so not by much. Thx!

Short Story
Pluggee: Writer's Block and The Muse     (13+)
Genre(s): Dark :: Comedy
Description: I was having a terrible bout of writer's block, so I decided to take it up with my muse.

Plugger: Cam Reed
The Plug: Poor Janine has the worst luck today. Will this encounter with a strange man be her end, or is this just the beginning?

Short Story
Pluggee: Wrong Place, Wrong Time     (18+)
Genre(s): Fantasy :: Horror/Scary :: Action/Adventure
Description: Sometimes a bad day just gets worse...

Plugger: LIS - Here Again!
The Plug: This is a work in progress; it's only a first draft, but I'd like your comments on it. There are a few spelling and grammar issues please ignore them. Did the story draw you in? Did you warm to Sophie and Alix? How about the Gigolo?

Short Story
Pluggee: The Gigolo     (E)
Genre(s): Emotional :: Inspirational :: Relationship
Description: It's very much a work in progress. This is a FIRST DRAFT. Remember that when you read.

Plugger: Walking Dude
The Plug: This is a bit longer than the other short stories I had exposited here on WDC. However, I hope it's engaging enough that you can get through it. If you'd like to review it, please do—the Auto Reward's as much as I can afford! It's a heroic fantasy. Enjoy!

Short Story
Pluggee: The Warrior's Song     (ASR)
Genre(s): Fantasy
Description: A warrior returns to his devastated home. But to heal the land, he must defeat a God.

Plugger: Diamond Dee
The Plug: Some more lyrical/poetry for you. . .while reading imagine piano music behind it. I'm dealing with some stuff-- found my place to get it out! Any and all critiques are welcome, whereas I have an open mind!

Other
Pluggee: Falling     (18+)
Genre(s): Emotional :: Personal :: Other
Description: Poem/lyrics about breaking up and being unable to emote in front of the other person.

Plugger: menacing queer
The Plug: Do you ever want to just tell someone off, but when you try, you get caught in your emotions and it just comes out as word vomit, not at all how you painstakingly rehearsed it in your head? This is how I handle it with finesse and style.

Critique
Pluggee: We always touch sky, silly boy     (18+)
Genre(s): Adult :: Dark :: Philosophy
Description: Slam Poetry: please read aloud. The effect is lost if you don't. Thanks.

Plugger: A.J. Barretts
The Plug: A book that I have been working on. Any comments appreciated. The final chapters will be added within the next week.

Novel
Pluggee: Darken's Return     (18+)
Genre(s): Fantasy :: Supernatural
Description: A vampire and werewolf saga against The Evil.

Plugger: Farooq~Wdc~My cup runneth over
The Plug: I would love to know where I went wrong with this story.

Short Story
Pluggee: The Shadow Zone     (13+)
Genre(s): Thriller/Suspense :: Psychology :: Drama
Description: A dark psychological tale of two brothers.

Plugger: nivekstar
The Plug: Fatten the Females from the White Knight Chronicles games

Interactive Story
Pluggee: White Knight Chronicles Female W.G.     (18+)
Genre(s): Fanfiction :: Fantasy :: Fantasy
Description: Females from the White Knight Chronicles games grow into fattys willingly are not

Plugger: keikei
The Plug: i was seven when a demon first came to me

Novel
Pluggee: Sins of a Woman     (18+)
Genre(s): Spiritual :: Emotional :: Romance/Love
Description: I was seven when a demon first came to me. . .

Plugger: AirLock
The Plug: This is my first time submitting a work anywhere. I write very little but wanted to see what people think. Comments are appreciated. Hope you enjoy.

Short Story
Pluggee: "Lunch" on the Go.     (13+)
Genre(s): Comedy
Description: Oddly enough this is a story based on true events that happen to my brother. Enjoy.

Plugger: Julia Tamzyn
The Plug: This was a contest entry, I'd be happy for any review and hope you enjoy it!

Short Story
Pluggee: Bob     (E)
Genre(s): Dark :: Relationship :: Nature
Description: A strange companion for the lonely nights

Plugger: turtlemoon
The Plug: Celebrate with me for those we have loved and lost, for our ancestors live on in heart and spirit.

Poetry
Pluggee: Spirit Dance     (E)
Genre(s): Cultural :: Environment
Description: Native American ancestors who have crossed over come back for the dance.

Plugger: turtlemoon
The Plug: Believe in star-crossed lovers, and a better end than Romeo and Juliet.

Poetry
Pluggee: Susana     (E)
Genre(s): Emotional :: Nature :: Romance/Love
Description: Personification. Hope for a friend who grieves a break in a love relationship.

Plugger: turtlemoon
The Plug: Fall into a casual step as we walk the bluff along the Mississippi River.

Poetry
Pluggee: We Three Walking Sticks     (E)
Genre(s): Experience :: Nature
Description: Three hikers along the Mississippi River bluffs remembering a Spring trekking experience.

Plugger: karebear
The Plug: My first post! This is probably a good part of the first chapter. I welcome any and all constructive feedback. :-)

Fiction
Pluggee: When Fate Laughs     (18+)
Genre(s): Drama :: Emotional :: Romance/Love
Description: The beginning of a story of a man who meets his soulmate - and she has no idea who he is

Plugger: Joto-Kai
The Plug: A paladin makes a speech about her own history. Short piece for a game character's background, but it stirs something in me. Perhaps you will agree? BTW Sigrun means "Sacred whisper of victory" or "rune of victory."

Fiction
Pluggee: Sigrun's Oath     (18+)
Genre(s): Inspirational :: Tragedy :: Fantasy
Description: Sigrun the survivor discusses how tragedy made her something more.

Plugger: strlcuckoo
The Plug: Two decades with little change.

Poetry
Pluggee: The Student     (E)
Genre(s): Educational
Description: To parents, teachers and other adults

Plugger: strlcuckoo
The Plug: Perhaps a man's journey

Poetry
Pluggee: Somehow     (E)
Genre(s): Romance/Love
Description: My journey to a semblance of maturity.

Plugger: vball1967
The Plug: Smell the roses or rush, rush, rush. You be the judge.

Essay
Pluggee: The Dinker     (E)
Genre(s): Family :: Inspirational
Description: How I enjoy "dinking" around the house much to the chagrin of my wife. :)

Plugger: Michael K
The Plug: What do I call this? A story? A thought? a limerick? it is a look at the horrifying aspect of today's trash culture... reviews, comments, feedback needed.

Short Story
Pluggee: Pop Dolls     (E)
Genre(s): Horror/Scary :: Opinion :: Satire
Description: There are creatures that walk amongst us, parading as humans...

Plugger: Tavis
The Plug: Just anything. I want to know if I'm a halfway decent writer. Critique the story.

Short Story
Pluggee: The Disaster     (E)
Genre(s): Sci-fi :: Dark
Description: Not everything that seems good is for the best. Society finds this out the wrong way.

Plugger: Avec
The Plug: A short trip through the wood.

Other
Pluggee: A Day in the Wood     (E)
Genre(s): Dark
Description: A walk in the woods

Plugger: natomas65
The Plug: These just leaked out of the many apertures in my cranium.

Other
Pluggee: Questions without Answers     (E)
Genre(s): Other
Description: Just asking.

Plugger: natomas65
The Plug: Fir those who have danced with a lion and those who have not.

Other
Pluggee: Samba With Simba     (E)
Genre(s): Other
Description: Dancing with the a lion with new edits

Plugger: natomas65
The Plug: For all the misplacers and their partners.

Poetry
Pluggee: I can't find my glasses, dear     (E)
Genre(s): Other
Description: an attempt at humor with new edits

Plugger: 4thPseudonym
The Plug: Need some more feedback. I'll be happy to exchange C&C on an item of your choice. :)

Fiction
Pluggee: A Day in the Life of Death     (13+)
Genre(s): Death :: Emotional :: Other
Description: A vision of death, playing on concepts like speed of thought and relativity of time-space.

Plugger: John*In*Va
The Plug: A man finally lets go.

Poetry
Pluggee: Letting Go     (E)
Genre(s): Romance/Love :: Relationship
Description: A man remembers lost love.

Plugger: John*In*Va
The Plug: A man who has lost his heart and frame of reference has turned into a hunter.

Poetry
Pluggee: The Reluctant Hunter     (E)
Genre(s): Relationship :: Romance/Love :: Psychology
Description: A poem about a sad goodbye

Plugger: safire_diaz
The Plug: Aliens invade, the mayhem starts

Interactive Story
Pluggee: Biological Nightmare     (18+)
Genre(s): Erotica :: Horror/Scary :: Drama
Description: Infused, invades bodies as a parasite. Can Shuka stop carnages?

Plugger: I was made with wings
The Plug: Please read and review! :)

Fiction
Pluggee: Sirena ~ Chapter One     (ASR)
Genre(s): Fantasy :: Action/Adventure :: Young Adult
Description: An orphan with new-found powers embarks on a journey to discover her heritage.

Plugger: I was made with wings
The Plug: Please read and review! :)

Fiction
Pluggee: Sirena ~ Prologue     (ASR)
Genre(s): Fantasy :: Action/Adventure :: Young Adult
Description: An orphan with new found-powers embarks on a journey to discover her heritage.

Plugger: She'sObsessed
The Plug: Claire is reunited w/ a best friend after 20yrs and finds out she knew him in a past life.

Chapter
Pluggee: The Demon Eblis-Chapter 1 (Revised)     (13+)
Genre(s): Supernatural :: Ghost :: Romance/Love
Description: Claire is reunited w/ a best friend after 20yrs and finds out she knew him in a past life.

Plugger: marcas
The Plug: a piece written about a relationship breakdown through a third party. What one lover can see, whilst the other is blinded with the actions of the third party, but eventually love is the victor. comments and/or reviews would be appreciated.

Prose
Pluggee: Unease     (E)
Genre(s): Emotional :: Personal :: Biographical
Description: Personal thoughts, emotions and feeling of past events.

Plugger: Butch50
The Plug: Humor. Fishing. Buzzards. Based partially on a true story. Tell me what you think.

Fiction
Pluggee: Fishing with Buzzards     (E)
Genre(s): Comedy :: Entertainment :: Animal
Description: Humor fiction story involving buzzards, fishing, and something of a mishap.

Plugger: Christopher Roy Denton
The Plug: I'm looking for readers interested in working through all the chapters of my novel and helping me to see what works and what doesn't. I'd be interested in a chapter-by-chapter exchange with other novelists. Thank you! :D

Chapter
Pluggee: Craven - Chapter One     (13+)
Genre(s): History :: Fantasy :: Action/Adventure
Description: Historical fantasy about historical people & Native Americans in the French & Indian War

Plugger: ZB
The Plug: A short description of one dream.

Fiction
Pluggee: A Dream     (E)
Genre(s): Fantasy :: Nonsense
Description: About a dream during sleep.

Plugger: Timbo
The Plug: Class warfare produces a bitter and and vengeful story of a panhandler and a successful executive who meet in an alley. The panhandler is a recruiter. The executive is on his way to his Mercedes. Two worlds collide.

Short Story
Pluggee: The Descent of Mister Size Tens     (18+)
Genre(s): Drama :: Dark :: Thriller/Suspense
Description: Bleak, bitter and angry class warfare. An executive and a panhandler meet in an alley.

Plugger: B. Hunter
The Plug: A dark and glum story that spawned in me when I did the dishes yesterday. Perhaps I should do that more and stop looking for ideas in the toilet. Feedback much appreciated.

Short Story
Pluggee: Let the River Flow     (13+)
Genre(s): Dark
Description: An old man asks Aiden to help his decaying gardens.

Plugger: Angel
The Plug: Would greatly appreciate reviews!

Poetry
Pluggee: Savior of France     (E)
Genre(s): Fantasy :: History
Description: A new twist on Joan of Arc...

Plugger: typingrhyme
The Plug: Good press for rivers for a change.

Poetry
Pluggee: RIVERS ROCK     (E)
Genre(s): Environment :: Nature :: Community
Description: A tribute to the rivers of our world

Plugger: Notablehail
The Plug: Entry for the May "What A Character" contest. Rates and reviews would be lovely. 500GPs for your efforts!

Fiction
Pluggee: Fateful Meeting     (13+)
Genre(s): Fanfiction :: Fantasy :: Contest Entry
Description: A young Barros Toldar attends a royal party in order to find a target of his latest hunt.

Plugger: Yuuyake
The Plug: Less than 200 words. Its for an assignment. Did I describe fire in terms of how it is not? This question is the most important. You must answer this first. This techniques is called Back-Door Technique if you know it.

Sample
Pluggee: The Dead Thing Called Fire (2)     (13+)
Genre(s): Other
Description: Opposite description of fire

Plugger: hebxii
The Plug: Almost finished! I'd love your opinion on this latest short story. Thanks for taking a look! :)

Short Story
Pluggee: Aloha Means Hello and Goodbye     (E)
Genre(s): Romance/Love
Description: Letting go means your arms are wide open to love again.

Plugger: His Divine Shadow
The Plug: If anyone cares, this i what Team Gadget is based off of.

Interactive Story
Pluggee: Super X     (18+)
Genre(s): Sci-fi :: Teen :: Friendship
Description: My original creation about a team of super heroes whose leader has a foot fetish

Plugger: His Divine Shadow
The Plug: Might as well do all my superhero/villain stories.

Interactive Story
Pluggee: The Z Team     (18+)
Genre(s): Sci-fi :: Erotica :: Young Adult
Description: You are Lexi, the leader of a team of supervillains and you have a foot fetish

Plugger: His Divine Shadow
The Plug: Views are in the double digits now, not bad for a month of being released.

Interactive Story
Pluggee: Team Gadget     (18+)
Genre(s): Sci-fi :: Erotica :: Teen
Description: Shanna from Super X forms her own team to help out DJ and her old teammates

Plugger: marcas
The Plug: I would appreciate any comments or reviews, to see if others feel the same as me, that we all have a warrior child buried deep inside.

Prose
Pluggee: The Warrior Child     (E)
Genre(s): Personal :: Emotional :: Self Help
Description: The fight against injustice,with truth and belief for the world, and those within it.

Plugger: hebxii
The Plug: First story I ever wrote, now revised. I would appreciate any comments, if you have the fortitude to read this long story. :)

Novella
Pluggee: A Fallen Leaf     (13+)
Genre(s): Romance/Love
Description: Sometimes love comes from the most unlikely places and in its own time.

Plugger: AJ Looking On The Bright Side
The Plug: While I'm finishing shaving my head, why not keep the crystal ball company? When I'm finished shaving my head, hope you're still having a ball. When my hair grows back, I hope that you'll still be there adding to the fun!!!

In & Out
Pluggee: Cheap Imitation Crystal Ball     (13+)
Genre(s): Activity :: Comedy :: Supernatural
Description: Are you psychic? ... I *knew* you were going to say that.

Plugger: alicem
The Plug: Hi guys, this is a piece exploring the emotions felt when you feel as though you're lost within yourself. I'm really looking for some comments on this piece as a younger writer; I need some feedback for the future. Thank you!

Short Story
Pluggee: Snapshots     (13+)
Genre(s): Dark :: Drama :: Emotional
Description: A short story exploring the contrast of hope and of despair in the darkest of places.

Plugger: Gervic
The Plug: Please read this dark poem. It's new and I badly need your reviews. Thanks guys.

Poetry
Pluggee: Dark Apparition     (E)
Genre(s): Other
Description: Dark Apparition

Plugger: Gervic
The Plug: Please review this item. A dark narrative!!!

Short Story
Pluggee: Rest In Peace     (13+)
Genre(s): Other
Description: A boy who wanted not to leave his mother.

Plugger: I was made with wings
The Plug: Take a look, you know you want to! :)

Short Story
Pluggee: Adventures of a Shop Girl     (E)
Genre(s): Personal :: Animal :: Comedy
Description: A silly little short story I wrote while bored at work. Maybe it will make you smile :)

Plugger: Raygunner
The Plug: Do we remember the mistakes made in the past? Do we learn from them?

Poetry
Pluggee: Histoy's Lament     (E)
Genre(s): Philosophy :: Educational :: Opinion
Description: A poem about how history is forgotten.

Plugger: Destiny
The Plug: Attempting a play, still doing character developement. Looking for useful feedback and to see if its too bitter... I apologize on advance for the swearing. :)

Monologue
Pluggee: 'Confusion'     (13+)
Genre(s): Drama :: Emotional :: Dark
Description: A character dev. for a play. *(Negative/bitter content)

Plugger: Ghostranch
The Plug: A short, simple poem written in the Lanturne form. Feedback welcome!

Poetry
Pluggee: Grief     (E)
Genre(s): Emotional :: Personal :: Experience
Description: Written in the Lanturne form. 5 lines, syllables: 1/2/3/4/1

Plugger: D J Fletcher
The Plug: First chapter of my first book, Follow the adventures of Darius, a renegade Mage on the run in a foreign land.

Other
Pluggee: Hunting Magic - Chapter 1     (13+)
Genre(s): Action/Adventure :: Fantasy :: Dark
Description: The first chapter of my book "Hunting Magic"

Plugger: Montesquieu
The Plug: A very short story of the Storming of the Bastille. Open to any critique, suggestion, etc.

Short Story
Pluggee: The Storming of the Bastille     (E)
Genre(s): History :: Action/Adventure
Description: Another short story. Please critique. I am aware the French may be wrong. Sorry in advance

Plugger: silence
The Plug: is the story difficult to follow?

Short Story
Pluggee: The dinner is in progress!     (18+)
Genre(s): Contest Entry
Description: The chance to be a hero is presented to an unlikely candidate.

Plugger: robertwriter
The Plug: A flash fiction story of an addict.

Short Story
Pluggee: Wonderful Things     (18+)
Genre(s): Other
Description: Flash Fiction

Plugger: robertwriter
The Plug: Typical walk in the park with a terrible surprise.

Short Story
Pluggee: Macabesity     (18+)
Genre(s): Horror/Scary
Description: Horror Story

Plugger: Robyn Red
The Plug: This is a short story I would really love reviews on.

Other
Pluggee: The Last Day I Seen Mom.     (13+)
Genre(s): Contest Entry :: Emotional :: Fanfiction
Description: The last time a young girl seen her mother.

Plugger: Vale-skin burned off chest
The Plug: Enjoy!

Poetry
Pluggee: Lonely Girl and the Soldier     (E)
Genre(s): Contest Entry :: Emotional :: Drama
Description: A little girl with a broken heart writing to a soldier away from his family.

Plugger: acookk
The Plug: Mommy and Daddy is surprise by their Daughter.

Short Story
Pluggee: You forgot to shut the door.     (18+)
Genre(s): Adult :: Comedy :: Children's
Description: Mommy and Daddy is surprise by their Daughter.

Plugger: Adrienne
The Plug: I rote this to commemorate the one-year anniversary of the Joplin tornado.

Poetry
Pluggee: One Town, One Heart     (E)
Genre(s): Other
Description: A poem I wrote to commemorate the one-year anniversary of the Joplin tornado.

Plugger: Matt Bohart
The Plug: He falls in love, and recalls his self destruction.

Short Story
Pluggee: Fury, Michael     (E)
Genre(s): Romance/Love :: Writing :: Psychology
Description: He falls in love, and recalls his self destruction.

Plugger: Bella Jade
The Plug: my mom wrote this

Poetry
Pluggee: Stranger in my house     (E)
Genre(s): Romance/Love
Description: hmm my mom wrote this poem sooooo

Plugger: Montesquieu
The Plug: Apart from constructive criticism and such, I need suggestions on lengthening the story. I'm not sure where to go from here, but I want to keep it as an account of the Black Death's arrival.

Short Story
Pluggee: The Ships of Genoa     (E)
Genre(s): History :: Dark :: Mystery
Description: One of my first. Critique welcome and appreciated.

Plugger: hebxii
The Plug: Love is music that feeds the spirit. I feel it. Have I expressed it here? thanks for any comments or suggestions you may have. :)

Poetry
Pluggee: Heartsong     (E)
Genre(s): Romance/Love :: Music
Description: A poem that speaks of the symphony of love.

Plugger: Victoria Mills
The Plug: A poem from my pre-arts award collection. I need it reviewed to put in my portfolio anything is appreciated.

Other
Pluggee: Wish     (E)
Genre(s): Other
Description: An example of pre-arts award work.

Plugger: Victoria Mills
The Plug: This is another poem for my arts award. i need honest reviews in my portfolio so anything is appreciated.

Poetry
Pluggee: Photograph     (E)
Genre(s): Other
Description: An example of pre-arts award writing.

Plugger: Victoria Mills
The Plug: I need to have my work reviewed for my arts award so any critique and criticism is appreciated as well as any positive comments. Thank you in advance to anyone who helps.

Poetry
Pluggee: Fairy Tales     (E)
Genre(s): Other
Description: An example of pre-arts award writing. A free verse poem written about fairy tales.

Plugger: Carol Ava
The Plug: I need to know if this type of writing is of interest. Does it read well, make sense, and flow easily. Any other suggestions would also be welcome. I am fairly new at this and any feedback will be welcome.

Monologue
Pluggee: Serendipitous Encounters     (E)
Genre(s): Emotional :: Philosophy :: Personal
Description: Thoughts on Life, God, and how we make sense of it all.

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