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| Wow I could see this how you described the beach and sand...and the water and the air and wind...I can see you trying to body surf...how cool...Keep On writing!!! This is the best dsescription of the ocean...since I have not been to galveston in 3 years... |
| I hope that you have the best flight you can going over seas...I too hate flying...Last time I flew was when my 7 yearold was 6weeks old...it was scary for me...that was the last time I flew...just rather drive... I hope that your trip to see your son will be fun...I know that you are going to enjoy being there no matter what you have to do...so that you can just give him a big hug and a great big kiss...that will take away all distractions flying there... |
| I am sorry about your friend...I hope that you will feel like you helped yourself with this later on in life... YOu know, I am glad that you decided to change your life around...before Matt died...HUn I am over 2 years clean from prescriptions pills and 2.5 years from alcohol...since you are pregnant you have that baby to look forward to holding...you need to keep focused on your family and all your life.... Honestly I am glad you are still here and not doing that...so that I can read in your port and enjoy writing... |
| The one paragraph, however, that grabbed me the most, and you might want to place at the very beginning of the text with slight modification, is: At this point, losing my best friend, I am feeling like there is nothing left for me. I am useless, feeling like I can no longer survive because I have let everyone down. I would rather be dead then to live through loosing a more friends and their families that I get close too. My family will be able to go to relatives since they are with their dad and grandma house already. They will not miss there mother at all. “God please take me now so I do not have to finish going through all this, and you can give back my best friend and her kids their lives back,” as I am crying out loud! If I have to live give me a sign and I will go back in and live for my family, and for what Linda would have wanted me to do. One other thing you'll want to focus on is tense. You go back and forth between past and present tense. It is best that you stick with one, as to avoid confusion. The last thing you want is someone to not read your story because he/she is trying to figure out the difference between the present and the past. A suggestion to allow the reader the more clearly see a repeated line in the story is to separate it out into a new paragraph, all on its own. That line, "The thunder went night-night," could be drawn out of the long paragraph and into its own. As far as WDC items go, you might want to double space between paragraphs to clarify where one ends and another begins. Thanks for sharing this story. I hope to read more in the near future |
| Ty called so I am happy....He said that he was going to call tomorrow or Monday...I can't wait to talk to him...it was fun to talk to him tonight...of course the kids were up....and this did not help...so Hopefully I will try to call him instead.... Well I guess it is time to get off of here soon...since I am starting to see the lightening soon...now I wish that I could find the other story I was going to read that was plugged on the im console...will have to go see if anyone was on there earlier to see if they have it.... Off to bed I go to...I sure hope that I am going to get the rest of my deposit and the last months rent here paid asap...I have to start packing too... |
| You know that you should not ever feel bad about being small...whether you are because of surgery or because that is what your genes blessed you...I too have some on the small side and I was told anything more than a handful is too much... I am had very low self esteem...so I very concious about my body...then I every guy I would talk to online that was asking about my body size and breast size if they were perky or not...if they were not, they were more than a handful how big... if I asked why...they would always say that more than a handful was too much... So I agree that small and a handful and someone who loves you and your scar is great.... Love always to all, Veronica R. Adams A.K.A. Lucasmom2000 |
| "You find out that your ex has finally started dating and he deny's it when the person who tells you this is your bestfriend...he says it was his mom in the car...rolling my eyes...I am not even upset or jealous...or am I?" |
| it is called the 6th sense...yours happens to be a little psychic...I am like that with dreams I have, and both my grandmothers---maternal and paternal were the same way...just use it for the good stuff not anymore than that... |
| Watching the Journal Seeing everyone's entries, Some funny, some not Some personal & confused Creative writer I am! |
| one you wake up not feeling good...two you go to take stuff out of a bag to put things away and you find out that the cheese that you never made home it, was bale to get it again...was never put in the refrigerator....Three my kids as ususal are not behaving...nothing new there...the cheese makes me mad because I was looking forward to having a sandwhich with that kind of cheese today...oh welll... |
| That is a cute story...sorry that you were having a bad day....I do hope that it gets better...I am that clumsy too...I know what it is like to have a day like this... |
| MIa--I totally understand where you are coming from...it is hard to please everyone..so only do what you want...if everyone brings up just remove yourself from the situation... I personally just start up a whole knew conversation or just leave... I am not here to please anyone else but myself and my kids....I do everything I can provide my kids and myself, nothing more nothing less.... Goodluck with your time by yourkself...enjoy the summer of not having to study for tests, turn in papers, study finals, and anything else you have to do...Enjoy working only for bills...then later on go find your career... As for Marriage, take all the time you need...I thought at 24 it was to early to have a child and then changing my whole life and then finding our that I pregnant again after warnds and then getting married...Now divorced, but still get along with my ex and we have been friends for 10 years now...we will always love each other for our kids, and we will still have a friendship always.... But for marriage...Never going to have happen for me again...Think that you should not have to have a ring and a certificate to tell you that you love someone and have to be with them the rest of your life...same thing with vows... From me: you just enjoy your life and do not worry about anything else... |
| Tanka is about a person's feelings; what they feel passionate about. It has 5 lines of 31 syllables in total. These are split as follows: 5-7-5-7-7 |
| Tanka is about a person's feelings; what they feel passionate about. It has 5 lines of 31 syllables in total. These are split as follows: 5-7-5-7-7 Renga is a two person poem, where one person writes a couple of lines, and the next person follows on. Great for collaboration! Its format is the same as tanka. Haibun is a mixture of both prose and poetry. Similar to haiku but slightly longer. Its subject deals with every day life and feelings but is written objectively. These are merely potted explanations. There's plenty of articles on the internet about Japanese verse. A very good book with clear explanations is Haiku: A North American Anthology by Bruce Ross. I am glad that you had these...I had them at one time and used the tanka form once...if you do not want me to have these I can remove them...I have a fascination with haiku's and all japanese poetry...since in so few words you can paint a picture with a lot of description and imagery... Love always to all, Veronica R. Adams A.K.A. Lucasmom2000 |
| This class is going to be fun...I can tell now...great teachers make a class great...I hope to continue taking classes in socialogy and psychology now... |
| Because I fucking can, I pity the fool. Victory, Damaged Goods, and the Raw Truth Shall Be Yours. I dare you, Saturday June 3 I really like how this has changed a little bit with adding all the topics together...I am glad to find new thing to have poetic devices and short stories..... TO me this is just a cool thing to try out..thinking now what i can go and try to do this with...going to look at my poems and see if I can make a new thing from them... |
| wow this was great...I am glad you are you...isuffer from BPD...and went through the whole abuse thing..hope that what you caught from your cheating boyfriend was not to deadly...I hope that you are able to suppress with meds...hope that you are able to have children that will make blessed..they are our only happiness... |
| I am so happy it is raining...my arthritis is hurting but I am not stiff like I was yesterday...glad that my ac was finally fixed too...guess I should actually pack some today...trying to figure out where I am going to start first...kids will start with me tomorrow... |
| Well I am glad to know that your Memorial Day went well for the kids and they were able to bring some happiness....I hope that you are able to get back into the doctors...hoping it is just a virus and not brochontis... |
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Veronica dear you have alot of drive dear to be even crawling out of bed to redo anything, Sorry I can't get you any advice, I have never made anything like that. HUGS! Ann.
But yes, I walk around naked most days - even the day I forgot that Duck had taken down the blinds to replace them and the new blinds didn't fit... over the big picture window that faces the neighbor's house. I love having my own house for that very reason - I don't have to worry about it. *shrugs* I just hope pictures don't end up on the internet! 
Navigating in the dark can be quite dangerous!