October Novel Prep Challenge

Here's the link for Day Nine: It starts off well, but then i deviate... I need a better climax!

"Invalid Entry" 

Oh and I also finally took a snapshot of Challenge five and uploaded it!

I'm copying the rest of the items from paper to pixel

About the Antagonist... My Antagonist was first the city, Karachi, personified. Fast and ruthless, thats how described it in the character sketch. But then as I wrote the outline for 9th, I realised I needed more of an antagonist in the story, like a situation, because otherwise the story would be too dull.... So I have my October 8th entry, which I want to completely re-write.

In other words, it's too late to post it as a contest entry.... I''ll be done today but it'll be past noon.

Right now working on Challenge 12 too...

~*~ Leo ~*~
- Imperfection is the key to true beauty!